This is the fifteenth part of a fiction serial, in 837 words.
Benedict.
One more thing Gabby managed to ruin for us was graduation. Talk around the uni was that her degree would not be awarded, as it was being investigated. They were comparing her course work with the style and content of Andrew Donaldson, and it looked like she would be accused of cheating. That would mean no qualification for her, and a lifetime of living down her reputation. As for Mister Donaldson, he was already gone, and nobody knew where he was hiding.
We were not going back for the graduation ceremony. Too many eyes staring at us, whispers behind hands. And no doubt the press would be there, milking the last drops of scandal left in the story It was all too much for our parents, though the thing that upset my mum most was finding out I had been calling myself Benedict. “What was wrong with the name I gave you? That really hurt me, Ben”.
Mikki came to stay at my parents’ place before going home to her mum. Dad said we might as well share my bed, seeing as we had been doing that in Norwich anyway. I suppose we saw ourselves as a long-term couple from then on, and it just didn’t occur to us to imagine life with someone else. We stopped talking about Gabby too. If we had got into that again, we would have ended up having to admit we were both still in love with her.
I tried to contact Kimberley Lau through Facebook, but she had made her page private. We both felt sorry for her, though the main emotion was jealousy, to be honest. Kim had managed to go to the next level with Gabby, something Mikki and me had only ever dreamt about.
Four weeks after we got our degrees in the post, Mikki applied for teacher training, to become a primary school teacher. She was so pleased to be accepted, I went down and visited her at her mum’s. I had to sleep on the sofa that weekend though. Her mum was old-fashioned in that way. I had no idea what I wanted to do. The events of those final few months had messed with my head, but I had to do something to start earning a living.
That’s how I found myself working for a bank, in the call centre for their online customers, offering tech support. That was about as far removed from my earlier ambitions as I could have imagined. But the money was good.
Steve James was not one to let a story die. The Missing posters might have fallen off the lamp-posts and trees, and no newspaper in the entire country was still interested in his story, but he would not let go. Like a terrier shaking a dead rat, he kept on at his contacts, and went the extra mile to shake up anyone remotely involved with Gabby.
Turning up at the Lau house early one morning, he took photos as he shouted questions at her surprised father. When the door was slammed in his face, he took photos of the closed door. Then he climbed over the side gate and took photos of the windows at the back of the house, smiling as he decided which one he would claim to be Kimberley’s bedroom.
His favourite moment was when he discovered that Gabby’s mum had been discharged from hospital. He drove to London, found her flat, and knocked on the door holding a litre bottle of vodka up to the spy-hole. As he suspected, she let him in. Then once half of the bottle had gone, he had her on his voice recorder, slurring all the sordid details of her own past, and Gabby’s too.
With the money running out and needing to do something fast, he took that story to the tabloid editor. Adding some photos taken on his phone showing the state of the flat inside, and the state of the alcoholic woman slumped almost in a coma, wearing only a filthy, flimsy nightdress. They ran with it, dragging in the entire backstory, and making it look like it was all Gabby’s mum’s fault.
When he got back to Norwich, Steve took stock. Not enough money to make the move yet, and the last story didn’t get the traction he had hoped. It never even got a mention on the telly news, and only a couple of other newspaper websites ran it. Not for the first time in his life, he was wondering where to go next. Then his phoned pinged, a message alert.
It was a long-lens close-up photo of a woman sitting on the decking of one of those log-cabin lodges that you see in holiday parks. She had brown hair, and was wrapped up in an oversized dressing gown.
She could have been anyone, except for those lips like little pillows.
Steve read the message under the photo, which was all written in caps.
£500 CASH FOR THE ADDRESS. YOU GOT 24 HOURS. TEXT BACK.
It seems there will be some more twists with this very mysterious Gabby. Thanks, Pete! You are keeping the lunch hot, before it will be served. 😉 xx Michael
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That’s the idea, Michael.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes! Thanks for your efforts on creating such captivating stories, Pete! xx Michael
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You surprise me every time Pete! Did not expect this twist. I’m loving this series but I’m in a time crunch and have to fit in time to read when I can! Hugs, C
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I try my best to surprise when I can.
A time-crunch sounds painful! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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This story is so convincing I was looking for the photo so I could earn the money!
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I love that. Thanks very much, Elizabeth. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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like a bad penny, she always returns
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Did she ever really go anywhere? 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes, it is time for something to happen. Warmest regards, Theo
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I know. 14 parts was a long time to wait. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I keep waiting for Gabby to resurface, though I suspect it will be to try and con somebody out of money.
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Gabby resurface? That seems likely, given the text message. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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(1) Can you imagine if they had named the 1960’s TV series featuring Mark Wedloe and his lovable black bear, “Gentle Benedict?” The viewing audience would have found that title unbearable.
(2) Benny will never be chubby Mikki’s hubby if she stays happily in love with Gabby.
(3) “I had to sleep on the sofa that weekend though. Her mum was old-fashioned in that way.” Had she been truly old-fashioned, Ben would have slept in a pile of hay with the cows.
(4) The money was good at the bank. Were this not the case, the UK National Central Office for the Suppression of Counterfeit Currency and Protected Coins (UKNCO) would be investigating.
(5) Since the Missing posters have fallen off the lamp-posts and trees, the Missing posters are now missing. (If interest in the case has fallen, then something is amiss.)
(6a) Is shaking a dead rat the same as a beating a dead horse? (National Terrier Club: “Hello? Size matters!”)
(6b) “When the door was slammed in his face, he took photos of the closed door.” Yes, but not until he pulled his face away from the door to provide space for his camera.
(7) How did Steve James procure a bottle of vodka? I thought the world was smashing vodka bottles in protest of Russia’s invasion of Ukraine!
(8) Gabby’s alcoholic mum was “slumped almost in a coma, wearing only a filthy, flimsy nightdress.” Not a pretty picture, but you should see her when she’s NOT expecting company!
(9) “She could have been anyone, except for those lips like little pillows.” So much mention of those lips have been made that Inspector Duggan should have called this the Pillow Case.
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I remember Gentle Ben! That took me back, David. One of my female friends had a crush on the guy who owned the bear. 🙂
It was shown in Israel too, but they changed the title to ‘Gentile Ben’.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Terrific chapter Pete…you capture the sleazy underbelly of journalism well…sad that in today’s world, it’s the norm!
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Thanks, John. Tabloid journalism in Britain is the very definition of sleaze.
Best wishes, Pete.
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And we have it here too Pete…far too often on primetime cable television, disguised as real factual news!
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Will Steve believe anything that Gabby tells him? She’s more likely to grab the money and flee…
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Steve will not only be happy to believe her, he will make up the bits she leaves out. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Wow! He’ll be on that like bees on honey. What a cliffhanger!
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He certainly will, Jennie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I can’t wait! Best to you, Pete.
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So what is the slimey so-and-so going to do with this? Can’t wait to know Gabby truth!
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Gabby’s version is coming soon. Whether or not it is the truth is for you to decide, Carolyn.
Best wishes, Pete.
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There are always at least two sides to a story and somewhere in the middle lies the “truth”, one supposes.
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The plot thickens . . .
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Gabby finally gets to have her say, Liz.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Now, that should be interesting!
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OOOOH!
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Steve found her. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yep!
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I’m with Jude, we could do with a Steve murder, preferably by Gabby!
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No murders! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Meanie. 😁
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I’m happy to lend Gabby a knife, even though I don’t like her either.
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No murders! 🙂 x
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Aarrgh!!!
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I know you said no murder in this story, but pur lease.. someone needs to get rid of this obnoxious excuse of a man.
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Steve still has a big part to play, Jude. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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And gabby is back again.
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Yes, Gabby’s story begins soon, Molly.
Best wishes, Pete.
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No change there then…Gabby surfaces at last 🙂 x
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Gabby’s story begins soon. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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I look forward to it, Pete 😊 x
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well i guess steve will see whose address he is giving
good story pete
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Thank you. Looks like Steve might be about to find Gabby! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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