Outside: Part Six

This is the sixth episode of a fiction serial, in 743 words.

With the plasma television and SKY satellite box set up and working, supermarket deliveries arranged, and her excellent computer to enjoy, Gillian was sure she was going to love her new solitary life. There was no need to go out at all, unless she needed the dentist, or had to visit a doctor. She could cut her own hair when it got too long, and everything else she might need or want was available online.

One morning, the doorbell rang as she was halfway through watching a DVD of ‘Cleopatra’. She paused the disc, Elizabeth Taylor’s face filling the screen. Nobody was expected, and there were no orders awaiting delivery. The bell rang again, and she crouched down, speaking through the letterbox. “Who is it?” The voice that replied was familiar.

“It’s Jim Bell, Gill. I was on my way back from a meeting, and thought I would pop round to see how you were”. Naked under her dressing gown, she didn’t feel like entertaining a visitor. She couldn’t remember the last time she had washed her hair or had a bath, and her legs were hairy and unshaved.

“Sorry, Mister Bell. I don’t feel so good today. Got a bit of a temperature. Better not let you in, in case you catch something”. Jim might have been annoyed that she hadn’t even opened the door, but his voice didn’t betray that. “Some other time then. Get well soon, and keep in touch. We all think about you at work you know”.

Before resuming the film, Gillian decided to warm up a Cornish Pasty. Might as well, as she was up and about.

Watching News At Ten that night, there was an appeal for a missing girl, and they showed CCTV footage of her getting on a train at a staion in London. That gave Gillian an idea, and she went to her computer and started searching on Google.

The next day, she rang the numbers of a few home security companies, deliberately choosing some that were not local. Before lunchtime, she had made an appointment for the next morning for someone to come and talk to her about having a camera outside the house. It would mean having to let him in, and getting dressed too, but it was worth that for peace of mind.

The man was quite old, which was good. She reckoned he was at least sixty, and he had a kind voice. He also had a van outside, and said he could fit whatever system she chose there and then. That was a big bonus for Gillian, so she picked one from the catalogue, and made the man a cup of tea as he started working. Late that afternoon, it was all done, and she had paid directly using the phone banking. He showed her how it worked.

“The camera is a wide-angle. As you can see, it looks like an outside light, not a conventional camera. You will be able to see almost all of the front of the house from your gate, right up to the front door. This switch moves the angle, so you can look down, then move it back, and you see wide again. It’s a black and white only, but that makes it more affordable. The recording tape runs on a loop for twenty four hours, then starts again. So if you go out, you can see if anyone was outside your house by playing the tape back. It even shows you the time, and adjusts when the clocks go forward and back. There’s a remote control too, but that’s extra. You can ring the number on the paperwork if you decide you want one, and they will post it to you”.

Gillian nodded. The small control box was like a half-size VHS player, and the monitor screen lifted up from it, much like her laptop. She thought for a moment. “Can you come back tomorrow and fit one of those outside lights that comes on at night if someone comes to the door? It will be winter soon, and dark by four. Oh, and one of those speaker things, so I can talk to the person without opening the door. And you might as well bring that remote control you said about”. He smiled. “Of course I can miss, see you about the same time then”.

She was feeling good. By tomorrow evening, she would always know who was at the front door.

31 thoughts on “Outside: Part Six

  1. (1) The world has lost Gillian’s mum. It has lost Cleopatra’s mummy, too.
    (2) Cleopatra was the name of a shrew that did a giant elephant walk in order to stalk a cat on a hot tin roof that was after the tasty blue bird that it considered to be the only game in town. Unfortunately, her neighbor, Virginia Woolf, who was on night watch, called BUtterfield 8 to report the likelihood of winter kills.
    (3) “Well, ring my bell!” exclaimed Gillian as she ripped off her dressing gown. “He’ll be so desperate to see me naked that he’ll jimmy the door open!”
    (4) Mormon missionaries, Jehovah’s Witnesses, the Avon Lady, and the Grim Reaper have all crossed Gillian’s address off the list.
    (5) The recording tapes nuns twirling hula hoops for twenty four hours, then starts again. (No warranty available. Customers are advised to have faith in the system.)
    (6) Before it’s over, Gillian is going to hire a contractor to build a panic room wallpapered with photos of Jodie Foster.
    (7) Did Gillian think to have a camera aimed at the chimney. Aside from a fat guy in a red suit, no one should be permitted to come down the flue.

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    1. She already had a laptop, and had used computers at work, so she was able to set up the PC. As for the TV/SKY box etc, you must have missed the bit where I wrote that she paid extra for installation and setup, Janet. It was the last sentence in Part 5.
      ‘And she had ticked the box to pay extra for installation and setup too, even though that meant some man coming in.’
      Best wishes, Pete.


    1. Yes it is set as starting in 2001, (though I have not stated any dates) and she is getting in early with the technology, Don. Plasma TVs cost a fortune then, (The equivalent of $5,000 at least in the UK) and CCTV on domestic houses was rare. Her door buzzer is the ‘entryphone’ type with speakers, not an Internet ‘smart’ doorbell like the ones sold by Ring. The CCTV is still using VHS tape too. She also doesn’t have a cellphone, something which you may have noticed has never been mentioned. But she has nobody to call on it anyway. 🙂
      (I got my first cellphone in late 2000)
      Best wishes, Pete.

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