This is the twenty-fifth part of a fiction serial, in 836 words.
I fixed my belt around daddy’s leg, and he pulled it real tight. I was staring at the wound, and could see the muscle of his leg through the blood. He gritted his teeth, and spoke quietly. “Phin, get the Hawken for me, then go get the wagon and the long rope. I ain’t leaving this hog behind”. I did as he said, running until I thought my lungs would burst. When I got back to him with the rope, he had dragged himself up against a tree, and there was a twig twisted inside the belt around his leg. “Tie the hog’s legs, then fix the rope to the wagon axle. Drive it forward until the hog’s dragged out, then come back for me”. I nodded.
He didn’t look none too good, but I wasn’t about to go against anything daddy told me to do.
Using the long-barrelled Hawken like a crutch, and holding on to me, daddy managed to hop out of the woods, though he fell forward two or three times. I got on the back of the wagon and managed to haul him up onto the boards. He was as white as a clean sheet, and sweating real bad. “Now wrap that rope on the hog around the footboard, and bring the end back here”. With both of us pulling on the rope, we got the hog up level with the wagon. Then I tied off the slack, and jumped out to swing the animal into the back of the wagon next to daddy. He wanted water, then he wanted whiskey. He drunk some, then poured more over his leg, shaking his head and screwing up his eyes at the pain.
“Get us home, Phin. Push the horses”.
The poor mares must have wondered what was going on, as they had never been pushed so hard. I kept going until it was too dark to see the trail, and daddy yelled from the back. “Stop now son, afore we break a wheel or the horses’ legs”. I got a fire going, tended to the hot horses, and then tried to make daddy more comfortable. From the light shining out the oil lamp, I could see the leg was still bleeding, though not as much. I tried to get him to eat something, but he shook his head. Pulling the stick out of the loop, he slackened the belt, and sighed. “More whiskey, son. You eat”.
At first light, daddy woke me from a heavy sleep by calling loudly. “Rouse yourself, Phin, we need to get going. Now!” I got the horses ready, then set off. Daddy called again. “Better not push them all day, boy. Start off slow, then quicken them up after full sunup”. That was one hell of a day. I kept hoping we would see some other people, and I could ask for help. I didn’t stop but once, to help daddy tighten the belt again, and grab a bite for myself sitting next to a stream where I watered the horses without unharnessing them. Without the need to stop and look for game, I kept the wagon going until the horses started to slow up, and the sun was setting.
Daddy called from the back. “That’s enough now. Get a fire started, we’ll be home tomorrow”. I managed to get him to eat some of Mary’s bean and potato soup once it was warm from the fire. He had wrapped a thick cloth around his thigh, then put my belt tight around it. The whiskey was all gone, but he drank down two cans of water like a man with a mighty thirst. That night I lay down between him and the dead hog, and there was no warmth from neither of them.
He was still sleeping when I woke up, and when I shook him, he didn’t come round. I put my cheek against his mouth and could only just feel his breath. Before the sun was breaking through the misty morning, I started to recognise the surroundings, and knew we would soon be near Derby. I pushed those poor mares real hard, and it wasn’t long before I was turning off the trail with our homestead in sight.
With me yelling fit to bust as I approached, Walter came running, followed by Susan and Mary. Walter lifted daddy as if he was a baby, and carried him inside. Mary rushed in to clear the big table, and Susan put her hand on my chest to stop me following. “See to the horses, Phin. Ma knows what to do. Henry’s already left for work, but Walter will be out directly”.
Walter came out later, to help with the deer and the hog. His face was serious. “How’s my daddy, Walter?” I wanted to go in and see him, but the big man shook his head. “Best leave him to Mary, boss. He don’t look too good”. He reached over and touched my shoulder.
“Not good at all”.
Another excellent chapter int he story, Pete…you capture the intimacy and urgency of the situation between them!
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Thanks very much, John. Glad to hear you felt that.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Okay… I cried. This was an outstanding episode, Pete. Please, please don’t let Jesse die!!
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Thanks, Jennie. I will take that as a great compliment.
Best wishes, Pete.
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You are welcome. Yes, it was a great complement, perhaps the best episode of the series. Best to you, Pete.
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Oh no. Will he lose a leg or his life. Neither is a very promising outcome for a man on the frontier.
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Yes, it’s looking bad, Elizabeth.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh dear. I will prepare myself.
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(1) Phin took off his tight belt, and said, “I’m gonna whoop ya, daddy!” Jessie got real worried until his son added, “Nah, I’m just pullin’ your leg!”
(2a) Bad citation: “Fix that belt around my leg, son, and then use a rope to tie the belt to the wagon axle. Drive it forward until you’ve dragged me out of the woods. Then come back for the hog.”
(2b) I don’t know why Jessie wanted his son to come back for the hog. That old bike is shot.
(3) Bad citation: “Get us home, Phin. Push the horses. Not too hard, though, ’cause they got sensitive rumps, an’ they might give ya a good kickin’ to yer face.”
(4) Jessie was as white as a ghost, but dang if he weren’t still livin’!
(5) “I got a fire going, tended to the hot horses…” Next time, keep the horses away from the fire!
(6) “I managed to get him to eat some of Maryโs bean and potato soup…” Now that Jessie had stopped sweating, he began farting real bad… (That spooked the horses so bad, it gave them chills.)
(7) “I pushed those poor mares real hard.” Phin got a kick out of that.
(8) Bad citation: “Best leave him to Mary, boss. He donโt look too good. But don’t you worry. Mary will give him a bath and a shave, comb his hair real nice, and have him put on his best Sunday clothes. He’ll look just fine then!”
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A Harley Davidson pun, David? Well done! ๐
Best wishes, Pete.
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Awesome chapter! The story had been rolling along nicely like a typical western tale out on the prairie, and suddenly Phin’s driving a Ferrari. Good stuff! I don’t know if Daddy is going to make it, but the story can be interesting either way. Now I’m curious if there are a lot more episodes.
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There will be up to 40+ episodes, Pete. The introduction of another character will take the story in a different direction later.
Glad you liked this one.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Please donโt kill Jesse!๐ฉ
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Er, what’s it worth? ๐ ๐
Best wishes, Pete.
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Begging, pleading, virtual hugs…
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Now that was urgent ๐
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Jessie thought so!
Cheers, Pete.
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Fingers crossed for Pa.
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Thanks, Don. Better cross your toes too! ๐
Best wishes, Pete.
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This was a very tragic post. I hope you don’t kill off Phin’s daddy.
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As if I would do something like that, Molly. ๐
Best wishes, Pete.
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Fingers xt for Jesse.
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Yes. It’s not looking good… ๐
Best wishes, Pete.
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Figured it wouldn’t be long til you killed someone off, only surprised it’s taken until episode 25!
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He’s not dead yet… ๐
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Phin did all he could, now it was up to fate.
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Phin is growing up fast, GP. They all know they can rely on him to do the right thing.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh dear…after all Phins effort to get home let’s hope Mary can work her magic …a good realistic episode, Pete ๐ x
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Thanks, Carol. Fingers crossed for Mary’s traditional skills!
Best wishes, Pete.
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I do hope, Pete ๐ x
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