This is the third part of a fiction serial, in 805 words.
Daddy got back with the wagon and horses a few days later. He had stocked up with all we would need while he was in town, and we started to pack our things into the back. I had imagined a much bigger wagon, like the ones used by the old pioneers that I had seen in picture books. I worried that our wagon wouldn’t have enough room for us two, once everything was inside. But daddy told me we would sleep on the ground most of the time, under the wagon. When the weather was bad, we could put the quilts on top of all the stuff, and make the best of it.
Being good with tools, he easily took the plow apart, so it didn’t take up so much space. There was our food, and fodder for the horses and the ox too. It was soon filling up, and he decided to take the two good chairs along. “We can sit on them ’round our camp fire, Phin, then use them when we build our house”. He hid the money and valuables in a leather bag inside a bag of corn, and showed me where, putting it to one side so as not to mix it up. By the time everything was packed away, I started to hope it wouldn’t rain, as I still couldn’t imagine where we would find space inside.
Mister Schultz rode out, to officially take posession of our farm for the Yankee buyers. He shook daddy’s hand, and wished us both luck. Then he handed over a good new map he had got from somewhere. It was a real map, drawn proper, with hills and rivers marked, stretching all the way west, including San Francisco. It had to be folded six times, it was so big. Much better than the hand-drawn one daddy had brought back from the war. And it was on funny paper, waxy-like stuff. The agent smiled. “You won’t have to worry about getting this one wet, Jessie, but keep it safe”.
As we turned the wagon west and drove away from the farm, daddy told me not to look back. “Keep looking forward, boy. We ain’t looking back no more”. The wagon was bumpy, and very noisy. Daddy had tied so many pots and pans and things to the sides, even a spare wagon-wheel, they made a fearful racket. And we could only go as fast as the ox could walk, as it was roped on behind. Daddy named the horses Ethel and Mary, but the ox never had no name. It was always just ‘the ox’. I figured it was going to be a long trip, and reckoned we would be lucky to be out of the state by the end of the week.
Before it got too dark, daddy showed me how to handle the horses. I would have to spell him from time to time, but we were not going to travel after dark, for fear of breaking a wheel, or driving into a ditch. Ethel and Mary didn’t need too much handling at that pace, and they seemed content enough to plod along with no coaxing. I just had to steer them around some bends, and away from the biggest holes on the track. It felt strange to be leaving our county, and heading for the Kentucky border. Daddy had marked a place to stop that night, close to a small river. It didn’t have a name, but he said he would know it when we got there.
It was almost dark when we stopped, and sure enough there was a small river, and a stand of trees where we could tie up the horses and the ox. Too late to go searching for firewood, we used some that he had brought in the wagon, and soon had a fire going. I had never been on a trip for fun, but it sarted to feel like one as he heated up some stew over the fire, and the flames made my face hot. With no outhouse, we did the necessary behind the trees, and I had the job of feeding the animals before we settled them. Daddy put some oilskins under the wagon, and placed the quilts on them. With a rough blanket over each of us, and using our folded arms for pillows, we soaked up the heat from the fire that he had just put more wood on.
He lay quiet, smoking his old pipe, and watching the flames. I wanted to ask him about the war, and what had really happened to Cal. But he didn’t appear to be in the mood for talking. Before we settled down, he checked the Colt pistol, and placed it just inside his blanket.
“Just in case”, he said with a smile.
Just in case, indeed. This is my neck of the woods, you know. Those folks are true and hardworking. Only a few bad ones. Of course I am totally hooked on this serial already.
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I am trying my best to capture the period and the locations. Lots of research, and trawling my mind for snippets of films and books. Glad to hear it is working for you, Jennie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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It certainly is, Pete. You know that I can’t always read the episodes on the day they’re posted due to my work week, so I enjoy catching up and reading a few in a row.
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America’s trip west was indeed dangerous…after all, we hadn’t been invited!
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Jessie is more worried about the returning soldiers and renegades at the moment, John.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Just warming up, Pete…are we going to lose a wheel, get robbed, or worse …I’m sure it will be realistic as always 🙂 x
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You are getting ahead of yourself, Carol. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Excellent chapter, Pete. You’re setting the stage nicely. I suspect the hardships will start arriving soon. I’ll throw out a prediction and say that the boy will have a big role in your serial at some point. Either father will be killed, get deathly sick, or be injured somehow.
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Thanks for your predictions, Pete. Always good when readers are thinking ahead.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Love all the details about what they packed to take and what it was like travelling with the noise of everything clanging – very realistic.
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Thanks, Mary. I am having to try to be very careful and accurate with this story. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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There is your remembrance and love for fire wooven in. Right? 😉 Love it, Pete! Enjoy your weekend! Michael
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Well I think they had no alternative back then, Michael. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thats true. Hope it will force not too sad experiences.
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I have unfollowed you because there was overload of followers that were pilling up a lot.
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Okay Richa. Thanks for letting me know. 🙂
Sorry I didn’t make the cut…
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh how I’m hoping this adventure goes well for Phin!🤞🏻
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People think I am going to kill him off. How strange… 🙂 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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(1) Jessie’s wagon is drab looking. He ignored Lee Marvin’s advice: “Paint your wagon!”
(2) Since the ox isn’t blue, I guess we can’t name it Babe. How about a British name like Oxford?
(3) As for the horses, Merry became a miserable neigh-sayer because Ethyl was always passing gas.
(4) They soon had a fire going. But where was it going? Not to the river, I’ll bet.
(5) Jessie brought along pots and pans. But he had no plans to pan for gold, and not one of those pots was to be used as a chamber pot.
(6) The horses always got nervous when Jessie whipped out his Colt pistol.
(7) Oilskin is easily flammable. And Jessie is smoking a pipe beneath a wooden wagon. So I hope those blankets are fire blankets!
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Thanks, David. I doubt Jessie’s pipe was about to set his groundsheet on fire, but I will warn him next time we speak. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Nice historic realism, Pete.
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Thanks, Don. The setting and time period is going to be a challenge for me this time.
Best wishes, Pete.
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So far, so good. Very realistic.
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Thanks, Darlene. Glad you think so.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I like a good road trip, looking forward to Phin’s journey. If you don’t kill him off too soon 😀 😀
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Kill him off? How very dare you… 🙂
Best wishes, pete.
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To leave everything behind for the unknown in a new world…a scary prospect!
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Americans often tended to change location in search of a better life then, and many still do.
Best wishes, Pete.
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This is a nice addition to the story. I can’t imagine traveling in a wagon at that pace. Thank you for the glimpse into history.
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Thanks, Molly. They could rarely make more than 20 miles in one day. In fact, 10 miles was good going, depending on the terrain.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Many thanks for reblogging, ladies.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I always wanted to have an adventure like this when I was a child…
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It was certainly an adventure for a young boy who had never been further than the small town. Let’s hope it stays that way! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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With the pen in your hand, Pete… not a chance!
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