This is a short story, in 1395 words.
It was prompted the above photo, sent to me by Jeanne Owens.
https://jeanneowens.weebly.com/
I had watched them go for a long time. They marched past the house carrying the state flag, or the Stars and Bars. Seemed like there wasn’t a man left in the whole of Georgia. At first, people had turned out to watch, and a band played them off to the train, or walked in front of the wagons. I would run back inside and ask Momma, “When can I go, Momma? How soon?” She would wipe her hands on her apron, and stroke my hair. “It’ll all be over, time you’re growed up enough, James. Anyhow, who would help me with the chickens?”
Daddy had already gone, in sixty-one. Momma cried, but he had stood tall, and set his jaw. “Can’t anyone be thinking Ethan Holt is afeared of going, Grace. I gotta go, and you know that”. Tyler was next, soon as he turned sixteen. Oh, how Momma cried. She clung on to Priscilla, and my sister wept too. But I was watching from the gate, waving goodbye to my brother. Later, they came to the house and said he was killed some place in Tennessee. Reverend Cain called it Shiloh, said General Johnston got killed there too.
Sure, I had heard mention of a place called Tennessee, but had no notion where it was at the time.
The following year, Daddy came home. I hardly recognised him. He looked mighty old, more like Grandpa had looked before he died. He came walking down the dirt road using a crutch. At first, I thought it might just be a stranger, looking for food or water. But then I saw the man looked a lot like Daddy, and he had no leg on the right side. Momma and Priscilla cried a lot that night, and I listened to them talking. He had been in a big battle, at a place called Chancellorsville. They said after that General Bobby Lee had won that good. But it cost Daddy his leg, and most of his friends too.
Some old men came to the house, and Daddy sat with them on the porch, smoking pipes, and drinking whiskey. He told them his leg hurt awful bad still, and he wasn’t going to be able to manage the plough. Mr Deakins was looking sad. His two sons had both been killed alongside Tyler, and he never settled in himself after that. “They say this war’s about slaves. I don’t get it. We ain’t got no slaves, and most of us barely manage to get by. My boys and your Tyler went to fight the Yankees for Georgia, not for slaves. They went for the cause, nothing more. You didn’t leave your leg up in Virginia for no slaves, did you Ethan? Daddy puffed on his pipe. “Sure didn’t. That’s the plain truth”.
One day some riders came. They had a horse and cart too, with three boys sitting in back. They took out a paper, and asked Momma if James Jerome Holt was home. She tried to pretend I wasn’t there, but they could see me feeding the chickens. “Is that him, Ma’am?” Momma helped Daddy come out onto the porch.
“What do you want with my boy, Captain? He ain’t but twelve years old”. The elderly officer removed his hat. “Sir, your boy has to come with us, The Army needs him. We are taking all the able bodied young men we can get. It’s the law now, says so on this paper here”. Momma started crying, Priscilla came outside to see what was going on, and Daddy was holding on to the rail. “I already lost my oldest, in sixty-two. I left my best leg in Virginia, fighting for General Lee. Now if you take my boy, how I am I gonna manage this here farm?”
The officer looked at the shabby plot that Daddy called his farm, and put his hat back on. “Well sir, I reckon you and your wife and daughter will have to manage. There’s still a war to fight. Now why don’t someone get his things together, and let’s not have any ructions”.
I was excited, finally getting to go. I would fight for the cause, and one day would sit and tell stories about it to my own children. Before there was any more talking, I climbed up into the cart, smiling at George Harper, a local boy I knew. Momma brought Daddy’s old canvas bag, and handed it up to me, wiping away tears. “There’s a fresh shirt in there, son, and I put in six eggs and some of yesterday’s bread. Don’t squash them now”.
It wasn’t much of a send off, with Mom and Priscilla in tears, and Daddy leaning against the post, his head in his hands.
Maybe I was expecting to be sent to a camp. That seemed to me what would happen. I was definitely expecting to get a grey uniform, and my own rifle, then perhaps be on a train heading north, to see something of the country. When the cart got to town, we were sent to report to an officer. George didn’t even have shoes, and one of the other boys looked so sickly thin, the officer told him to go home. He called a man over to take us away, said we were in the artillery now. The man still wore an old uniform and cap, with a pistol stuffed in his belt. He pointed to the red patches on his sleeves. “See here boys, that’s artillery”. He walked us over to a small gun on wheels, and patted the barrel. “She’s old, but still shoots fine”.
The other men were wearing homespun clothes in a brown colour. They grinned at us as we stood around awkwardly. One yelled out “Hey, Virgil, you been home and got your kids to come and fight?” The man turned and yelled back. “Reckon you can still call me sergeant, William. War ain’t done yet”. I decided to ask something that was on my mind. “Sergeant, I ain’t never fired no cannon. Are you gonna show us how?” He put his hand on my shoulder, and shook his head. “Don’t worry, you’ll be learning on the job. You two boys won’t have to fire nothing, just bring the balls and charges when I tell you”. I was relieved to hear that, and smiled. “So are we going to the war on a train?”
I had never been on a train.
Taking off his cap, he ran a hand over his thinning hair. “Where you been boy, in a cave? There’s no trains, Sherman’s boys ripped up all the tracks. And we won’t have to go to the war, it’s coming here. The blue-bellies already got to Columbus. We have to wait up by the creek, in case we have to go help General Cobb.” I knew that was the biggest city close to home, but it was still a good long way from town.
Seemed funny to me, to be somewhere I knew. When we got down to the spot overlooking the river, I remembered swimming there with Daddy when I was very small. Besides our cannon, there were two others, spaced wide apart. In the shrubs and trees along the bank, infantry soldiers were lounging around, maybe less than ten dozen. The older men helped the sergeant set the gun so it was pointing where they wanted, across at the other bank. Then I remembered the eggs and bread, and a man cooked them on a metal tray over the fire. Only one had got cracked, so I said I would have that one. Late that afternoon, a cavalry trooper rode in. He was wearing a real smart grey uniform, and had a black feather in his cap band.
My sergeant went over to talk to him, along with another man they said was the major. When he got back, I thought he looked like he had been crying.
“It’s all over boys. Just got the news. Said Bobby Lee surrendered the army over a week ago, up in Virginia. We can all go home”. I was confused, and looked back at George, who was smiling and dancing a little jig. I spoke up. “Sergeant, what about the cannon?” He glanced over at his old gun.
“Reckon we’ll just leave it here boy”.
Great story, Pete. It matches the photo prompt perfectly. You do a fine job at being a southerner and an historian. Many thanks!
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Thanks, Jennie. I thought it worked with that photo. Could have been either side, but I chose a Confederate.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes, it could have been either side. You did it well. I think you like the southern America challenge. π
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All those years reading about the Civil War and listening to Shelby Foote, Jennie. π
Shelby speaks how I always imagine a ‘Southern gentleman’ would talk.
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Yes!
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You did the work and it shows. That war is still haunting us-, in some ways. All war is tragic-and usually senseless. The US civil war is sad for a lot of reasons, To think the generations before them sacrificed and left all to work together to build a new country-now the future generations, killed one another in mass-well, it is heartbreaking. Good story and I am so glad that boy went home to his mama!
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Thanks, Michele. I have always been struck by how that war never truly ended.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Me too!! It was a horrible time for all-and so tragic in every way.
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Another stupid civil war, that in some ways is still being played out.
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I agree. The shooting might have stopped in 1865, but the bitterness never went away.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Great story, Pete! Had me wondering what would happen to poor James.
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Glad it worked for you, Jeanne. π
I had to set it around your photo, but even given that restriction, I think I did the best I could.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Fine story, fine weaving through the sad history of a war that should never have been. I often think they should have left the South go it’s own way.
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Yes, maybe it might be better if the US had ended up as two countries, not unlike India and Pakistan.
Thanks, Don.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I am always saddened by the stories of the poor white farmers who owned no slaves yet ended up being killed by the score. They were swept up in believing that the wealthy men had their interests at heart. Sounds a little familiar right about now in this country.
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Thanks, Elizabeth. I think that applied to at least 95% of the Confederate soldiers.
And now their ancestors are supporting a very different ’cause’.
Best wishes, Pete.
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A very sad time once the racists took it as a banner and started erecting statues in the late 1800’s.
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In many ways, that war never really ended.
Best wishes, Pete.
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That is what I figure also.
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(1) Ethan Holt was lucky. The Battle of Chancellorsville nearly cost him an arm and a leg.
(2) Reverend Cain often said Grace before dinner: “Bless this food…” Ethan Holt often said Grace before dinner, too: “Grace, you done overcooked the venison again!”
(3) Ethan didn’t leave his leg up in Virginia. He had Georgia on his mind, and that evoked an image of his wife, Grace. So he withdrew his leg (the third one), paid the fee, and left the brothel.
(4) Also, Ethan remembered what Grace had told him: “Stay outta trouble, ya hear? I don’t wanna hear about you havin’ a ruction!” (She was concerned about his legacy.)
(5) When Ethan entered the brothel, he was nonetheless prepared to shoot the cannon. When the sweet dove assigned to him passed by, she said, “Be with you shortly.” Ethan asked, “What about my clothes?” To which she replied, “Just bring the balls and charges when I tell you.”
(6) “The blue-bellies already got to Columbus.” But Virgil was wrong. Columbus had locked the mutineers out of his cabin, and was determined to stay the course, come hell or high water!
(7) After debarking from the Santa MarΓa, a sly native on the beach greeted Columbus and his crew. “Welcome to Ohio!”
(8) Robert E. Lee eventually visited the Holt family. Grace took her daughter aside and said, “Priscilla, impress Lee!” But Priscilla refused, saying, “Momma, don’t step on my blue suede shoes!”
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You went ‘through the card’ today, David!
1492, Presley, Brothels. Your imagination knows no bounds!
I think you should write these stories in future. π
Best wishes, Pete.
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Excellent writing and great story.
I liked the ending
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Thanks, Margie. It was an unhappy war, so I wanted James to have a happy ending. π
Best wishes, Pete.
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Another great story, Pete. I think you should put them all together and publish the collection.
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Thanks very much, Mary.
Maybe one day. π
Best wishes, Pete.
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I held my breath all the way through, thought for sure weβd lose James! Well done Pete, love the way you weave a story!
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Thanks, Cheryl. I have killed off so many characters lately, I thought James deserved a reprieve. π
Best wishes, Pete.
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Good one Pete, for a moment I thought you would kill him off!
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I’m being good so far this week. π
Best wishes, Pete.
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It wonβt last π€£
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You have studied our Civil War. Good job, Pete.
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Thanks, GP. It has been an interest of mine since I was young. Along with our own civil wars, and the one in Spain.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Bravo Pete. Youβve captured the time and setting perfectly.
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Thanks, Kim. My interest in the US civil war undoubtedly helped with this one.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Lucky escape for James. Cheers, Jon.
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He was lucky. A lot of fighting went on after the surrender, as some units hadn’t heard the news.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Indeed, a lot of fighting did take place after the Battle of the Appomattox Court House. Sometimes, i wonder if it ever really ended. Warmest regards, Theo
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I can see why you would ask that, Theo.
Bitterness endures.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh, well told,Pete
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Thanks very much, Sue. Glad you liked it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yet another different one from you, Pete!
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