This is the thirtieth part of a fiction serial, in 798 words.
Livvy started by occasionally sauntering over to my desk to ask me about things I knew she already knew the answer to. She would lean in a little too close, slide her foot out of her shoe while she was talking, and many other things I already recognised as signals. It took her a couple of weeks before she made the plunge to ask me outright for a favour.
“I was wondering if you could give me a lift home tonight, Danny? It has started pouring down, and I will get soaked waiting for the bus”.
In the car, she gave me directions to a road in a part of town I didn’t really know. It was out on the way to the Golf Club, in an affluent district I never had cause to visit. As we got closer to her parents’ house she tried to suggest something in a casual maner, but it sounded like a prepared speech.
“Have you seen the latest Spider-Man film? I was thinking of going to see it on Friday after work, and wondered if it was any good”. Given how everyone was so attracted to her, I was surprised she didn’t seem to have a boyfriend. So I asked if she was planning to go to the cinema with a friend on Friday. Her reply was too eager.
“Oh I had a boyfriend while I was at college, but he went up to university in Durham, and we decided to split up. Long-distance relationships are always fragile, don’t you think?” That reminded me of Toni moving to Ireland, but I didn’t mention that, just nodded. As I turned into her road, she sounded a bit desperate.
“You could come with me if you want, as you haven’t seen it”. I had no interest in the Spider-Man film, but agreed to go. I said we could go straight from work on Friday, and I would take her for a drink before, and a pizza after. Her smile lit up her face. “That’s a date then”.
The film wasn’t my sort of thing, but she seemed to enjoy it. She even tried to buy her own ticket, but I wouldn’t let her pay. In the pizza place, she asked me lots of questions about my home life, and I told her things were going to change drastically in a few weeks, when I became eighteen. I paid the bill there too, and she touched my hand as we waited for my change. “You are such a gentleman, Danny”.
When I stopped the car outside her house, she made no effort to get out, sitting waiting for me to kiss her.
So I did, for quite a long time.
Then I asked if she wanted to go out with me again, and she nodded vigourously. “Of course I do, silly”.
We became a couple that night, and she soon told everyone at work that she was my girlfriend. Her parents were well-off, and often went away at weekends to a holiday home they owned at Southwold. After three dates, Livvy told me I could stop over the following Saturday night. “If you want to, Danny. It’s up to you”.
I told her I wanted to.
Before we went to sleep that night, she was lying next to me, holding me close. “Oh wow, Danny, that was amazing. I never expected anything like that. Where did you learn to be such a wonderful lover?” I just smiled and said it was natural talent. I wasn’t about to let her into the dark side of my life.
Two days before I was eighteen, I rang and made an appointment with the solicitor for the day of my birthday. I took the day off work, and that evening I was going out with Livvy, who wanted to take me for a celebratory Chinese meal. Uncle Brian had asked me what I wanted as a present, and I told him I didn’t want anything.
He had looked very nervous when I said that.
When I showed the solicitor the will I had retrieved from the loft, he was polite and businesslike. “Yes, we hold the deeds here, and a copy of the will. The property can be transferred to you quite easily, just a few days to complete the paperwork, and you will own it”. I asked if that meant I could sell the house, and he nodded. “It will be your property, to dispose of as you see fit”.
That was music to my ears.
The Chinese meal was excellent, and Livvy had bought me a digital watch too. It was only a Casio, but the thought was there.
As a bonus, we had sex in the back of the car, in the deserted car park of the Golf Club.
Hmm… I wonder who this Livvy that likes superhero films sounds like 🙂
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I promise it’s not you! (I don’t think she likes Loki, anyway. ) 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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She’s missing out! 🙂
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Oh, how can he sell the house with his uncle living there. Will now come the time for him? The tension is increasing, right? 😉 xx Michael
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He can sell it, because he now legally owns the property. Uncle Brian will have to leave the house.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I feel a buildup to the eighteenth birthday coming on!
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Your feeling is a good one, Jennie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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See, you write in a way that makes people feel. Best to you, Pete.
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Another terrific chapter Pete…can’t wait for him to tell his Uncle what’s going on!
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Brian finds out the hard way, John .
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I almost feel sorry for Brian if it wasn’t for the fact he is a kiddy fiddler…but young Danny he is very mercenary for one so young …Tweeted for you , Pete x
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Thanks, Carol. Danny likes to get revenge, no doubt about that. He bides his time…
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Sayonara, Brian. I think the real question will be if Brian decides to keep living.
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Or how long he gets in jail, Pete.
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(1) “She would lean in a little too close, slide her foot out of her shoe while she was talking…” Al Bundy suggests that someone tell Livvy that Danny is not a shoe salesman. (Also, if she needs a lift, then she must be awfully short.)
(2) Bad citation: “As we got closer to her parents’ house she tried to suggest something in a casual manner. ‘Do me, Danny! Do me now!’ she begged, ripping open her blouse.”
(3) After Spider-Man got too old to battle super villains, he began a lucrative career as a web designer.
(4) Overheard:
Egyptian man: “I’m going to take you out on a pizza date.’
Italian woman: “When?”
Egyptian man: “Palm Sunday.”
(5) “Long-distance relationships are always fragile, don’t you think?” Earth girls are easy, but Mac, Zeebo, and Wiploc do see your point.
(6) Excerpt from “Grease” script:
Sandy: “Oh wow, Danny, that was amazing. I never expected anything like that. Where did you learn to be such a wonderful lover?”
Danny: “I learned about T-Birds and T-Bees at Rydell High.”
(7) A Chinese meal, followed by a Japanese watch?
(8) “As a bonus, we had sex in the back of the car, in the deserted car park of the Golf Club.” Did they engage in foreplay?
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Good film references and a classic golfing pun too! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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buh, bye, danny.
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I think you mean Brian, Beth. Danny isn’t going anywhere.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes,got my future victim and busy killer mixed up!
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Oh, Danny boy, where is it all going to end…
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It ends not long after Eve, Jude. Turning full circle to the beginning.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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He lied when he told her he had ‘natural ability’. He should have been honest and replied, ‘Practice. Practice. Practice.’
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Perhaps he didn’t want her to be aware of just how much ‘practice’ he had been having, Don. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Uncle Brian is in trouble now. Good job.
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Thanks, Molly. The world is about to turn upside down for Brian.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I wonder how Uncle Brian is going to take the news? Everything coming up roses for Danny, I can’t help but wonder when his luck is going to change, and all those heinous deeds catch up to him? Hugs, C
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Remember the first few episodes, Cheryl. Your answer is in them.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Poor Danny seems to be devoid of feeling. Can anyone get to him?
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He liked Toni, and he does like Livvy. But I don’t think he knows what ‘Love’ is, Carolyn.
The people he likes just don’t get killed, and he thinks that’s enough. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Ho hum
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Hi Ho. 🙂
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😄😄
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wow a nice girlfriend and a house too
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Yes indeed. Life is improving for Danny.
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Sounds like Uncle Brian has a shock coming…
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Tomorrow’s episode reveals Brian’s fate, Stevie.
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Things are going wellfor him then, maybe not for Brian now though.
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Brian gets some bad news tomorrow.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I thought it was likely.
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