“Come And See” : Part Five

This is the fifth part of a fiction serial, in 746 words.

For Jimmy, the best thing about the new year of 1970 was that he would soon be eighteen years old, leaving school, and starting work. He had got the good pass grades he expected, and should be starting at Hopgood Pharmaceuticals just after Easter. For his mum, the best thing for her was that it was no longer the ‘Swinging Sixties’. She had hated all that pop music, free love, mini-skirts, and girls being on the pill. She was hoping for a better decade, a more God-fearing time to come.

Jimmy hadn’t had any of that free love, and since mum had sold the telly and thrown away the transistor radio, he hadn’t had any pop music either.

Mum’s prayer group had expanded a little. His mum said they now had twenty-six members, and Reverend George was better than ever with his fiery rhetoric. Jimmy had never been inside after that first time, and he had eventually got used to his mum always being out. He had also read a fair bit of the New Testament, though he had found it rather disappointing.

Jesus had started out well, throwing out the money-lenders and stuff, but Jimmy had found it hard to tolerate all those miracles. They seemed too far-fetched for his liking.

With the end of his schooling coming up, and a new job to prepare for, he had closed his Bible for now, reading up on his chemistry books instead. He was determined to make a good impression, and carve out a genuine career for himself in the Testing Department at Hopgood’s. As well as testing the efficacy of any new drugs, they also had contracts for blood tests, and bacterial testing. They would get samples sent in from hospitals, local councils, and even the police.

He had read up on that forensic side; establishing blood groups, identifying possible suspects, detecting poisons in tissue samples. It was all still rather new, but he hoped to get involved in that area, as it interested him.

The first day at work was rather embarrassing. Jimmy’s mum insisted they travel in together, then she walked him up to the head of his department, and introduced him as if he were a child on his first day at school. He could see his new colleagues eyeing her, and raising their eyebrows. She was not averse to expounding her salvation theories during the lunch break, something she had already told her son. Jimmy resolved to take the latest break allowed, as his mum sitting with him would tar him with the same brush.

That first week was something of a blur. He met a couple of dozen people whose names he was sure he would never remember, and was shown around the whole complex of buildings, even parts he would never be required to work in.

Then he was assigned a mentor. Lesley was a woman in her late twenties, and she had been working at Hopgood’s since leaving university. Jimmy got the impression she was unpopular, but his experience with women was no experience, so he didn’t notice the fact that she was overweight, wore thick-lens glasses, and had greasy hair. He treated her with great respect, and was keen to learn from her.

Very soon, Lesley liked Jimmy. She liked him a lot.

Once Lesley was on his side, Jimmy got to finally do some science. She mentioned extending his mentorship past the first week, just to be certain he was comfortable. He was happy to accept that, and she was soon showing him lots of the different aspects of the job, including the forensic analysis, which was her speciality. Because of her age, Jimmy naturally assumed she was married. But during a conversation when she mentioned living alone, he found out that wasn’t the case.

On Thursday, Lesley asked him outright if he was as crazy about religion as his mum. He explained about his dad leaving, having no television, and only having The Bible to read. But he was quick to critisize the prayer group and Reverend George, telling her he thought it was just a way for George to get money. Lesley looked very pleased by his answer.

On the way home that night, Jimmy’s mum complained of a blinding headache that she couldn’t shift. Back in the house, she prayed for The Lord to take away her headache, and went to bed early, unable to eat any dinner.

The next morning, Jimmy couldn’t wake her up.

35 thoughts on ““Come And See” : Part Five

  1. I suspect that Jimmy and Lesley will get together for a time, though it will never last.

    Jimmy couldn’t wake her up as in, “That’s all she wrote,” or “Mom’s sure a sound sleeper.” Sounds like the former though you could just be messing with us.

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  2. (1) Easter bunnies were seen leaving Hopgood Pharmaceuticals just after Easter. They explained that laying all those eggs had drained them of energy, so they needed to go buy some chocolate flavored vitamins.
    (2) According to Clint Eastwood, the Swinging Sixties refers to an era when outlaws danced at the end of a rope. #Hang’EmHigh
    (3) Girls used to be pop tarts. Not only did they pop popcorn, drink soda pop, listen to pop music, sing “Pop Goes the Weasel,” watch “Mary Poppins,” and pop into mom and pop shops, they would also pop pills purchased at Popgood Pharmaceuticals prior to a dream date with a doughboy like Poppin’ Fresh who was sure to pop their cherry.
    (4) Reverend George is good at fiery rhetoric, but Ferryman Charon is even better at watery rhetoric.
    (5) After 39 lashes, Jesus was inspired to invent Miracle Whip.
    (6) Jimmy “met a couple of dozen people whose names he was sure he would never remember.” He must have a really bad memory! He can’t remember Narayana Vishur Kalanadhabhatta’s name? What about María Rosario Ramírez Cipriano Cuellar de Arroyo? Or Enyetuenwuebumiba Ugbeduzugbemosa?
    (7) “Very soon, Lesley liked Jimmy. This is not at all surprising. There’s a lot of chemistry between employees of a pharmaceutical company.
    (8) Jimmy’s mum prayed for The Lord to take away her headache. He may have accidentally sucked the soul out of her brain instead.

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