This is the twenty-sixth part of a fiction serial, in 730 words.
As promised, I rang Mark to let him know what had happened. Swearing him to secrecy, and not to mention anything to Joel. Because Joel thought he was the world authority on football, I felt sure he would blab to his mates about Brendan, and ruin my plans.
That Sunday, I drove to Danbury to visit Aunt Jean and my mum. I didn’t ring in advance or expect dinner, and I had no intention of trying to discuss anything that had been going on. Nobody could know anything until I had put my idea into operation. My real reason for the visit was to use Jean’s old typewriter. I didn’t have a printer at home, and no need to buy one. Besides, using my emails via laptop wasn’t an option, as that could be traced.
So a typewriter was ideal for my purpose.
Mum looked unsurprised when she answered the door. I told her I had promised to come and see Jean. “You had better let me go and spruce her up a bit. She won’t forgive me if I let you see her in the state she’s in”. The old house was looking in need of a good clean, as well as some serious redecoration. It was like going back in time walking in there. Twenty minutes later, mum came into the living room and handed me a cup of tea. “Here, take this up to her. I should tell you, her appearance might shock you”.
She was right about that. Jean’s hair was white, and her skin was yellow. She looked about a hundred years old, and the smell in the room was so sour it got me right in the throat.
“Darren love, thanks for coming to see me. How you doing? As you can see, I’m not doing so good”. I engaged in some chit-chat, mentioning that I had resigned from my job. I chose not to say anything about how long she had left to live. “I’m glad you left that place, love. You can do better for yourself than being an estate agent”. After I ran out of things to say, I casually brought up the old typewriter, hoping it was still around. “Yes, I’ve still got it. It’s in the hall cupboard. There’s paper too, and the ribbon should be alright. You can have it if you want”.
I told her to drink her tea, and I would say goodbye before I went home.
Typical of my mum, she never asked me why I was using Jean’s typewriter on the kitchen table. Though she had almost certainly guessed that would have been my main reason for showing up that day. When I had finished typing, I put the machine and paper back in the cupboard, and went up to say goodbye. But Jean was fast asleep. I kissed her on the forehead, for old time’s sake.
My mum was reading a book, sitting in the big old armchair. “It was nice of you to come and see her. I doubt she has much longer to go. Days, rather than weeks. I haven’t prepared anything for dinner, but I can make you a ham and tomato sandwich if you want one”. I declined the sandwich, telling her I had things to do. As I was leaving, I told her to keep a close eye on the TV news next week. She didn’t even ask me why.
In the car, I had the copies of the old police investigation, and the post-mortem report arranged by my mum, the second one. Adding my typed sheet, I stopped at Sammi’s shop on the way home. He had a photocopier at the back, and charged ten pence per copy. I did ten copies of everything, and bought ten large Manila envelopes as well. Back home, I made ten piles of the copies, and slid each one into an envelope. Then I wrote the names of the Sports Editors on each envelope, followed by the address of the newspaper it was going to.
The next day, I would drive into East London, and post them from one of the big Post Offices. They were so busy, nobody working there ever remembered anything, I was sure.
On my typed page, I had kept it short and sweet. But there was enough potential scandal to interest them.
No doubt about that.
I can’t wait to read what happens!!
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Just two more episodes, Jennie. It finishes at part 28.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I’m there, with bells on!!
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A typewriter, now the plot thickens, But handwritten envelopes? Warmest regards, Theo
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Block Capitals, Theo. In a marker pen that was discarded. 🙂
(I forgot to mention that…)
Best wishes, Pete.
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It is not an issue, as the serial ended. Warmest regards, Theo
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Well, he certainly intends to fan the flames…I didn’t know he had it in him not so much of a wet blanket after all…Now going to read the conclusion 🙂 x
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Last episode this morning, Carol. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.x
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That Darren has more gumption this I gave him credit for? Can’t wait to read about the outcome. Well done Pete, I feel as if Darren is a bit of a friend now. C
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People sold him short at first. But he stepped up! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Playing catchup Pete but the story is terrific and racing toward a dramatic conclusion I see…bravo!
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Thanks, John. Last one tomorrow.
Best wishes, Pete.
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The Holloways are about to get a big surprise. I’ll be here to find out the consequences.
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Thanks, Pete. More coming up today.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Cant wait to see how all this works out. Has he done enough? Thank Pete
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He has lit the fire, now we just have to see if it burns. 🙂
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(1) Dick Tracy traced a lot, but was never traced. He was a tracer, not a tracee.
(2a) The old typewriter is a key component of this story. But what type of typewriter is it?
(2b) No Name Key is the name of a key component of the Florida keys.
(3a) Aunt Jean needs to be spruced up. She figures that a woman her age should start branching out into geriatric cosmetics, but I think she’s barking up the wrong tree.
(3b) “She won’t forgive me if I let you see her in the state she’s in.” The only state in England, which is divided into counties, districts, boroughs, and parish councils, is a state room. So Aunt Jean must be in one of the state rooms, but apparently one that’s off limits to her.
(4) Serious red deck oration. A formal speech of a serious nature delivered from a deck painted in red.
(5) If you peel back the husk, you’ll find that a corn cob’s hair is white, and that its skin is yellow. Aunt Jean is therefore like corn, but not nearly as appealing.
(6) Darren’s mother never asked him why he was using Jean’s typewriter on the kitchen table. Rest assured, had Darren used it on the floor or in the stairway, his mother would have asked for an explanation.
(7) Darren told his mother to keep a close eye on the TV news. As if she could keep the other eye farther away from it…
(8) Darren is going to mail his Manila envelopes from London. Will postage incur international rates?
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I thought you might pick up on the Manila envelopes. And you did. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Nearly there?
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Just a couple more, Sue. :
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Brilliant!
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I can’t wait to read tomorrow’s installment, lol!
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Might take a day or so to catch on, but I have a feeling it will. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Well done Darrin!
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The beginning of the end for the Holloways, Kim.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I like the plot twists in this series, Pete. Everything is coming to head now though. Still, he’s got to get the story in the right reporters hand, otherwise it goes in the trash or some never ending pile.
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Football managers are big news here, Pam. Not only in newspapers, but all over the TV too. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Moving forward nicely!
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Thanks, Mary. Not long to go now. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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We will see if anyone bites. I think newspapers don’t like anonymous tips but hopefully they canfind enough evidence themselves to corroborate Darrens story!
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That’s why he included the copies of the original reports. Something for them to sniff out! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Plans in motion, and hopefully no more victims other than those who deserve it 🙂
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That’s the plan, Eduardo. 🙂
Cheers, Pete.
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