This is the fourth part of a fiction serial, in 647 words.
When I got home and sat down, I could feel my eyes were heavy. But I wouldn’t let myself sleep that early, or I would regret that later. I opened my laptop. Not my work one, the older one I rarely used now. Then I started a word document and began to make notes about all the 3:17 coincidences. I had a feeling there were going to be more, but I had no idea what any of it meant.
That done, I blitzed the Chinese, and necked it while watching the first of the two films I had bought, washed down with a couple of the cans of lager. It was one of the Fast and Furious films. I loved films about cars, especially films you could watch without having to think too much about what was happening on screen.
My mate Joel rang my mobile when I was on my third can, wanting to know if I fancied meeting him down the pub. I fobbed him off, telling him quickly about the fire at Dockside View, and lied about having a busy day because of that. He was impressed, as he had seen it on the news. “Wow, you were in that? Tell me more”. I said I would tell him next time we met up, and got back to the film, opening a fourth can.
Lack of sleep, and the lager, meant that I didn’t see the end of the film.
I must have just curled up on the sofa and conked out, until the noise woke me up. The telly was a blue screen, and the lamp was still on beside me. The sound was coming from outside the door, on the stairwell leading up to my flat. It was immediately apparent what it was. A ball bouncing down the stairs.
I didn’t even need to check the time on my phone to guess it would say 3:17. But I did anyway.
And it was.
Surprised that none of my neighbours were up complaining about someone bouncing a ball down two flights of concrete stairs, I went to my front door and opened it. The motion-sensor light lit up the landing, and there was nobody to be seen. The door of the flat opposite was closed, but Philippa was a stewardess, so might well have been off flying somewhere. Or sleeping soundly and not heard the ball. Not wanting to call out, I walked down the first flight to the centre landing. There was nobody to be seen.
Then the light went out.
As I turned to walk back up to my flat, the noise of the ball bouncing down the stairs in my direction was so close to me, I swerved to the side, expecting the heavy-sounding ball to hit me. But there was no ball, just the sound. I went back in my flat and locked the door behind me with the deadbolt. I had no idea why I was so scared, but I was, and feeling cold too.
After getting undressed and brushing my teeth, I went to bed. I set my phone alarm to wake me in time to get ready for work, but when I lay down in the dark, I no longer felt sleepy. For the next hour or more, I went over everything in my life that might relate to the number 317. I even broke it down to the 3, the 1, and the 7. No birthday matched. No address I could think of matched, and nothing that I knew about had ever happened at that exact time.
Just when I was drifting off to sleep again, I suddenly added the numbers together in my head, and got 11. So I went through it all again, but could come up with nothing where a number 11 was significant.
When the alarm went off, I had probably only been asleep for an hour.
Another great episode Pete, I’m confounded by the noise, ball, timing? Maybe too much beer? What could be next? C
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It was the sound of a ball bouncing. Unmistakable, even after beers. 🙂
If you’re confounded, I will take that as a good thing.
Best wishes, Pete.
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You are getting quite the master of suspense, Pete…It’s going well so far more surprises to come I am sure 🙂 x
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There may well be a few more, Carol, 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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I do hope so, Pete always enjoyable x
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Pete you are driving me crazy! Lol Is it going to be a horror story? 😉 Isn’t there a well-known historical British film with a time stamp for a train station?
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Not horror, but ‘spooky’. There is no film like this.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Good to know. Thank you, Pete! Lets read the fifth sequel. Michael
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Makes me really want to read what comes next, but darn it I have to wait until tomorrow.
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Thanks, Don. This is a ‘shorter’ serial, but explanations are still a way off. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Okay thanks for the link I’ll check them out now
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Oh it’s too bad I wasn’t there yet for the last one.
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They all have different themes.
I post the complete stories of them when the serials are concluded.
If you ever have free time, there are many of them to read! 🙂
Here’s a link.
https://beetleypete.com/?s=complete+story
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It’s a long one but I’ll be sure to stick around
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My last serial was 44 episodes. This one will not be so long.
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I’m hooked now I’ll have to read it until the end. Curiosity is killing me.
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One episode a day to come. Not sure how many yet, but more than twenty. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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It reminds me of a friend who tells the story of a recurring dream about the number 14 and when on holiday in Tasmania he went to the casino and placed a bet on the roulette table three times on number 14. And three times it landed on 28 🙂 If only, he would have netted a quarter of a million based on his original stake.
He actually won an Aston Martin on one of the raffles that you see at the airport sometimes, so I guess he was destined to win something at some stage 🙂
I’d be checking the Racing Post if I were Darren 🙂
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He is thinking about something along those lines soon. But you’re jumping the gun! 🙂
Cheers, Pete.
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Sid James and budgies spring to mind 🙂
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Rocking_Horse_Winner_(film) 🙂
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My film repertoire laid bare 🙂
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Great chapter, Pete! Lots of suspense and eerieness adds to the enjoyment of this serial. It’s a fine line for me as I typically never watch scary movies, although I do like a scary read now and again.
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This is not going to be like scary film, Pete.
Nothing to make you wake up at 3:17, anyway. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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That’s good because I’m already hooked. Great start with this serial.
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I’m always hearing odd sounds in my house and I don’t like them.
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Older houses do tend to ‘talk’ to you. I hope your one isn’t trying to tell you it’s built over a mine shaft, Jude! 🙂 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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It’s not that old, converted 2006 though I suppose the original barn is older. Birds walking on the roof are freaky though and I’m terrified of rats!
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We have a flat roof on the garage, and on the shed. The largest flat roof is the kitchen extension, and the birds are always on that, pattering around from first light. I haven’t seen any rats since moving here, though I saw them all the time in Central London at night. Attracted by fast-food litter..
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There are rats in the barns next door and sometimes I see them in the garden. Hate them!
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I hate sounds that I can’t account for, so the bouncing ball really set the mood for me. I am truly engaged with this one.
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Glad to hear it, Elizabeth.
Best wishes, Pete.
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The bouncing ball is creepy. This is really good, Pete!
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Thanks, Jennie. Glad you found it creepy.
Best wishes, Pete.
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You’re welcome, Pete. Best to you.
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(1) “When I got home and sat down, I could feel my eyes were heavy.” Darren, your eyes need support. Try an ̶ ̶E̶Y̶E̶ ̶ I-beam.
(2) The Germans were known for blitzes during WWII, but I haven’t heard anything about them necking with the enemy. As for the Chinese, we’re not there yet. So who knows?
(3) I knew a pot-bellied lumberjack who swore that a lager was his best companion.
(4) Speaking of bouncing balls, please wake me up in time to watch the sing-along cartoons on TV.
(5) In a two dimensional world, everyone lives in a flat. There’s no need for stairs.
(6) The funny thing is, that ball’s name is Lucille.
(7) 317 is a prime number. More importantly, it’s the 66th prime number. There is a brand of gasoline called Phillips 66. The company also makes jet fuel. Philippa is a stewardess, so she is always flying on a jet. Therefore, like a ball in the stairway, Darren is going to fall for Philippa. She will set his heart on fire! All I can say is, “It’s about time!”
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I’m sure you were heading into previous serial territtory there, David. If so, nicely done.
When people are selling flats, they like to call them apartments. But talking about their own accommodation, they always say ‘my flat’. Hence in part 2, he asked Janice, “What apartment were they viewing?” 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Terrific chapter Pete!
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Thank you, John. Glad you liked it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Just how many 3:17s could there be? (Got lucky with that train ride) Warmest regards, Theo
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I know. So many 3:17 coincidences. Far too many for them to be coincidences. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Definitely something very mysterious going on.
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It will become clear. Well, sort-of clear.
But not just yet, Mary. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Ooh 3:17 again. Spooky… Can’t wait for the next installment 🙌
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Thanks, Debs. 3:17 is going to feature a lot. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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The hair on the back of my neck is standing up.
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That’s really good! Glad to make that happen. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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But the 3.17 train didn’t crash so it’s not necessarily a bad omen. Maybe a spooky warning from something spooky? Lots to guess for me 😊
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Keep guessing. It’s a while until anything is revealed. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Good, I like the guessing 🤣
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Spooky…
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Glad you felt some spookiness, Stevie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I did. I like spooky stories.
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