This is the twenty-second part of a fiction serial, in 798 words.
The day before Toni flew out to Ireland, I gave Uncle Brian some money and asked him to buy me a bottle of Bushmills when he went shopping. I told him the truth, that it was a Christmas gift for Maria, to keep her sweet.
It was never going to be wrapped and go under a tree though.
My uncle was taking Vallium now, after telling his doctor that he was very stressed at work. I had already stolen a few of his tablets from the bottle in the bathroom cabinet, and when he gave me the whisky, I crushed three of them into a fine powder, before adding it to the Bushmills and giving it a good shake.
Since the visit of the kinky lawyer, and before Toni flew out of the country, Maria had sent two more women to my house in the late afternoon. One of them had cried after, and said she felt ashamed. The other one wanted me to tie her hands to the headboard with some cord she had brought along, then swear at her while we did it.
I guessed that most were wives of prisoners doing time, or contacts like the lawyer, and I was beginning to wonder just how many women Maria knew who were willing to pay for sex so their husbands never found out they were being unfathful.
As well as the money, their meetings with me gave Maria a huge hold over all of them. One anonymous word from her to the police, and they would be arrested.
The arrangement to see Maria was on the first Monday of the school holidays. It was cold and bright, and she told me to come to her house just after three. To hide the fact that the Bushmills had already been opened, I kept my hand around the top as I showed it to her, then pretended to crack the cap as she went to get her tumbler. I knew it was her favourite tipple, and she needed no second bidding to pour a large slug.
Once that had been gulped down, she smiled at me as she refilled her glass. “We’ll have to do it down here, so we will. My Liam’s in bed upstairs with the flu. He’s taken some medicine, and he’s fast asleep. So keep the noise down”. I wondered why she said that, as I never made any noise.
When the second drink was almost gone, she struggled out of her skinny-fit jeans and panties then sprawled out on the sofa in her version of a seductive pose. I did some of my best acting, pretending to be excited by her, and saying lots of things that she loved hearing. When it was over she was beginning to look very tired, and filled her glass again after lighting a cigarette. “Did you bring the money from the last one? Did she ask you to tie her up? She said she might”.
I handed over the sixty pounds, and she gave me back thirty. “You’re a good boy. Here, take half”.
Lying back on the sofa with her jeans still crumpled on the floor in front of her, she took another big swallow of the whisky, then yawned noisily. “Jeezus, Mary, and Joseph, I feel bloody tired. Must have had too much of the old Black Bush without eating”. Her eyelids were flapping, and I could see her screwing up her eyes, trying to focus on me from across the room.
Moments later, the tumbler fell out of her hand, and her head tipped back onto the cushion. She was out cold.
In her kitchen, I carefully tipped the vintage gas cooker forward until the safety chain stopped it falling. The racks inside made a scraping sound, but it wasn’t too loud. I could see the rubber gas pipe connecting from the wall into the cooker, and I used a tea towel wrapped around the connection to loosen it. It was harder than I expected, but the rubber was old and greasy, and eventually shifted.
The tiny hiss I could hear as the gas began to escape was all I would need. As it was so cold, every window in the house was closed, and with the living room next door, the gas would soon find a level. Easing the cooker back into place, I left the house quietly, hearing Maria snoring as I closed the door with an almost inaudible click.
Lying on my bed writing an essay for homework, I checked the time on my digital alarm clock. It was just after seven, and I was starting to feel hungry.
As I got up to go downstairs and make something for dinner, the explosion from three streets away rattled our windows, and made my ears pop.
What a criminal, but indeed a well structured story, Pete! Keep the tension high. 🙂 xx Michael
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He is good at what he does. Natural talent.
Best wishes, Pete.
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unfortunately, i say.
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Oh, Danny. Uncle Brian seems the only one left to kill. Well done, Pete!
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Uncle Brian is safe for now. Danny needs somewhere to live. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Ah, ha! Pete, surely you must be a relative of Agatha Christi.
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I have read a lot of books, and watched a lot of films, Jennie. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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You’re far too modest. 🙂
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Jeez he’s nothing if not inventive and clever I wonder which youtube channel he gets this from …Tweeted for you, Pete
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He has watched a lot of films and TV shows, Carol. 🙂
(And so have I…)
Best wishes, Pete. x
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He has a talent for killing, that’s to be sure!
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Must have been born into him, John. He’s too young to have learned it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Danny seems so much older than 13! Well Maria certainly went out with a bang! 💕C
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He grew up fast. Given his life experience so far, I think that’s understandable! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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For a 13-year old, he is a meticulous planner. I’m expecting him to screw up at some point.
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Remember the beginning parts of the story, Pete. You could well be right. 🙂
(His planning comes instinctively, despite his youth.)
Best wishes, Pete.
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(1) Too bad that the Bushmills won’t go under the tree. Irish whiskey is quickly absorbed by the thirsty root system, and that is guaranteed to get the trunk drunk.
(2) Keep it legal: For minors (under the age of 18), steal some Vallium tablets, crush them into a fine powder, and add the powder to a strawberry shake. Now you can turn on the gas!
(3) BDSM = Brutal Danny Snuffs Maria
(4) I once poured a large slug out of a previously opened bottle of tequila. I actually saved its life, because I was going to make a salted margarita.
(5) She sprawled out on the sofa in her version of a seductive pose. And then Pierre-Auguste Renoir picked up his paint brush and went to work.
(6) Know what you’re doing between a woman’s legs! Otherwise, when withdrawing your head, you’re likely to complain: “Must have had too much of the old Black Bush without eating.”
(7) A falling tumbler? Where are we, at the circus?
(8) Danny heard a tiny hiss as the gas began to snake its way through the house, soon to rattle distant windows. #HissingRattlesnake
(9) Danny makes Baby Boomers nervous.
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Bushmills is often caled ‘Black Bush’ here, but I suspected you wouldn’t be able to resist that opportunity. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Hey Pete! How you doing? Best wishes!
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Same as always, Pejj. We have been busy at home recently, since my wife decided to ‘declutter’! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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It does help to declutter lord knows I must return to doing it.
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Now an explosion. What’s next? Arson?👀
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Arson is harder to disguise, so I doubt he wil try that.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Uncle Brian will be pleased?
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He might. Then again…
Best wishes, Pete.
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And he’s still only 12?
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He turned 13 in a previous episode, Stevie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Good job!
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Simple, and very effective. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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yes, he was born to this
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He certainly was, Beth.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Just as well there was an explosion, I was worried about him leaving fingerprints and evidence in Maria’s house.
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He can afford to leave evidence like fingerprints in Maria’s house with impunity, as he is her daughter’s boyfriend. Even DNA on Maria would be okay, as Danny’s DNA has never been taken by the police or recorded on any database.
Best wishes, Pete.
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B*****d
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An efficient one though.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Hmm
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I see your Hmm, and raise you a Aha! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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what a plan made by him boom
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It seems to have worked well.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Danny is well clued up on the art of murder, his book collection must be extensive 🙂
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He doesn’t read up on it mate, it’s just ‘natural-born’ talent! 🙂
Cheers, Pete.
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