This is the second part of a fiction serial, in 787 words.
For a long time, baby Vera slept in an old drawer in the bedroom. Mrs Simmons had given it to Elsie, as she didn’t have enough clothes to fill her tallboy any longer. Once she was big enough to need her own bed, Albert bought one from a friend at work, and they carried it all the way from Deptford between them. Viv wasn’t happy though, as it meant she now had to share her small room with her little sister. But she knew better than to make too much fuss.
That was about the time of Vera’s first memories. The smell of her sister’s cheap perfume, used sparingly of course. Her stockings discarded on the floor after a night out with her friends, and the smell of tobacco smoke and vinegar that seemed to cling to all of her clothes. Happy memories too, of wearing Viv’s shoes when they were far too big, and rushing into the living room covered in the lipstick that she had found on the window ledge, everyone laughing at the sight of her.
She had only been one year old when Teddy came home on leave, so didn’t remember him. But she hadn’t let go of the toy camel he had brought for her for weeks. The next time he was back, she vaguely remembered the settee being pulled out for him to sleep on, and the smell of his socks when he took his shoes off.
One thing she never forgot was the Christmas when she was old enough to realise what was going on. Mrs Simmons let Albert put up the trestle table in her parlour, and everyone was there to eat a big capon, followed by a pudding that Clara had tended carefully for months. Vera had woken up to some presents at the end of her bed, including some new mittens, and a hand-made knitted dolly. There was even a small red wool stocking that had some Brazil nuts and a tangerine inside. Although there was no tree, paper decorations lined the walls, and little Vera thought it must be the best day of her life.
Vivian had a steady boyfriend by then, someone she had met in the queue outside the cinema. His name was Roy, and he had a habit of running a hand through his hair constantly. He came for Christmas dinner too. There were no grandparents though. Albert’s parents had died when he was a teenager, soon after each other. Elsie’s mum had been deserted by her husband long before the war, and had died the year before Vera was born. But what she didn’t know, she didn’t miss, and she had great fun watching them all trying to keep the paper hats on their heads as they laughed and joked. Auntie May was coming to visit on Boxing Day. Elsie’s older sister May had married well, and Vera had been told to expect something nice from her as a present.
As the rest of them enjoyed their beer or gin, and sung songs at the table, Vera was taken up to bed, soon asleep clutching her new doll.
Auntie May arrived the next afternoon. Her husband was called Derek, and he had a car. The older kids ran along the street behind it, keen to see where it was going to stop. As Derek and May got their things from inside, the kids stood on the running board and peered through the windows at the luxurious interior. Vera looked up at the aunt she hardly remembered, fascinated by the fox fur stole she was wearing around her shoulders. The dead animal’s head lolled to one side, and Vera was convinced it might suddenly come to life and bite her.
It was an awkward hour or two, and even little Vera could sense the strained atmosphere. She wasn’t to know that May considered herself above all this now, and was rather ashamed of her background. Derek talked to her dad about roses and fertilizer, then pretended to be interested in how the darts team was doing. When it was time for them to leave, no present had appeared. Then almost as an afterthought, May produced a large box, wrapped in bright paper. Elsie nodded at her daughter. “Open it, love. It’s for you”. Inside was a large doll in a cardboard box. It was a black doll, with curly black hair, and wearing a red and white check dress. Vera had to give her aunt a kiss to thank her, and wrinkled her nose at the strong perfume, and the taste of heavy face-powder.
She didn’t say anything of course, but she preferred the wool dolly her mum and dad had given her.
Love it 🙂
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Glad to hear you are enjoying it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I love anything set in this era Pete. Good story x
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Thanks, Lorraine. This serial is proving to be very popular.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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I am not surprised xx
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I enjoy your writing style. It’s so airy, and real and I like how you get a little glimpse into each family members lives.
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I am very grateful for your kind words, and glad to hear you are enjoying my story.
Best wishes, Pete.
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A charming tale of life back then…I remember the satsuma, nuts and a little sugar mouse in one of my dad’s socks I still carry on that tradition with my grandkids as I did my kids…
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Good to hear that. Thanks, Carol.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Of course she preferred the wooly doll. I love the character development, Pete. I’m hooked!
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Thanks very much, Jennie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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You are welcome, Pete.
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Gives a great insight into past times. With a visit of relatives, which maybe never changed during the decades. 😉 I remember similar. Thank you Pete! Best wishes, Michael
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That’s the idea, Michael. Nostalgia for all of us.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Back to the future. 😉
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(1) Bad citation: “For a long time, Vera Van Winkle slept in an old drawer in the bedroom.”
(2) Viv was admonished by her schoolteacher for writing her name backwards, and for claiming her name was a Roman numeral.
(3) When Vera jumped from the ledge of the second floor window, wearing bright red lipstick, she cried, “Catch me, Teddy!” That’s because Teddy bears responsibility for Vera’s risky behavior. (The reason for that is a bit fuzzy.)
(4) Vera remembers smelling Teddy’s socks when he took his shoes off. She also remembers Elsie using smelling salts to bring her back to her senses.
(5) When Albert brought out the capon, Vera said, “Al Capone?”
(6) Meanwhile, in Rio de Janeiro, a small child was treated to Christmas carols sung by Brazil nuts wearing red stockings.
(7) “Auntie May was coming to visit on Boxing Day.” Peter Parker stayed home, though, because he wanted to grill some steak on his new Weber.
(8) If you stand on a running board, don’t you get left behind?
(9) The dead fox LOL’d to one side, and sobbed to the other. Basically, it just wanted some attention.
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You went with a few weird ones tonight, David. 🙂
But thanks for ‘Al Capone’.
Best wishes, Pet.
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Great story underway Pete…really infusing the story with the essence of that era.
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Thanks, John. This is a much gentler tale that I am indeed trying to infuse with historical detail.
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Lovely, Pete. Although the location is different, it also reminds me of some of the stories I heard from my mother and my aunts. Beautifully observed.
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Thanks very much, Olga. Whether London, Paris, or Madrid, I think that era was much the same for the working classes in Europe.
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Smells are so evocative….
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I can still remember the smell of my Nan’s scullery. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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And I can remember my grandparent’s Cellar head, and the flowering currant
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Wonderful details Pete.
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Thanks very much, Kim. My part of London, less than 30 years before I was born. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Nice, Pete, I’m enjoying this and all the little domestic and family details.
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Happy to hear that, Mary. And no murders! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh, I can cope with the occasional murder, it’s the psychological terror I don’t like 🙂
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Love this Pete. How wonderfully you convey the details of the family and the time period.
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Thanks, very much, Susanne. It’s set around the same time as my Mum was a litle girl, so I tried to remember some of her stories. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Loving all the little details Pete.
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Glad you are. 🙂
(Your Horses post disappeared before I saw it, did you know?)
Best wishes, Pete.
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I was scheduling it for tomorrow and accidentally published it 🙄 it’ll be back in the morning 😊
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The memory of scent. I like your associations. Nice post.
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Thanks, Don. Many of my own memories are of smells. Everyone seemed to smell of something when I was young. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Aunt Mary’s shame is the kind of reaction to where one came from that has always baffled me. Perhaps it is because she did not get to where she thinks she did in an honest way. Perhaps. Warmest regards, Theo
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More about Aunt May later, Theo. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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