This is the seventh part of a fiction serial, in 758 words.
John waved me over when I walked in. He took me into the corner and spoke very quietly. “I have just had Mary Coughlan on the phone. They are taking all their business away from us. That’s rental management of twenty-six properties, plus anything they buy or sell. She says she is transferring it all to Drake and Molloy, and wants me to send the files over in a taxi. I asked her what the problem was, and she said to ask you. So I’m asking, and I want the truth”.
My story was true, and I told John that, and exactly what happened. Before I could talk to Gerry Coughlan about anything, the old lady called him back. She whispered something to him, pointed at me, and he said the deal was off. That was all I knew, and I swore to John I hadn’t done a thing wrong. John sighed. “Old lady Coughlan might be in her eighties, but she’s as sharp as a tack. Her son Gerry never goes against her over anything. She pretty much rules the roost. I didn’t bother to tell her that Drake and Molloy is part of the same company as us, but that’s not the point. We will lose branch revenue, and that won’t look good”.
As I didn’t know what else to say, I shrugged and went back to my desk. Better make it look as if I was trying to sell something. As luck would have it, the next phone call was from the prospective buyer of a smart two-bed semi with a conservatory, a short walk from the station. It was a corner plot, so was unusual in that it had a double garage to the side. He had viewed it twice, and wanted me to make an offer to the seller. One of the best properties on my own list, it was for sale at three hundred and twenty thousand. The buyer wanted to offer ten grand less, so I told him I would put that to the owner and get back to him.
It took me three calls to track down the guy, who was driving on the M25 and speaking from his car. “Three-ten you say? No, that’s not enough. We have had seven viewings, and the interest is still high. Ring him back and tell him three-seventeen, and it’s off the market. Let me know what he says”. I looked down at the pad on my desk, and the numbers I had written down during both conversations. 320, 310, and the last one, 317. Even before I rang the buyer back, I knew he was going to say no.
And of course he did.
Many people might have been shaken up by all this 317 stuff, but I was beginning to find it just plain annoying. That many number coincidences were just impossible, but they were all there, and could mostly be explained. As for Ma Coughlan, I had no idea what had rattled her chain. Maybe she hadn’t liked my crumpled grey suit and striped tie.
Time to talk to someone about it, and I knew the only people who would take me seriously were Joel and Mark. On the way home from work, I rang both their mobiles, suggesting we meet at the KFC for some grub, then head into the White Horse for a few beers. Unlike any of the chain pubs in town, The White Horse was old school, and we could still find a quiet corner to sit in. They both jumped at it, as I suspected they might.
My only two friends from school, Joel and Mark had been around since we were all eleven years old. We stuck together to avoid the bullies, none of us were any good at sport, and we didn’t attract any of the cool guys, or the better-looking girls. Joel had left without taking any exams, and gone into his dad’s business as a kitchen fitter. After having a trial for Colchester in his teens, and not being picked for the squad, he nonetheless became a self-proclaimed football expert. An avid fan of Southend United, he went to every home game, and most of the away matches too.
Mark never went anywhere. He worked from home in a converted garage, as a software support person for a tech company. To be fair, he earned well, much more than me, and he could do the job in his underwear if he wanted to.
Outside the KFC, I saw them coming toward me, both grinning.
You really excite us, Pete! Will also wait to see what happens. 😉 Best wishes, Michael
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Glad to hear that. Excited is good! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Will they believe any of the 317? This was a great episode, Pete. I hope we learn more about old Ma Coughlan and what she saw.
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We get back to Ma Coughlan eventually, but not for a while yet. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Ah, I’m glad. Good to know. Thanks, Pete.
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I’m waiting along with the others…you are certainly keeping us guessing, Pete 🙂 x
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You get some background in part 11, Carol.
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(1) Drake and Molloy was founded by William Faulkner and Samuel Beckett. Their first action was to evict a vagrant from a temple so that it could be sold.
(2) Gerry is too chicken to contradict Mary, so she rules the roost.
(3) Mary Coughlan not only has a stable personality, but she’s also as sharp as a tack. An avid rider of horses, she keeps saddles, stirrups, bridles, halters, reins, bits, harnesses, martingales, and breastplates in a tack room.
(4) I was once interested in a corner plot that featured a single garage. I only viewed it once. Of course, had there been a double garage, I would have viewed it twice.
(5) Darren’s monthly car payment is £317. If he doesn’t pay, the car will be im£’ed.
(6a) “As for Ma Coughlan, I had no idea what had rattled her chain.” It was Gerry who rattled her chain. The old lady has him on a leash.
(6b) Mary rattled the server at the chain pub. “My white horse can run circles around this place!”
(7) Joel arrived at the pub wearing his football jersey. His goal was to drink as much as possible, and let Darren foot the bill.
(8) Mark arrived at the pub in his underwear. He’d forgotten to put his pants on after work. Fortunately, everyone was too drunk to notice.
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5) Excellent use of ‘impounded’.
7) He did, as he always wears a Southend football shirt.
But I forgot to mention that. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I can imagine Mark will have a few ideas if he lives in a world of computers and numbers 🙂
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You are right about that mate. 🙂
Cheers, Pete.
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So she gave him the “evil eye”…can’t wait to see where this goes next! Order me a pint!
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Pint of Stella on the bar for you, John. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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If this were over in our part of the world, I can think of a couple of uses for 317 that you could go with, but it looks like you’ve got things covered as is. In baseball, a good hitter might have a batting average of .317. There are plenty of places in America where I could buy gas at $3.17 per gallon.
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But $3.17 a gallon would only be £2.27 here, Pete. 🙂
I get your point though. Not many cricketers make 317 runs, or I might have featured one. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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If he shares the 317 stories I am afraid that they will think he has gone around the bend. I just remain curious.
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It won’t be long until you have some back story, and a few clues! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Rejection on sight in the last episode still lingers. 317 to go. Warmest regards, Theo
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I think 317 episodes might tax the patience of readers, Theo. But I could probably manage that. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I was trying to say more 317s to come, Sorry, I seem to have left the s off the 317! Warmest regards, Theo
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Oh, this is like pulling teeth Pete! This is one of those stories that I want to keep on reading.
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Wel that’s the idea, obviously! That’s why it’s a serial, after all…
You will get background and clues soon, promise. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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You’re killing me Pete, C
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Not too long to go until you get some back-story, and some clues! 🙂
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His friends are grinning now but I bet not for long.
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They are just pleased to see him, I’m sure. 🙂
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I’m starting to bite my fingernails!
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I’ll take that as a compliment! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I’m being patient 🙂
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It’s hard isn’t it, but me too!! 🙂
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See my reply to Mary. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Not too long to wait, Mary.
Best wishes, Pete.
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