This is the thirty-first part of a fiction serial, in 770 words.
Thomas looked at the monitor, and could see a man aged around fifty standing outside carrying a small bunch of flowers. When the man didn’t leave and pressed the buzzer again, he rushed upstairs to the bathroom. The tone of his voice was menacing as he spoke. “Get your dressing-gown on and get downstairs now. There’s a man at the door. Get rid of him, and make it fast”.
Gillian did as she was told, with Thomas following her down before she got to the door intercom. She could see he was carrying that horrible knife again. He stood on the bottom step as she looked at the CCTV monitor. “That’s Mister Bell, from where I used to work. I didn’t know he was coming, honest”. Jerking the blade of his knife, he snarled at her. “Don’t let him in, and don’t make him suspicious. Or it’s this for both of you”.
She pressed to speak. “Hello, Jim. Sorry, I was in the bath. I’m not feeling well, and thought a warm bath would help”. He sounded disappointed as he replied. “Sorry to hear that, Gill. I was just popping round to see how you were on my way to a meeting. I have half an hour yet, if you want to invite me in for a cup of tea”. Gillian hesitated. It had never once occured to her that Jim might fancy her, but that was before she had met the man standing on her stairs.
Now she could see that Jim might be trying his luck. After all, he had brought flowers.
“Sorry, Jim. I’m not dressed or anything, and I have a thumping headache. You can leave the flowers on the step, and I will get them later. Thanks for thinking of me”. He gently placed the flowers on the front step, then turned away looking suitably dejected. That made her convinced her suspicions were correct.
As she turned around, Thomas slapped her face so hard, the shock and the pain made her start sobbing immediately. The he grabbed the collar of her dressing gown and dragged her back up to mum’s bedroom, pushing her onto the bed. Without speaking, he dragged the dressing gown off of her, and secured restrants to one arm and leg. Pulling the commode over next to the bed, he finally spoke in little more than a whisper.
“So, that’s your lover is it? The best you could do, a sad-looking man like him? No wonder you enjoy it so much with me, he looks pathetic. Well that’s not good enough. Not at all. You can stay in here today, and use the commode if you need it. There is water in that bottle next to the bed, but no more food for you today, young lady. If I hear so much as a murmur, I will be back up to restrain you completely, and you get the gag too”.
Still sobbing, she never heard him leave.
Pausing the recording on the CCTV, Thomas opened the door, picked up the bunch of flowers, and put them into the large Biffa Bin. He sneered at the cheap bouquet as he did so, imagining that the man had bought them from a bucket on a petrol station forecourt. All he needed to get his way with the simple woman upstairs, presumably.
Raging inside, he climbed onto the exercise bike and did twenty miles on a steep gradient setting. The weather was really warming up, and he would have to start opening some windows soon. Once he had completed the cycling task, he got all the cleaning materials he had bought, and began to clean the house from top to bottom. Everywhere except the bedroom of course.
Four hours later, he was feeling calmer, and very hungry. The wine he opened was a delicious Gevrey-Chambertin, and it went well with the selection of charcuterie and cheeses that he ate with some previously part-baked baguettes that he had heated up. Gillian could smell the aroma of warm bread wafting upstairs, and lay there hoping he would bring her up something to eat. He had to believe that she didn’t know about Jim Bell coming round, but it seemed he had thought she was lying.
Two hours passed on the old digital clock next to the bed, and Gillian wondered if she had been dozing. Then she heard him coming up the stairs, and the door was opening onto the dark bedroom. She was delighted. He was bringing her food after all.
But when he walked in, he was naked, and was not carrying any food.
What a tension. This could have been her chance, getting out of this horror. Love the structure of the story. xx Michael
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Thanks, Michael. Glad you are enjoying the tension.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I hope Gillian keeps remembering Jim Bell, to drive her senses. Well done, Pete. This is not looking good at all…
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I think she regards Jim to just be an older man, and former boss. She has no attraction to him at all.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Perhaps that’s a shame.
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thomas might be bad about not bringing the food for gillian for a small thing and a good story pete
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He is certainly going to be bad, you can bet on that.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Disturbing and addictive reading …hoping that Thomas gets what he deserves 🙂 x
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Glad you are finding it addictive, Carol. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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this is terrifying
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Well it is meant to be. And also trying to reflect that there are many cases like this going on every year. Many of which we don’t ever hear about because they don’t get reported
Thanks, Beth.
Best wishes, Pete.
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you are so right-
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I am so hoping Bolshy Kirsty shows up!
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Everyone is getting ahead of the story! Give Kirsty time. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Baguettes and Charcuterie are a waste of Gevrey…..
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🤣🤣
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They really are…😨
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I would drink that with anything. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Ah, OK, that’s where we differ then, Pete! I too, love that wine, but would want to do it justice
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I can understand why you feel that way. It has been a couple of years since I last had any, but I drunk it with no food, over the Christmas period. (It was a gift)
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😳
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(1) That door is always buzzing with excitement…but disappointment soon follows.
(2) Mister Bell prefers doorbells to buzzers.
(3) Bad citation; “So, that’s your lover is it? A hunchback named Bell? He looks pathetic!”
(4) The flowers were eventually collected and placed on Richard Henry Biffa’s grave.
(5) “The weather was really warming up, and he would have to start opening some windows soon.” By doing so, he would avoid having a wood pigeon slam into a window. Because the last thing he wanted was to be seen outside trying to lure an injured bird into a box. (Also, one bird-brained captive was enough!)
(6) Did you know that Mexican jumping beans are also prone to having a thumping headache?
(7) Since Gevrey-Chambertin is close to Dijon, might I suggest a certain mustard for the baguette?
(8) Poor Jim Bell. Being turned down by Gillian is a real slap in the face. And poor Gillian Baxter. Being wooed by Jim Bell got her a slap in the face.
Note: You must be doing a lot of gastronomical and oenological research for this serial. Every time I read a serial installment, I begin to yearn for a gourmet meal.
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I have eaten (and drunk) everything mentioned in the story, David. G-C is my favourite wine ever, but too expensive for ‘everyday drinking’.
I enjoyed the Quasimodo reference, and the pigeon in Beetley one too.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I can’t figure out what lividemerald2013 means by their daily comments. Trying to be funny?
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He is punning certain aspects of the story. He has always done this, and it’s okay as we know each other well.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I think maybe it will be that Kirsty who will be instrumental in getting this found out! Just a guess though!
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That’s a great guess, Lorraine. Keep guessing!
Best wishes, Pete. x
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I’ll wait and see lol xx
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This is brilliantly written. And the psychology of all this is interesting and seemingly incredible. And sometimes no jnife or really bad treatment is required to get someone hooked like this, so that they become docile. A very interesting story.
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Thank you very much, Lorraine. There have been so many factual examples of similar situations, I don’t think my serial is incredible at all.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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I meant it is incredibly written Pete, with much research that has gone into it. No, the situation happens more than people know, and also, I was just making the point that it can happen even without weapons involved. I know this personally, and that is why I know that your story is brilliant. Sorry if my word came out wrongly xx
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Not at all, Lorraine. I understood your comment completely.
I was simply confirming what you said in your comment. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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I’m glad Pete. I do sometimes fet my words mixed upmlol xx
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I never fail to get what you mean, and completely understand. x
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Lol Pete well you’re the only one that does ha ha
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Another disturbing chapter Pete…I am not trying to jump ahead of the story, but always fun to read the comments of others!
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A few readers are jumping ahead. But I love it when readers guess, John. That makes it very rewarding for me.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Obsessive, compulsive, control-freak. But Gill likes him, somewhat. Can they become co-dependent and what will happen to Jim? And what about the next door bitches? Quel melange!
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Bide your time for the ‘next door bitches’, Carolyn. They will feature again.
(Everyone is getting far ahead of the story. I think I should let my readers write it! 🙂 )
Best wishes, Pete.
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Can you imagine the number of scenarios! But I want to see where you take us. Not trying to write your story. I think it’s compulsive to try to guess?
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I love the guesses. Writing a ‘cliffhanger’ serial, the guesses are the most rewarding part by far! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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We don’t know Thomas’ background, what made him like this? Will Jim have any clue something is wrong?
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Kevin asked me about his background two days ago, and I told him he was ahead of the story. You are only one day ahead, Janet. His background is revealed tomorrow. 🙂
Gillian was correct in her assumption that Jim was ‘trying his luck’. He just thinks that she saw through his clumsy attempt to get close to her, and has no idea about anyone being in her house except her.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Gillian’s knee should be twitching by now…
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That won’t be all that’s twitching, I suspect.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Not if that knee finds its target.
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I think you are forgetting that Gillian actually enjoys his ‘attentions’. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Getting slapped about sounds really enjoyable, lol.
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There is no accounting for the women who tolerate such things, but sadly there are thousands of them. (I have close experience of one, in my own family)
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