I have just published the complete version of my last serial, ‘Vera’s Life’. That story was very personal to me, as the characters were based on people I knew well; family, friends, and neighbours. It did not initially capture the imagination of many readers, though views built up halfway through, with some catching up on the parts they had missed previously. Unlike most of my stories, this wasn’t completely fictional, though I changed the names and jobs of some characters to avoid any unwanted direct comparison.
It was also my longest serial to date; a big ask for readers at forty episodes, though I kept the word count down in each one deliberately. Average views worked out at around eighty per episode, giving the serial a total number of views of 3,200. Comments were complimentary I am pleased to say, as many readers fortunately invested in my ‘real-life’ characters, and their hardships in London during the war years of 1939-1945. Historical dates and details were all fact-checked before being used, and I stuck to the time-line of real events during the war too.
I would like to thank everyone who stayed with the story to the end, and those who also shared on Twitter and any other social media.
Following my recent decision to cut back on the amount of posting I do on this blog, I will be taking an extended break from serialised fiction for the foreseeable future. It takes a lot of time to work out a serial in many parts, as well as the necessary note-taking and research required.
If any new followers would like to catch up with earlier stories, they are all available in the ‘Fiction’ category on my blog menu. Every serial has been compiled into a complete story, and there are numerous short stories and photo-prompt stories to find there too.
Another brilliant serial Pete (sorry its taken me so long to catch up!). I’ve said before that you’ve made me a fan of various genres. In my eyes, it takes an outstanding writer to captivate and broaden a readers mind, and you’ve opened my mind in more ways than I could have imagined! While I will miss your serials, I’m glad you’re putting yourself first and taking a break, I can only imagine all that brain-work is exhausting!
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Thanks for your kind words, dear Ami. I am having a break from them for now, but they will be back!
Hope all is going well with you?
Best wishes to you all, Pete.
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I will be much better in a few weeks time when little lady arrives! Currently feeling like a whale ๐
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I’m sure you will be a great mum! x
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Thank you ๐
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Just discovered your page, and I love your style!! Definitely gonna work may way through your last serial ๐
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Thanks very much. The serials are also available as complete stories, if you want to read them like that. Just type the story name into the search box.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thank you very much for this, Pete! I will reread over the next week. Its worth to do. In the past i had lost some episodes. Best wishes, Michael
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I hope you enjoy it as one complete story, Michael.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I am sure i will do so, Pete! Thank you for your efforts taking time for creating such a wonderful read.
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A break is a good thing, Pete. You don’t wan’t to get burned out. Perhaps the reason your recent serial was so good is because your characters were based on people you know. Vera was your finest serial! I enjoyed every one of the 40 episodes. Best to you, Pete. I hope Ollie is feeling better.
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Thanks, Jennie. Many people I knew well have appeared in other serials in ‘disguise’, but every character in Vera was based on a real person.
Best wishes, Pete.
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…which made it all the better. Best to you, Pete.
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I love your serials(except the serial killer one) and know how much work you put into them. I understand trying to balance life with blogging. I notice that during the pandemic people have been writing more frequently and so it is taking me more time to respond. I have trimmed my follow list a little to compensate.
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I was spending around six hours a day blogging, for most of this year. I didn’t get anything else done, so now have to cut back on screen time.
Best wishes, Pete.
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That explains how you were so prolific. I had wondered how much time you were taking.
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I had a routine of 3 hours in the morning, and 2-3 more in the late afternoon or evening. I enjoyed it, and didn’t resent the time. But it caused ‘issues’ in my home life.
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That makes sense.
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Sue will be disappointed but she knows about taking time AFK……chuq
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I will get back to them during the winter, I’m sure.
Best wishes, Pete.
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She does so enjoy your serials…..chuq
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I can imagine the work that goes into one of your serials, Pete. I’ve enjoyed nearly all of them. There are a couple of factors for me that determine whether I’m going to follow along;
1. How busy am I? Even though I’m retired, I’ve got my hands in a variety of things. I like being busy, but the tradeoff is I have to make time concessions. When I know that I’ve got a lot on my plate, I begin cutting things out of my blogging time. Reading a long series requires a fair time commitment, and usually, those are some of the first things that I remove. Don’t let that dissuade you. Your stories are terrific! That was the case with Vera. I knew I wouldn’t be able to keep up, so I took a break.
2. After the first couple of episodes, I’m usually on board with a series. There’s only been a couple that I gave way after starting. I’m probably not that different than many readers. Hook me early.
Enjoy the break!
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Thanks for your thoughts, Pete. In many cases, my serials use a ‘cliffhanger’ ending to each episode, in the hope of entertaining readers, and keeping them interested. With ‘Vera’s Life’, historical reality made this rather pointless. But it was a labour of love for me, something of a tribute to the community where I grew up.
Best wishes, Pete.
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you generously share your talent of writing which take a lot of work and dedication, Pete. i admire you for that. thank you. i wish i can keep up but i still hope to get to read Vera’s Life someday. ๐
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It’s hard to write a serial, and even harder to commit to the time to read one. I hope you read Vera’s Life one day. I think you will enjoy the family theme.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I’ve been impressed by your ability to write and post serial episodes every day for weeks. The only time I wrote a story and posted it in 7 parts, I made sure the whole thing was complete before posting the first one.
Vera’s story had the authenticity that’s hard to create by imagination alone. I think it was all the details of daily life that did it.
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Thanks, Audrey. Many of those details were my own daily life, until the early 1960s. The rest were supplied during my youth by every adult I ever encountered. I sat and listened.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Great post ๐ Of course take a break Pete – sometimes we all need it ๐ Nevertheless, not all of your blog entries have to be short stories – though we do love them even though I have not commented on them as much as I would like ๐ You can always talk about film or music If ever you want ๐ Either way, enjoy your break and keep up the great work as always ๐
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Thanks, john. Fiction took over my blog to some extent, and I may go back to including more films one day soon.
Best wishes, Pete.
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As you know I really enjoyed Vera. I can believe, though, it must have taken a huge amount of time checking the research and the timeline as well as the work in fictionalising things which really happened. I don’t blame you for wanting a break from the serials – though I’m quite sure an idea will pop into your head and we’ll be off again.
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I already have lots of ideas, Mary. They include a sequel to ‘Vera’s Life’ set twenty years later. But I have to force myself to cut down on blogging time for various reasons.
Good luck today, I’m thinking of you.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Ooh, yes, a sequel would be good – whenever you are ready ๐ Thanks for thinking of me today – just home. It’s been a long day so I may not catch up on everyone’s blogs today.
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You rest, Mary. Did you manage to watch ‘Des’ by the way? Tennant was on great form. (As were the rest of the cast members)
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes, I did. I thought it was excellent and of course it was still very fresh in my mind since reading the book. Did you watch the following night when they tried to work out what made him do what he did? I was a bit disappointed in that – but I suppose that’s because there really are no answers and we’ll never know.
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Yes, I did watch that documentary, Mary.
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I did wonder from time to time how much was real and how much was fiction. I did like the sotry and you made it authentic. Kudos. Warmest regards, Theo
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I just took a lot or ‘oral history’, and wove it into a serial. Glad you enjoyed it, Theo.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I will miss your stories Pete but I also think it’ll do you good to have a break from all that hard work and come back all fizzed up in winter. How is Ollie doing since his return from holiday?
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He’s still quite slow, FR. He doesn’t want much more than an hour out now before he either stops walking, or heads for home. At least he is still happy enough, and eating anything he’s given.
Best wishes, Pete.
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If he’s eating and pooping he’s doing fine, glad to hear it. ๐ for Ollie.
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It’s good to take a break, Pete. Otherwise you risk getting ‘burnt-out’ on the very idea of writing.
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I will be around the same, GP. Just posting a lot less, and cutting back on the long serials for a while.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Understood.
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You know how much I look forward to your serials Pete, so I have to be honest and say Iโm disappointed. However, given the amount of time and effort you put into these I completely understand.
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I may return to them once winter sets in, Kim. When it is dark at 3:30 in the afternoon, I can’t do much else but sit inside.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yay!๐
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Hi Pete, this serial does sound very interesting. I don’t generally read serialised stories on blogs as I struggle to find the time to read all the episodes every day. I have limited time for blogging. It is great to know that so many people do read them though. My efforts are always books that I publish.
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It is available in complete form now, Robbie. It is about Londoners before and during the war. Might be something like your ‘When The Bombs Fell’, which I have yet to read on my Kindle.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes, I saw your post of the complete story. I was thinking I’d print it out and read it like a book. Thanks for reading While the Bombs Fell. I need to write the second book but my writing style has changed so much in the past three years I’m struggling a bit to replicate the style.
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Sad to admit I haven’t read it, (as I said above) but I do have it ready on my Kindle.
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I give you a lot of credit for the writing you have done, Pete. It does take a great deal of preparation and dedication. I tend to go back and read once compiled since my ability to concentrate day to day has been impacted by the current state of affairs in this country and the world. I have missed some of your posts that are more about your daily life and personal remembrances. Vera is, however, on my list to read.
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If you get the chance to read it, I hope you enjoy it, Maggie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I will definitely let you know, Pete.
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I really enjoyed “Vera’s Life,” and linked to the complete story on Twitter. I look forward to reading more serials when you get around to them. if it’s “serial fatigue” you’re suffering from, then maybe just space them out over time. If you need serial ideas, you can ask your readership. I’m sure you’d get plenty of ideas!
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I have no shortage of ideas, David. I just have to force myself to do other things instead of spending half the day blogging. I noticed your Twitter share thanks, and have just retweeted it. ๐
Best wishes, Pete.
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You’ve inspired me to do the same with some of my stories Pete
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Glad to hear that, Sarada.
Best wishes, Pete.
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