This is the first part of a fiction serial, in 820 words.
In my mind, I always called it the block. But it was known to the outside world as Spencer House, a boring block of flats at the edge of a much larger estate. Unlike the nearby tower blocks, Spencer House was small. Just six floors, with two flats on each one. At least the height guaranteed it had a lift, which saved walking up the stairs. The other big difference was that it was not owned by the local council. Everyone who lived there either owned their flat, or rented privately from whoever had bought it. That gave it a modicum of class, which was sadly not reflected by its outward appearance.
At one time, the small balconies would have been a blaze of colour, window boxes full of bright geranuims, or whatever was cheap at the garden centre. Recent years had attracted owners and tenants with little interest in horticulture, and the best on offer was somone’s washing, drying on a few pegs clipped to a short line or wire stretched across the space. Despite the ridiculous cost of buying one of the flats at the time, you would never know that any of the residents had a pot to piss in.
Still, the service charges paid for a cleaner to mop the staircases, and entrance hall. The entryphone system guaranteed no random visitors or criminal elements, and the lift was maintained to a good standard. Just as well, as I lived on the sixth floor. At one time, I knew a few names, and would even stop to chat on my way in or out. But then that became nods, or an occasional “How you doing?” With a high turnover in the rented properties, I hardly recognised a lot of the people coming and going, and became convinced that tenants were sub-letting. And those sub-letters were likely doing the same.
In the absence of familiar faces and names, I started to give them my own names, just in my head of course. ‘Frizzy-Haired Sexy Girl’. ‘Fat Bald Bloke’, ‘Loud Couple From Second Floor’. I had names for them all by the end.
The trouble really started over the parking spaces. When the block was built, I presume they wanted to save money on land, or thought everyone would have just one car. So they built a parking area outside, with just twelve spaces. But they didn’t bother to number them, just painted white lines that left a gap about the size of an average car. Well, we all know that most couples have two cars these days. Even a single Mum with a teenage kid might have two cars as well. And then there was ‘Middle-Aged Biker Man’, who wanted to use his space to park his sad little fake Harley in, as well as his sporty hatchback..
I never told anyone, but I was probably the only one living there who didn’t have a car.
One weekend, Fat Bald Bloke reversed his van into the motorbike. Whether this was accidental or intentional, I never found out. But I heard the shouting all the way up in my flat, and went out onto the balcony to look down on the fun. The bike was on its side, and Middle-Aged Biker Man was waving his arms around, looking a bit like a mushroom in his American-style crash helmet. Fat Bald Bloke gave him the finger, climbed back in his van, and drove off. I enjoyed watching Biker Man trying to lift his bike back up level, and even timed how long it took him.
Seven minutes.
Then I spotted Possible Junkie walking toward the entrance carrying two blue plastic bags. He had obviously come from Vijay’s shop near the precinct, as Vijay always gave out those bags for free, even if you only bought a Snickers or something. Possible Junkie looked like he had never eaten anything. You could see the bone structure of his face and head, and count the individual bones of his hands. He wore skinny jeans so narrow, I had come to the conclusion that it was impossible to ever remove them. I was sure that only a heroin addict could exist being that thin, fuelled solely by drugs and cans of cider. He could have got a job as a skeleton, every Halloween.
The drilling woke me up early that Sunday morning.
Biker Man was standing watching two guys drilling into the tarmac on the corners of his parking space. Well, the space he always insisted was his anyway. I made some tea and toast and went back out onto the balcony to watch. They were bolting metal posts into the corners of the space, and judging by the rolled up heavy chain next to them, it seemed to me that Biker Man was about to fence off his space with chains. I gave a low whistle, and smiled.
Fat Bald Bloke was not going to like that one bit.
I’m in… only another 23 episodes to go before I’m up to date. Hope you’re not writing too quickly!!
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One part a day, but it is almost at the end.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh, this is good!
I look forward to the next chapter!
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Thanks for coming aboard with this new serial, Margie. It is a very ‘London’ story. Let me know if there is anything you might not fully grasp because of that. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Uh oh! This is interesting, Pete.
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Random events in communal living can have a knock-on effect, in my experience. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes, they can. 🙂
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I love it already. Anna Quindlen wrote a fun book called “Alternate Side” about parking on a block in New York City and all the characters. I will enjoy reading your take on a similar situation.
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I hadn’t heard about that author, Elizabeth. I hope that you enjoy my take on living in Central London. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Very much so.
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Its a so real made beginning. In France they would call it Banlieus. Michael
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Thanks, Michael. It is based on (my) experience of living in a large apartment block in London. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh! But i think these block are very different to the French Banlieus.
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A time long ago (the 1980s) in a place far away (in the Panhandle of Florida) a friend and I were walking in a Park of a small town. We knew no one and as we noticed the goings-on we referred to people by characteristics much as the voice of the sixth-floor narrator in this story. the story brought back that afternoon. thank you. Warmest regards, Theo
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Thanks, Theo. That comes from me of course. I use it all the time to refer to dog walkers and neighbours who I do not know well. ‘Jenny two-dogs’, ‘Mister Grumpy Husky’, and so on. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Funny, I thought the friend I was with was Jim Stachura, was it really you? 🙂 Warmest regards, Theo
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Really enjoyed this one Pete. So true to life but very funny too. X
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Thanks, Lorraine. More to come in this serial. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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I am enjoying this one. Got a bit lost in the last one lol
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This is going to be good 🙂
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I hope so.
Cheers mate, Pete.
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Alright, Pete. Laughing like crazy and waiting on the next post.
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Glad you like this one so far.
Thanks, Don.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I’m already hooked.
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Always glad to hear that, Mary. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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(1) I wonder if there’s a female flat owner who’s as flat as a pancake, and what name might be given her—Board Broad? And might she be related to Anna Grammy?
(2) Our bright geraniums grow in the dumbest places.
(3) The U.S. Navy routinely delivers sub-letters, but requires the paper to have an official watermark.
(4) Popular block holiday song: 🎵All I want for Christmas is my two parking spaces🎵
(5) Possible Junkie’s actual name is Jack Skellington. Heroin gives him nightmares.
(6) Possible Junkie’s druggie amigo, Definite Pothead, smokes pot—but doesn’t have a pot to piss in.
(7) Shroomers don’t realize they’re riding a sad little fake Harley. Convinced they’re riding a hog with a classic winged logo, they actually believe their bike can fly: “Hey, look! I’m Flying Freddie!”
(8) The rumor will spread quickly that Middle-Aged Biker Man has privatized his parking space. I’m looking forward to the chain reaction.
NOTE: I immediately thought of “Rear Window.” But, clearly, so did others. That’s why I didn’t grace this chapter with any cinematically paneful puns.
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Well, you managed a Tim Burton one. 🙂
If this was a Hitchcock film, it would have to be called ‘Top Balcony’.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Love your in-depth analysis of all aspects of this story – as entertaining as Pete’s story and that is saying a lot as this is a great piece right out of the gate!
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Okay, I’m in this time. I fell behind in the last serial and finally gave up, Pete. I’ve already taken a liking to Fat Bald Bloke. He must be a real heartbreaker with the ladies.🤣
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He has a girlfriend/wife too, Pete. She appears soon. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I can hardly wait to hear her name.😎
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Living in an apartment now, I’m definitely interested Pete!😁
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I’m sure that your ‘block’ will be nothing like this one, Kim. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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We have one neighbor right above us who we’ve had noise issues with, but the property manager spoke with him and he’s quieted down. Otherwise, our neighbors are sooo nice!
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I had noisy neighbours above me for fiveyears. They received letters from the management, and were even threatened with legal action. I was glad to get away from there to Beetley.
Best wishes, Pete.
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We’ve had 3 nights in a row now of peace and quiet, so fingers crossed.
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I like the feel of this, Pete. It’s got a bit of Rear Widow quality to it, from the working class perspective. It whets my appetite for a good story.
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Yes, I suppose it does feel a lot like ‘Rear Window’. It is very ‘London’ though, and definitely ‘working class’, even though the narrator owns his own expensive apartment.
Glad you are interested from the start.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Good start! Cheers, Jon.
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Thanks, Jon. Something very different to my last one. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Acute social perception as ever. As I’ve lived in an apartment block, it’s depressingly familiar. The misuse of balconies, the trouble over parking spaces. Every day of “lockdown”, I thank god that I’m not living in a flat without a garden, now, and feel sick with sympathy for those who are.
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Thanks, Pippa. I was going to base this on my last residence, in Camden. But that had 55 flats on five floors, and would have run to far too many episodes. 🙂
Best wishes as alays, Pete. x
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Gosh you are prolific! I envy you immensely for the wherewithal to keep posting new stories. Personally, I find I stay with your stories if they are shorter. Let me try to stay with this one, this time. 🙂
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I enjoy the discipline of serials, Cindy. But I don’t expect everyone to follow them, obviously. I have a lot less to do than most people, and I appreciate that. I had already written this in draft during the last serial, and wasn’t sure whether to go on with it.
Then I did. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Your avocation suits you! Have you wondered how you’d survive the hours of the day in retirement without this outlet? I wonder what on earth you’d do before blogging became an option.
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I suspect I might have watched a great many more films, Cindy. And I might have gone a lot further afield with Ollie. But no regrets so far. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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A new serial so soon already yipee! Excellent stuff, and no-one’s died yet! 🙂
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I wrote this first part a couple of weeks ago. I wasn’t sure I was going to go ahead with it. But I did! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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There’ll be trouble……
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Communal living can be stressful. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Indeed!
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