This is the forty-seventh part of a fiction serial, in 850 words.
The start to Phin’s one hundred and first year had been rainy and cold. I continued to try to get something down about what had happened to him in the lead up to his deciding to contact me, but his replies were accompanied by a series of shrugs and head shaking.
“That won’t be much of a chapter, Julian. The war came, and I made even more money from the companies I had invested in. They were all doing well, manufacturing stuff for use in the war. More people came to work and live in and around Wichita, and I sat here thinking about the old days, while paying people to do everything I used to be able to do for myself. Hell son, I was ninety in forty-three, with the war still having some ways to go. What did you expect me to be up to?”
He was right of course. Writing about some lonely old man sitting contemplating his life for twenty years between the ages of seventy and ninety wasn’t going to make much of a chapter. The bulk of my book was going to have to be the events before Henry fell from the ladder. I tried again about his connection to my parents.
“So you got sent a photo of me as a baby. You knew my father had gone to Rochester to take over the newspaper, that gave you a point of reference. But why did you leave it so long to make contact? Why wait until my parents were both dead to finally contact me? Was it just so you could leave everything to someone?”
He was eating a slice of cake that Mrs Mallory had given him with a glass of milk. I had to wait until he finished it.
“I know it’s hard to understand, Julian. But Sophia made her choice, and it wasn’t for me to go against it. Once I knew about you, I had always decided to leave you everything. Ask Brad James, it was all down in my old will and testament. But I had a hankering to see you. You are the only family I have left, and all that remains of my Sophia. But I will tell you something I hadn’t mentioned. Brad’s daddy used to run that law firm before he got sick and Brad took over. I had him contact a private detective in New York State. He found a reliable man in Buffalo, and I retained him to keep a check on you, and how you were getting on”.
That was a revelation that took me by surprise. “How long had you been doing that, Phin?”
He thought for a moment. “Well his first report mentioned your daddy being in hospital, and you taking over the running of the paper. It must have been about twenty or more years ago. When Brad’s daddy passed, I got Brad to keep it up, using the same company in Buffalo. So I knew you were okay, and how to get in touch if need be”.
Mrs Mallory came in then. “Nap time now, that’s enough until after dinner”.
By the time the weather was brightening up, I had just about done with the tape recorder sessions. I had concluded that Phin wasn’t about to tell me any family secret about Sophia never getting in touch, and I was genuinely beginning to wonder if he even knew why that had happened. If he did, he appeared determined to take it to his grave.
I spent more time at the desk in my room, getting the draft tidied up into a manuscript I could send to the publisher in New York. My talks with Phin then tended to happen after dinner, and I noticed him going back over old ground more, his mind seeming to wander on occasion. Talking about his daddy or Susan made him more emotional than it had last year, and sometimes he would wave his hands at me and just stop talking. He didn’t seem to know that I had finished my research, and kept telling me stuff I already knew.
One morning, Mrs Mallory came and knocked on the door of my room. “He’s crying, Julian. No idea why, but he’s sure broken up”. I went back down with her to see him, and wa shocked at how distressed he was. But he wouldn’t answer any of my questions, and just kept shaking his head. When he calmed down, he started to say random things that had nothing to do with what I was asking him.
“That Delacroix, you know, Eugene? He got himself shot dead, for cheating at cards. Place called Abilene, we were told. That woman with the teeth missing. She tried to hold us up once. Daddy said he saw her in Delano. Selling herself she was. Oh my Lord I cannot imagine who might want to buy her! Walter Washington was a strong man, one of the strongest. My how that man could work”. Ann touched my shoulder, and shook her head.
“He’s not right. I’m calling the doctor”.
(1) “The start to Phin’s one hundred and first year had been rainy and cold.” And he didn’t even live in Beetley!
(2) “Hell son, I was ninety in forty-three, with the war still having some ways to go.” A reminder that war is hell.
(3) “Writing about some lonely old man sitting contemplating his life for twenty years between the ages of seventy and ninety wasn’t going to make much of a chapter.” I think that depends on the nature and depth of Phin’s contemplation. Perhaps he had come up with some philosophies of life that reflected a level of wisdom that could make for interesting reading.
(4) Phin couldn’t bear to look at Julian’s baby photo. The truth is that Julian was such a grotesquely ugly baby that belle Sophia would have preferred to give birth to a far more handsome and lovable Quasimodo. You probably had a hunch I would reveal this little known fact—a fact that was never covered by the newspaper. (Of course, Julian grew out of it…eventually!) #UglyDuckling
(5a) “But I had a hankering to see you.” In fact, Phin hankered so much that locals called him the Hanker Chief. (He cried a river of tears, but it was his runny nose that became legendary.)
(5b) Chief Sitting Bull once hired a private detective to investigate the density of the remaining buffalo herds. He had a hankering to ensure population sustainability.
(5c) “He’s crying, Julian. No idea why, but he’s sure broken up.” Mrs. Mallory needs to fetch him another handkerchief.
(6) Bad citation: “I spent more time at the desk in my room, getting the draft tidied up. But it was hopeless. I could easily remove the pencil shavings, but the ink blots and coffee stains were another story.”
(7 Eugène Delacroix had one shot of whiskey too many in Abilene. When asked what killed him, people replied: “Delacroix? Delirium tremens!”
(8) Bad citation: “That woman with the teeth missing. She tried to hold us up once. Pa was so angry at the dentist for stealing his lumber to make false teeth that he wanted to shoot him. But the old woman was opposed to the idea. “Hold up! I need that dentist!”
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You did exceptionally well by picking on that one word, handkerchief. I never realised anyone could make so much from that mundane object.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Phin’s okay. He’s just remembering many different things all at once. Great episode. I feel the end of the story coming, which is sad. How are things in your lockdown?
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The next episode it the last part, Jennie. (48)
We now have ‘full lockdown’ once again. No mixing of households, schools and colleges closed, and only ‘essential’ shops and services allowed to operate. To be honest, for me in Beetley there is little change. But the infection rate is alarming. Now up to 1 in 50 positive for the virus where I live in Eastern England, and a dramatic increase to 1 in 30 infected in Greater London. They finally accept that sending the schools back previously has caused the spike in the new variant, as so many children are testing positive, but showing no symptoms.
I feel it can only be a matter of time before I get it, and I am resigned to that happening now. If I escape being infected, it will be a miracle.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I read the last episode. Loved it!
The scary part are people who are infected and show no symptoms. I have often thought about possibly being a carrier because I’m with children every day. They are closer together at school than they should be because they’re preschoolers. Yes, we all wear masks and wash hands a gazillion times a day, but we hug. That’s a big part of preschool. It’s one of the things children need, especially now. So, I worry.
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Enjoying how you are giving us an update on those terrific early characters, Pete…
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Thanks, John. It was an easy way to do that, allowing Phin to ‘ramble’.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Sounds like the beginning of the end… X
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Last episode today, Carol. Number 48! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Ok.. I’ll head over, thanx Pete x
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It is going to be a sad ending for us all, as others have said we all know Phin so well.
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Thanks, Eddy. It’s nice for me that people have invested emotionally in Phin.
Best wishes, Pete.
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And I agree with Fraggle, Kim and others about missing Phin. You created a fine protagonist, Pete.
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Thanks very much, Don. I’m glad he was so popular.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh, dear, poor Phin – not sounding great. I hadn’t realise tomorrow was the final episode.
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It was supposed to be on the 31st, Mary. But I got carried away and wrote more. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I will miss Phin. I am glad that I expect his dementia will be short lived and just the transition to his death.
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Last episode tomorrow, Elizabeth. Thanks for being on board with this long serial.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Intense cliffhanger, Pete. Well done. I hope your 2021 is off to a wonderful start. Hugs on the wing.
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Just a small cliffhanger in advance of the last episode, Teagan.
I’m not holding my breath for 2021, just taking it one day at a time. This new ‘variant’ is raging through England like wildfire. It has reached a village just over one mile from Beetley, so it’s inevitable we will have cases here next week.
Best wishes as always, Pete.
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Small cliffs can still have a big impact on the feel of a story.
Oh gosh… that’s so frightening about the new variant. Regardless of what anyone else does or thinks, I haven’t been taking any chances. I haven’t gone inside anywhere or with anybody since last January… With my personal situation, it’s just not worth taking any chances. I’ve held out this long, so there’s no point wasting all that now. Stay safe and well.
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Oh tomorrow! Much as I want to know how it ends, I don’t want it to!
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Everything has to end, FR. Glad to hear you don’t want it to though.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes I know really. I think Phin has been one of your most compelling characters, I feel I really got to know him, and will be sad to see him go.
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I’m really pleased to hear that. 🙂
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I agree Fraggle. I’m finding it difficult to think of saying goodbye to Phin.
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People did take to Phin. In most of my serials, the main character is not usually so popular. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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It looks like Phin is near the end.
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Last episode coming up tomorrow, Molly. It was supposed to finish on December the 31st, but I got ‘involved’ with the story! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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That has a way of happening to the best of us. The story can have a mind of its pwn.
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Nice house it got some bad old memories I tell ya.
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This is the photo of the home of the grandparents of another blogger. The photo was my inspiration for this fiction serial.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Well if I was into horrors that pic would’ve been my inspiration but I don’t know the route you travelled before so for that I honestly respect you and your blog.
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I have used a lot of photo prompts for short stories in the past, and will again. I don’t often use them for my much longer serials. This link gives an idea.
https://beetleypete.com/?s=Photo+Prompt
Best wishes, Pete.
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I like the country boy style in your story nice though.sharing is carrying.
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Thanks for your comment, Vincent.
Might be best to start from part one though. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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