This is the seventh part of a fiction serial, in 783 words.
Trying to take his mind off the need to empty his bladder, Jon found his thoughts drifting back to his past once again.
Close to graduation, there had been the scandal with Nigel. Arrested by the police for Gross Indecency with another man in a public toilet on Hove seafront, the tutor’s life unravelled quickly. Resigning from his position, and no doubt losing his cosy family life with a long-suffering wife. For Jon, it was on to teacher training, and then a job as an English teacher in a West London school. A rented one-bed flat in Hammersmith, followed by a baptism of fire at one of the roughest secondary schools in the area.
Controlling the behaviour in the classrooms was near impossible, and most of his colleagues had stopped trying a long time ago. Like them, he was soon going through the motions, and accepting the appallingly low performance results. But unlike them, he was writing in his spare time, churning out manuscripts that he sent off in batches to anyone who would read them.
After watching a television series about a determined and efficient police detective, he concluded he could do a better job. Two years later, his first Inspector Johnson novel was published, he had an agent and had tendered hs resignation, prior to moving back to Brighton.
The rest, as the saying goes, is history.
As anyone knows, trying not to think about having to pee makes the urge to go worse, not less. Scanning the street through the van windows until it was clear of pedestrians or traffic, he grabbed his things, and exited through the back doors. Perhaps there would be a toilet in the church, though that seemed unlikely. Jon knew little about churches, other than a few he had researched for his novels. Like most people christened in the Church of England, he was only ever inside a church for christenings, weddings, or funerals.
In case anyone was watching, he held up his phone, pretending to take photos of the building as he approached it. His plan was to walk around to the back, and if nobody was around, he would relieve himself against the ancient stones. Not the gravestones of course, just the back wall. By the time he reached the rear of the church, the sense that relief was imminent made him feel relaxed. There didn’t seem to be any CCTV above him, so he put his phone away, and approached the wall.
Just then, a back door opened, and a man walked out into the churchyard.
Judging from the black suit, charcoal grey shirt, and white dog collar, he had to be the vicar. But as he was also a black man in excess of six-feet six tall who looked more like a professional basketball player, Jon wasn’t sure. Pretending to inspect the stonework, he contrived not to notice the man, until he was addressed by him. “Good afternoon sir, are you interested in my church? That stonework is actually medieval, but the building existed before that, in Saxon times”. He smiled, showing a row of strong white teeth that looked powerful enough to bite through the very stone he was describing.
Jon explained that he was a writer, a novelist researching a new book. He might well feature the church in it, so was doing some research. Shifting from foot to foot like an awkward schoolboy, he finally cracked and asked the vicar if there was a toilet inside he could use. He made a joke about drinking too much coffee before leaving the hotel.
“Of course, my friend. There is a toilet in the vestry. Many of the parishoners get taken short when my sermons go on too long you know”. He grinned, and opened the back door. “Follow me, I will show you where it is”.
Never had he known such relief, as his powerful stream felt as if it might well drill a hole in the porcelain. Tomorrow morning, he was definitely going to have to buy some kind of plastic container. As he exited the toilet, the vicar was waiting for him in the vestry. “A novelist you say? I might have read some of your books, what’s your genre?” Jon explained about the Inspector Johnson series, and gave the vicar his real name. The tall man shook his head. “No, not familiar with those”. Then he winked. “I much prefer horror, to be honest, but don’t tell anyone”.
Jon was hoping to say thank you and take his leave, but as they entered the main part of the church, the voice boomed behind him.
“Don’t rush off, I will show you around now you are inside.”
He totally blew his cover! What was he thinking? I have to say I sort of like the cleric! xoxo, C
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Glad you like the vicar, Cheryl. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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You nailed it, Pete! 🙂 Most of the clerics i know are loving the horror genre. Maybe its related to the education of exorcism. 😉 xx Michael
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Good to hear I am on the right track!
Best wishes, Pete.
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Will you try to present us a priest as a murderer, Pete? Lol
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As if I would do that… 🙂
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Another nice detour Pete, except that it probably is a very well thought out tour!
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Thanks, John. Part 8 now published. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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This is an interesting twist. I hope this gives Jon some insight for his new book.
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I suspect something will be revealed, Jennie. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes!! 😀
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I wonder if they will walk quickly past the locked door on the tour of the church, perhaps a muffled scratching noise from the crypt 🙂
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You’ve been watching too many Hammer films mate. 🙂
Cheers, Pete.
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(1) Did you hear about the gay soldier who was busted for Gross Indecency? They called him G.I. Joe.
(2a) Baptism of Fire: What Hephaestus, a hammer-wielding blacksmith, made his children endure in order to guarantee their godliness.
(2b) One Bedroom Flat: It wasn’t flat until the hammersmith took a hammer to it.
(3) It can be tough to tender one’s resignation.
(4) “Perhaps there would be a toilet in the church.” If so, I hope the vicar reminds Jon that gross indecency is a sin. (Preferably, before they go at it.)
(5) A church that has mid-evil stonework is religiously compromised.
(6) A six-foot tall black man has to go through a lot of hoops to become a vicar.
(7) “Many of the parishioners get taken short when my sermons go on too long…” I have a brief comment. You went to great lengths to get “short” and “long” in the same sentence.
(8) Bad citation: “Never had he known such relief, as his powerful stream felt as if it might well drill a hole in the porcelain baptismal font.”
(9) The vicar prefers to read tales of horror. That’s a devil of a choice for a vicar!
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I liked how you got hoops in there, David. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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How to remain anonymous?……
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Jon wasn’t thinking when he gave his real name. Vanity.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yep
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Is there going to be a coincidence now? Warmest regards, Theo
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A clue, rather than a coincidence. Or are clues always coincidental? Hmm… 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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The vicar doesn’t seem like he’d be calling for help.
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I think he is hoping to get in the book, Mary. We will see tomorrow. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Laughing at Novel Reader’s first comment followed by Stevie’s 😊 I was thinking the vicar may be the one who posted the letter! Every new character will be a suspect for your readers!
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Ah, suspecting the vicar? You fell into my trap, FR! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I’m suspecting everyone including the postlady until proven otherwise! 😊
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Not another pervy vicar I hope, lol.
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I doubt that. Just a kindly one I think.
Best wishes, Pete.
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jon sure did the right choice about his career
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It worked out very well for him, that’s true.
Best wishes, Pete.
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maybe the man might want to show jon something
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Just the church, I hope. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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🤣🤣
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