This is the thirteenth part of a fiction serial, in 782 words.
“For the next three mornings, we sat in the shallows, to get out of the heat on the beach. With our backs to the town, we chatted constantly. Like me, Desi was not just an interpreter, but a trained spy in the Bulgarian Secret Service. Clive had been completely right about that. She had been expected to not only spy on behalf of the Russians, but to spy on the Russians for the Bulgarians. I didn’t let on about my training at first, but when I needed to talk about her defecting to England through Greece, she guessed my full involvement. In my rather silly, infatuated state, I had conversations with her about us possibly living together in London, or another city back home. I would ask for a transfer to duties in England, wait until Desi had been debriefed, and see what happened. She was less convinced that MI6 would ever let that happen, but agreed it was a nice idea, and it was good to have a goal”.
Helen stood up to go and get something, returning with some paperwork.
“I thought I should show you these before continuing, Martin. I don’t want you to have the slightest idea that this is all bullshit on my part”.
Scanning the faded documents, I could feel the hair standing up on the back of my neck. As I translated them from Russian in my head, I made a decision. I told Helen that I was finishing for the day. But I assured her I would be back tomorrow, and every day after, for as long as it took. Taking my leave, I returned to the hotel. I stopped on the way, and made a phone call on my mobile. It took a while to get through to my boss, Colin Magee, and I soon shut him up as he started moaning. I told him I was quitting, effective immediately. He could keep my outstanding salary against what the hotel and expenses had cost him. Before he could splutter his outrage, I had hung up.
The next morning at eleven, I went back to Helen’s house with the video camera fully charged, a bag containing six pastries, and a black coffee for myself. When she opened the door, she looked the best I had seen her so far. Her cotton dress was a fetching dark green, her hair combed, make-up applied to her face, and she was wearing some tan-coloured tights and brown court shoes. It was as if we both sensed that we had turned a corner, and it was finally becoming serious. Despite her age and clothing, I finally had a distant glimpse of the young attractive woman she had once been.
Once I had sat down and started the camera, Helen ate two cinnamon whirls washed down with vodka, then lit a cigarette.
“Okay, let’s get started, Martin. Most evenings in Sozopol, we had been going to the same restaurant. It was a cellar bar that served food, and played Jazz music. Desi loved it there, and told me that on our last night that Saturday, she would treat me to a special Bulgarian banquet. During the day on that Saturday, we went to the harbour. There were some Bulgarian patrol boats anchored there, and a larger warship flying the Soviet flag. Desi had a Zorki camera, a rangefinder model, and she took lots of photos of me at the harbour, with that warship in the background. On the way to the meal at the restaurant, she mumbled that the Soviets were planning to site nuclear bombs in Cuba, and that it might cause a world war. She said she needed to get out of Bulgaria as soon as possible, and had lots more to tell us once she got to England. I was excited, as that meant she wanted to defect sooner, rather than later”.
She stopped to pick up two custard slices, holding one in her hand as she ate the other one.
When we got to the cellar bar that night, Desi greeted the owner, and we sat in a small booth. He produced various small courses that were all delicious, and we washed them down with red wine. As the night went on, and many customers had left, we started drinking Plum Rakia, the owner filling our glasses then smiling at us from behind the bar. Close to midnight, I needed the lavatory, and left Desi chatting with the friendly host”.
Lighting another cigarette, Helen leaned forward.
“When I came back from the toilet, Desi was lying on the floor with her throat cut, and the owner nowhere to be seen. Then the lights went out”.
This is the power of good writing ~ within 782 words, feel love and warmth, dizzy at the history of the Cuban missile crisis, and then the depressing sad (even though sadness was inevitable). 🙂
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Thanks for those kind words, Dalo.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Woah..what happened there I wasn’t expecting that 🙂 x
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Nobody was expected to be expecting that, Carol. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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It seems so, Pete you are the master of surprise 🙂 x
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I didn’t see that coming! So, what were the documents that made him quit? This was thrilling.
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Glad you didn’t see it coming. The documents will be explained later, Jennie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Looking forward to it! Best to you, Pete.
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I never thought secret agents would eat so much. Lol But you describe a wonderful environment. Certainly to increase the tension significantly soon. I like it! Thanks for sharing, Pete! xx Michael
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Thanks, Michael. Why she eats so much will be revealed.
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yikes!
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That’s what Desi said! 🙂
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(1) “I could feel the hair standing up on the back of my neck.” Martin would have experienced less of a sensation on the back of his neck had his hair stood on its tippy-toes.
(2) “Splutter” one’s outrage? I was hoping you’d pan Martin’s choice of words. #PeterPan
(3) The turn of the corner is serious. The turn of the screw is scary.
(4) Cinnamon whirls are hard to catch. (But I know why they whirl. Whirls just want to have fun.)
(5) I prefer candy bars to cellar bars. (Here in Las Vegas, we have an Ethel M Chocolates factory. Not only is the factory a candy bar maker, it’s also a candy bar seller.)
(6) As far as getting out of Bulgaria as soon as possible, Desi doesn’t have a ghost of a chance.
(7) “Then the lights went out.” I’ve heard about the night the lights went out in Georgia. But this story takes place in Bulgaria.
(8) Something was seeping out of Desi’s slashed throat. Was it red wine or blood? (Okay, “red wine” was in bad taste.)
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Literary and musical references combined. Well done, David.
Best wishes, Pete.
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The story continues to draw one in and I was in with the first episode. Warmest regards, Theo
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Thanks, Theo. I am very pleased to hear that.
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…oh, and not sure what Martin’s up to, but it will involve dosh…
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It might indeed, Sue.
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😄😄
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I knew it wasn’t a case of ‘if’ but when….
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There is always a ‘when’, Sue. 🙂
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Indeed!
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So what was in those documents? Is Martin hoping to make a scoop of his own, or is he being recruited as a spy?
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Ah, you are getting ahead of the serial, Carolyn. You will have to wait for the answers. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Wow! Strained my neck doing double-take on that twist, Pete.
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Thanks, Don. I kept that one in reserve! 🙂
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good job.
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Thanks, Molly. Glad you liked it.
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Of course I am currently most intrigued by the gradual outward appearance changes of our heroine. Knowing your proclivity to fictional seductions of younger men by older women I wonder if this serial is headed there too. If not, it is a great sort of in joke for your regular readers.
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Helen is not Martin’s cup of tea, Elizabeth. Her slightly better appearance is not a seduction attempt, on this occasion. And she is 76 years old at the time of being interviewed, which is referenced later in the serial. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Uh Oh. You mean a 76 year old is past use date? As a 75 year old I am concerned that I better hurry up.
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Not that at all. Just from Martin’s point of view. 🙂
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Whew!!
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Uh-oh! Doesn’t sound good…
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It definitely wasn’t good for Desi, Jeanne. 🙂
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Whoa, I didn’t see that coming!! :O
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That was the idea! Glad to hear it surprised you, Liz.
Best wishes, Pete.
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There will be a new installment tomorrow?
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Yes, tomorrow evening. 🙂
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Good story amazing
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Thanks very much. Glad to hear you like it.
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Welcome
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This is exciting.
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Glad to hear you think so, Lucinda.
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Oh no! Blimey.
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Bilmey indeed! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh! I wasn’t expecting that! Poor Desi.
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Glad to hear you were not expecting it, Stevie. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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