This is the twelfth part of a fiction serial, in 1188 words.
As Lucy turned off Mafeking Avenue into Waterloo Close, she had to stop dead. The end of the close was cordoned off, and full of police cars that blocked anything entering or leaving. A short policewoman walked over to the window and told her, “Sorry madam, this road is closed, due to an incident”. Lucy smiled and replied, “But I live here. Number nine, the last house on this side”. The policewoman walked away a few paces and spoke into her radio for a moment, before returning. “That’s alright then. But you will have to leave your car here on the corner for now”. Lucy straightened up the car, and parked it closer to the kerb, wondering what what going on.
She left her case in the boot, and grabbing her handbag, hurried down to the house. The policewoman had radioed ahead, so other officers lifted the tape for her as she got closer. Next to the tape, a few journalists and photographers started to shout out to her, but she couldn’t make out what they were asking, and carried on into the house. Alex was standing by the window, and smiled at his wife as she came into the room. “Alex, what’s going on? What’s happened?” Her face was flushed, and she kept looking around, as if expecting someone else to be there. He spoke as he turned back to look out of the window. “Something bad seems to have happened at the Sinclairs. Quite the circus, isn’t it? Oh, did you and Claire have a nice time in the city? I expect the police will be along to talk to us soon. They said they would”. Lucy sat down heavily on an armchair, and blew the air out of her cheeks.
Tom Henderson found the flimsy white over-suit restricting, and the shoe-covers slopped around as he walked. Everyone had turned up now, including Inspector Mullins. Crime scene people were taking fingerprints and blood samples, the search team guys were doing a detailed fingertip of the back garden, and photographers were everywhere, snapping away. Sally Wilcox was hovering around the Inspector spouting textbook phrases, and Superintendent Parvinder Singh was on his way from the city. Tom always thought that his turban suited him, a nice dark blue that matched his dress uniform. He wondered if he would have a different colour today, as he would obviously be in plain clothes. Jean Sinclair had been given a sedative by her family doctor, who had been happy to attend. And then her and her husband had been taken to a small hotel in the town, as the house would be turned upside down, and they couldn’t stay there tonight.
Don sat on the edge of the bed as his wife slept soundly next to him. Whatever Doctor Barnes had given her had worked well, as she was out for the count. His heartbreak had been replaced by anger, when they made him and Jean get changed, then took their fingerprints, before asking for the shoes and the clothes they had been wearing, then placing them in huge brown bags marked ‘EVIDENCE’. How the hell could they be evidence? It seemed to Don that they were now some sort of suspects, instead of being the people whose son had just been murdered. They sent a policeman along who said he was a Family Liaison Officer, and would stay with them. But Don was so angry, he had asked him to leave the room. Placing his head in his hands, he wondered how they would ever get past this. He felt cold from the shock of it all, and his legs started to tremble uncontrollably.
The doorbell made Lucy jump. She had been deep in thought, trying to work out a feasible story in her head, with little success. If the police asked her where she had been, what would she say? There had been no Weight-Watchers franchise conference in the city, as far as she knew, and Claire didn’t exist, just someone she had invented to cover her frequent lateness and absences. Alex answered the door to a uniformed policeman, and invited him in. He carried a clipboard, and declined the offer of tea or coffee, as well as the invitation to sit on the sofa. “Just some routine questions for now, if that’s OK”. Alex smiled, and the man went through his check-list. Names, dates of birth, occupations, places of work, contact phone numbers, car types and registration numbers. When Lucy told him she had just got back from a weekend away, he asked when she had left, and noted down the times. Then he asked Alex if he had heard or seen anything unusual since Friday morning. ” Friday I was at work until around six, officer, then when I got home, I didn’t see anyone, or hear anything out of the ordinary. On Saturday, I did some gardening, then went to the Golf Club to play nine holes. Oh, and I stayed on to have dinner with a friend. When I got back, around eleven I think, I didn’t see or hear anyone or anything. What has actually happened? We are naturally worried about our neighbours”. The officer closed the flap over his clipboard, preparing to leave. “All I can say for now is that there has been an incident, and the house is being treated as a crime scene. Thanks for your cooperation”.
Tom was sent away before Superintendent Singh turned up. The Inspector told him to get off and get busy checking on the whereabouts of all known burglars in the town. “Shake them up, Tom. See if they have alibis, and let them know we’re not messing about. Get the word out, this is the murder of a simple, defenceless boy, and they had better start giving us some information”. Tom had nodded, and walked back to his car, pulling off the papery oversuit before he got in it.
Sergeant Sally Wilcox made sure she was the first one to greet Superintendent Singh when he arrived. As he walked through the cordon, he nodded at her. “What have you got, Sally?” His tone was in the usual businesslike manner he was know for. She had her short speech prepared. “I would say it’s a burglary gone wrong, sir. Matey enters through the unlocked patio doors, and starts to spin the living room. The teenage boy is alone in the house, and must hear him. Comes downstairs, a fight breaks out, and the burglar uses a leg of the broken chair to club him. But the medical examiner says he was strangled too, so I’m guessing he put up a fight after being hit on the head. Mum and Dad are with an FLO at Meadow House Hotel. They haven’t had a chance to tell us if anything’s missing yet. Time of death estimated as Friday evening, around seven. That will be confirmed later, after the post-mortem. Uniforms are doing a house-to house, and we have two detectives on CCTV recovery”.
The Superintendent nodded. “Nice work so far, Sally. Now, let’s go and have a look”.
To be continued…
Mmmm. Complications for everybody involved.
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Trying to show some procedure in this episode, Olga.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Tsk tsk Lucy. Something always goes wrong doesn’t it?
Plan your little tryst down to the last detail and the neighbor gets murdered.
🙂
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I’m hoping things will improve for Lucy down the line, Frank. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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one must notice that Alex seems to be the only one so calm and collected. he cannot contain his pleasure if you will. his smile in greeting the officer and the narration of his whereabouts. overly prepared i think…
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Alex is indeed unduly calm and collected. But that is his nature, and how he approaches everything. So, not out of character for him, if strange to others perhaps. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Alex seemed too eager to share all the details of his weekend. I wouldn’t have been able to rattle all my comings and goings so easily.
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That’s very true, Elizabeth. But he was well-prepared. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I am so hooked on this and not even trying to figure out the conclusion-and you never fail to surprise me. This I think is your best yet. Look for your post FIRST everyday!
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Thanks, Michele. It makes me really happy to hear that you are enjoying it so much
Best wishes, Pete. 🙂
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I am really hungry for more!! you are so welcome
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Great post 🙂 I am really intrigued by this Lucy character and can’t wait to see how she handles each new situation. Anyway, keep up the great work as always 🙂
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Some women spend their lives being overlooked and sidelined, based on their weight, their looks, or their jobs. Lucy will hopefully show that there is more to her character than not being conventionally attractive. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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This whole read was beyond fascinating!😀 Bravo Pete!👏
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Thanks for sticking with it, Dani. I am so pleased that you got the chance to read it so far.
Best wishes, Pete. xx
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I’m getting anxious for Lucy!
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I can understand why, Kim. But we have seen that she can stand up and be counted, when the need arises. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Lets hope, Pete! You are the writer. 😉 Michael
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All the little and big secrets are going to have to leak out now, eh?
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Secrets have a way of getting out, GP. At least in my experience they do. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I think we’d best not lie unless we have fantastic memories – one lie leads to another and you’ve got to keep them straight.
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One of my complaints about murder mysteries is the victim’s families never get coverage. We never get to see the impact on those the murder leaves to suffer a real loss. Kudos to you for the beginning of proper coverage of the loved ones’ reactions and pain. Yes, you are covering all threads as this story moves on.
Warmest regards, Theo
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It often seems to me that the Police go with the traditional options at the outset. As family members are responsible for a huge percentage of murders in the UK, they are usually treated as suspects first, and victims much later. I think it is important to consider this crime more from the impact it has on the family, and those responsible for solving it, than to focus on the killer. His job is to await discovery, if it turns out that way.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I like the approach. None-the-less he does have roles to play in what happens with his wife and how he interacts with others while he waits, and as you have suggested in what you have written, watches. He has the makings of wanting to tell everyone how clever he is.
Warmest regards, Theo
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He has a long way to go yet, and will feature a lot more. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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You are well on the way to this being a novella at the very least 🙂
Warmest regards, Theo
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If I give it free rein, it could be a book. But I will try not to let it get bogged down. 🙂
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Just don’t confuse length with bogged down.
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I don’t think the authorities have any reason to check out Lucy’s story, and Eduardo wouldn’t be all that anxious to provide an alibi if they did look into her story. But since Alex seems to be in top form, I still think that Lucy and Eduardo are somehow going to play a role in the solving of this case.
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That’s interesting David. You must remember that CCTV security camera use in this country is huge, with greater coverage than anywhere else in the world. Roads have it, hotels certainly have it, and if you put a car registration number into the system, it can locate it. Lucy had better get her story straight, I think. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh, dear. looks like Lucy’s secret affair is going to come out. I wonder what Alex will do then?
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I’m a bit worried too, Jude. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Ooooh….
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Ooooh indeed, Sue. 🙂
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But I don’t want Lucy in trouble….I hope she is honest about her whereabouts with the police, but that Alex doesn’t get to know…..
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Such things do have a habit of getting out, unfortunately. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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True enough!!
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Nice thickening of the plot. It’s branching off but I’m still focused on Tom and Alex and Lucy. Thanks for giving us this serial.
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They will remain as the core characters, Pam. No too many more need to appear now. 🙂
Glad to hear that you are still enjoying it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Seems like there will be more character development on Singh and Sally Wilcox? Alex is too smooth, Lucy is a wreck, and I still have hopes for Tom. Excellent episode, Pete.
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Thanks, Jennie. Sally is indeed a busy woman. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes!
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This Superintendent Singh seems to be a very clever man. I rely on him that he will grab Alex by his eggs.
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He is an experienced detective, Kerin. But I suspect he likes to give the real work to his juniors. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Gosh, Alex is a very good actor. This is getting fascinating Pete.
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Thanks, Arlene. I am really pleased that you are enjoying it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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