This is the twelfth part of a fiction serial, in 723 words.
Halfway through that second year at school, I started to attract interest from some of the girls. They seemed to grow up faster than the boys, and even back then they got away with wearing some make-up and shortening their skirts by turning over the waistband.
One day as I was walking home, a girl I vaguely knew as Toni ran up to me as I walked along my street. She extended a hand with some folded paper in it. “Sophie says to give you this”. Then she turned and ran back to a group of girls in the distance, and they all started laughing hysterically.
Sophie Hallett was one of the better-looking girls in my year. Despite being the same age as me, twelve, she could easily pass for fifteen. I once saw her out with some friends at the shopping centre, and she looked about eighteen dressed up in her weekend clothes. I opened the paper and read her note.
‘I think you’re cute. Do you like me? If you do I will meet you outside Spud’s Plaice fish and chip shop on Friday at six’. That was a surprise, and at least I had a couple of days to think about it. Funnily enough, I was more attracted to Toni. She was a bit chubby, but I liked her jet black hair and big round eyes. Sophie was very fashionable, but also stick-thin.
That night, I talked to Uncle Brian about it, expecting him to be jealous, and not at all pleased. But he was enthusiastic. “I think it is a good idea for you to get to know girls, even though you are still far too young. But if you prefer Toni, you should tell her. No point going on that chip shop date with Sophie if you don’t fancy her. Those good-looking popular girls can be very fickle anyway”.
It wasn’t easy to get Toni on her own, as she was almost always hanging around with Sophie and the couple of others. By chance, I saw her in the corridor outside the girl’s toilets on the ground floor. As I walked up to her, she smiled, nodding her head at the door. “Sophie’s in there with the others, you will have to wait until she comes out unless you want me to go in with your message”.
When I told her I would sooner go out on a date with her, and that she should tell Sophie thanks but no thanks, I thought she was going to fall over with shock. “Me? Really? You sure? You’re not just messing me about?” I reasured her that I was serious, and said I would meet her outside the chip shop instead, even buy her dinner from there if she wanted. She nodded, her face almost splitting in half with a huge smile.
“Okay then, but I have to be home by when it’s dark. If you’re making a fool of me, my dad will get you, so tell me now”. I did my best to convince her I liked her, then I left her to tell Sophie the bad news.
Uncle Brian was amused when I told him, but not so amused when he asked me her surname. Malone? As in Patsy Malone? Good God, he is doing a twenty-year stretch for armed robbery, and his wife Maria is as scary as he is. You will have to be careful, Danny. For Christ’s sake don’t upset the girl”. I told him she said her dad would get me if I upset her, and wondered how he would do that from prison. Uncle Brian was shaking his head. “You have a lot to learn, my love. He can reach out from any prison. I wish you had told me it was a Malone, Jesus they only live three streets away”.
On the Friday, Sophie was blanking me completely, acting as if I didn’t exist. But every time I saw Toni, she blushed and gave me a smile. Uncle Brian had left me out twenty quid, and a note. ‘Look your best, have a bath, and buy her anything she wants. Make sure to get her back to Maria’s on time, and whatever you do, don’t feel her up. xx’
As I walked down to Spud’s Plaice, I was feeling pretty good.
Are you on the way to create a “Bonnie and Clyde”-remake, Pete? :-)) xx Michael
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Nothing like that, as you will see.
Best wishes, Pete.
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😉 xx
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I’m finally catching up on the Danny series! “Don’t feel her up,” good advice! I don’t know why but I’m worried! 💕C
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Who are you worried about though? He likes Toni. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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He finally is confronted with others who aren’t afraid of violence. The Malones! Maybe they will add to his crime repertoire.
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The Malones continue to feature, at least for a while.
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This is getting really interesting! How will Danny handle this?
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He likes Toni a lot, so she will be safe.
Best wishes, Pete.
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She will, but not Sophie. Best to you, Pete.
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Ahhhhh young love but will young love and Danny bode well …Time will tell x
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He likes Toni, so that’s a start. 🙂
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I am anxious and yet very nervous to see where this leads!
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Anxious and nervous? I will take that as a compliment, John.
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Oh it is, Pete..I was a day behind so will let yesterday’s chapter settle fr an hour or so before diving into Danny’s life again!
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Such fatherly advice—”Don’t feel her up.”🤣
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Brian doesn’t know much about girls and women, Pete. 🙂
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don’t mess with Toni!
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Not with her family at least. 🙂
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(1) Young boys go for older girls. Old men go for younger women.
(2) Danny is Sophie’s Choice.
(3) Toni Malone dreamed of following in the footsteps of Nomi Malone, the fictional Las Vegas showgirl, but knew she’d have to lose a few pounds and develop an aggressive personality.
(4) Bad citation: “Toni nodded, her face almost splitting in half. Fortunately, only her hair parted down the middle.”
(5) The owner of the fish and chips place tells young boys there are plenty of fish in the sea. And he tells motorcycle cops that there are plenty of CHiPs in L.A.
(6) Patsy Malone is in prison because he’s “such a patsy.” His brother, Bugzy Malone, gets a bad rap for being so grimy. Patsy’s wife, Maria Malone, is scary because she can peel M&M’s and human flesh with equal speed and precision.
(7) Patsy can reach out from any prison even when he’s not armed.
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You did well with the film reference for ‘Sophie’s Choice’! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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well there goes the date
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He has the option of the alternative date, with Toni.
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Well something must happen to Toni as he isn’t married to her when this story started.
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They are only 12 years old. Toni has a long way to go yet. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Maybe Brian is right to worry…
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Or Danny will be happy with Toni. Who knows?
Best wishes, Pete.
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Ha ha, this reminds me of The Godfather when Michael goes walking with Appollonia for the first time. A few steps behind are a group of her relatives and his bodyguards with guns, lol.
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Not quite as intense, but you will see you are on the right track, Stevie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Look out anybody that wrongs Toni 🙂
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She doesn’t know it yet, but she is also under danny’s protection now.
Cheers, Pete.
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Probably not a great idea to knobble Toni but wondering who else is there for him to kill off.
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He likes Toni. I reckon she will be safe. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Hmmm, I wonder where were going with this….
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The story started when he killed his wife at the age of 28. So we are going in time-line, to reach that point again. That’s the current plan, anyway. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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No, I get th@t, I was just meaning with regard to the girls
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Ah, I see. All will become clear soon. 🙂
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