This is the twenty-first part of a fiction serial, in 739 words.
Selina Macmillan couldn’t have looked more different that second time. Wearing a pinstripe business suit, and her hair in a bun, she looked more like the headmistress of a swanky school, than the blowsy party animal of a few days earlier. I had a feeling that she had arrived straight from a date last time. The sort of date where you stop over, and don’t get much sleep.
The two hundred was ready in a sealed envelope, and I handed it over before she had time to ask for it. She dropped it into a desk drawer without counting the notes. I thought that was a nice touch.
“Well, Darren. I told you about the post mortem report over the phone. I have also been through the reports surrounding the police investigation into the accident, as well as the transcript of the inquest and the Coroner’s summation. All of that had to be requested by your mum, and the copies paid for. She must have been quite determined at the time, as she didn’t involve any lawyers, and did it all herself”.
There was no doubt that I was seeing a totally different side of my mother. All of this had been going on before I was even two years old. I was sure that Auntie Jean must have been heavily involved in looking after me back then. Mum would have needed a lot of time to have done all that stuff.
Selina was tapping something on her desk.
“This file from my dad is interesting. You don’t seem to have it in your papers. Sergeant Holloway was in the traffic division of Surrey Police. They investigated his conduct following the accident. Off duty, in his own car, It seems he stopped at the scene which he saw happen on the other carriageway. He claimed the driver was dead, which was confirmed by the medical reports of a broken neck that caused instant death. The passenger appeared to be dead too, but as he was so young, Holloway attempted resuscitation after extricating him from the damaged car with some difficulty, as it had rolled over during the crash. The conclusion is that he did his best, and he was actually praised for his response and professionalism”.
Stopping her before she could go on, I asked about the strangulation, and how Holloway had explained that. She opened another file, and tapped a paragraph on a typed page.
“During his evidence at the original inquest, he had spoken about having to drag your brother out of the car, and having some difficulty attempting resucitation in a confined space. When your mum tried to get it reopened with her new evidence about strangulation being the cause, Holloway made a statement that he might well have damaged Terry’s neck getting him out through the window of the car, and dragging him up the verge to make space to carry out CPR. They believed his version, and refused your mum’s appeal”.
Next I wanted her to explain how Holloway had got involved in an investigation when he was technically off duty. Selina grinned.
“You don’t know much about the way cops work, Darren. He was a trained Accident Investigation Officer. The next available one was tied up on a serious crash involving a lorry, fifteen miles away. So they took the easy way out, which was to let him investigate the accident. The control room showed him back on duty on their record, and other officers helped him start the full investigation. Technically speaking, he wasn’t involved, as he was a witness who had stepped in to help. So by default, they let him investigate an accident that he was later implicated in. So it is no surprise that any appeal was thrown out. Everyone was covering their arses”.
As I took that in, she carried on.
“Remember I mentioned my contacts? Well I dropped a few quid to one of them, and he did some digging. Holloway retired with the rank of Police Inspector. He is sixty-eight years old now, and still lives in the same house in Surrey. His wife died over ten years ago, some kind of cancer. He spends his time playing golf, according to my contact. Rarely misses a day on the golf course”.
My expression must have been blank, as she had leaned forward to get my attention.
“But there’s more, Darren. The best is yet to come”.
I’m on the edge of my seat!!
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Very glad to hear that! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh, yes! Best to you, Pete.
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Me too, Jennie! 🙂 Pete really is increasing the tension. Michael
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Glad you think so, Michael. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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:-))
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Yes!
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🙂
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I am only grateful that we are only having to wait instead of having to shell out even more money to get more information.
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He paid out ÂŁ275, but he gets a great deal for his money, it has to be said.
Best wishes, Pete.
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The stagecoach goes over the cliff and the reel ends. ending like a most proper serial. Warmest regards, Theo
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Or I could have tied the girl to the tracks, then shown the train approaching. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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It is the same, actually, if the reel ends. Warmest regards, Theo
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You just know that I will break my schedule to read the next one as soon as its published 🙂
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Taking that as a compliment, Eduardo.
Cheers, Pete.
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“But there’s more, Darren. The bet is yet to come. Bring another hundred tomorrow, and I’ll tell you all about it.” 🤣
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Oh, so cynical, Pete. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I cant believe you’re making us wait til tomorrow lol thank Pete
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That’s serials for you. Leave the reader wanting to know more. 🙂
Best wishes, pete.
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Really! We have to wait until tomorrow! Killing me Pete! C
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The whole point of a ‘cliffhanger ending’, Cheryl. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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On the edge of my seat now…..
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That’s music to my ears, BGC. 🙂
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(1a) Selina wore her hair in a bun. I hope she has an extra one because she’s making herself a chili dog for lunch.
(1b) She looked like a million dollars, and even resembled the headmistress of the Hillary Swank School of Boxing.
(2) Always touch money before you drop it in a drawer.
(3) “There was no doubt that I was seeing a totally different side of my mother.” He’s seen the front side, back side, left side, and right side, but only now is he seeing the inside.
(4) The police report indicated that Brian Cook had driven his car at breakneck speed. The medical report confirmed that he ended up with a broken neck. Sounds logical to me.
(5) After Sgt. Holloway pulled Terry out of the car, he put a firm grip on the boy’s throat in order to drag him by the neck up the verge, across the road, and through some trees to a park where there was enough space to carry out CPR.
(6) Bad citation: “So it is no surprise that any banana peel would be thrown out the window, or that everyone on the sidewalk below would slip on it and fall on their arses.”
(7) Bad citation: “One of my contacts, who works at the golf course, did some digging so that Holloway would have nine holes into which he could drop his golf balls.”
(8) According to the Macmillan Report, one of the golf balls at the country club was an informant: “Holloway? Yeah, I know him! He spends his time playing golf, according to my contact.” #Ouch!
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You had a ‘full round’ with this golfing episode, David.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Meanie!! Again! 🤣
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Not too long until tomorrow morning. 🙂
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He’s spinning this one out a bit!
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I can’t win! People kept asking for shorter episodes! 🙂 🙂 x
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I know, but we are impatient to find out what happened.
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Just read the last episode first, like the last chapter of a book. Saves a lot of time. 🙂
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Oh, I can never do that!
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I can’t even binge-watch. I have to wait until the next episode. It doesn’t seem right to be able to watch it all at once. x
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Ah, well we have been guilty of this one recently. Mainly because most nights there has been very little on the TV which interests us so we have finished off a series on the catch-up channels. We even started watching West Wing before Christmas and have just finished it! It does become addicitve.
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I have never seen that. We have NOW TV, and Netflix (from my stepson’s account), but hardly watch either. I also have Amazon Prime TV, but can only watch that on a PC or Tablet at the moment, as we have yet to set up our Freeview Play ‘Smart’ options. Julie watches a great deal of stuff that is of no interest to me, so I write my blog posts while she watches it. At the moment, I am only watching three TV shows. ‘Unforgotten’, ‘Line Of Duty’, and ‘The Terror’. Everything else on our PVR recorder is her ‘trite’ stuff, like First Dates, Married At First Sight, and 22 Kids and Counting. I watch less TV now than at any other time in my life. x
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I hate that reality / celebrity stuff. I really do not need to see how other people live their somewhat trivial lives. West Wing is good and on Channel 4 catch up. We also like the foreign programmes on there. Bosch is good on Amazon Prime.
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Curiouser and curiouser.🤔
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And the next bit of information she has is even better, Kim.
Best wishes, Pete.
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“The best is yet to come.” It sure is, Pete – bravo!
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Thanks, John. More tomorrow! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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The plot thickens who is going to play golf, Darren or Selina or maybe it will be doubles 🙂
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I doubt any golf is going to be played by anyone, Carol. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Perhaps it’s time for Darren to join a golf club, lol.
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He certainly has a lot to think about. And more to come, according to Selina. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Ooh, it’s all very murky 🙂
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A murky past indeed, Mary.
Best wishes, Pete.
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