This is the twenty-ninth part of a fiction serial, in 762 words.
“One regret was that Anna was not working the next morning. Olga came with another guard, handed me a canvas holdall and told me to pack my things. I took just my cigarettes and matches, a hairbrush, and the doll Anna had given me, along with all the paperwork I had accumulated over the years. The documents you have seen, Martin. I had to wear my prison uniform and rubber shoes, no outdoor clothes were provided. Olga accompanied me in the car, which was driven by a soldier who said nothing on the way. When they arrived at the small Consulate office, Olga turned and said. ‘This is where you get out, Renton. And you are not allowed to return to the Russian Federation, ever’. She handed me a large brown envelope containing my original and long-expired passport, along with my Foreign Office identity credentials. The photo on those was taken when I was twenty-one, and I didn’t recognise the young woman looking out at me”.
Helen stopped for the usual refill of vodka and lit another cigarette.
“The car drove off, leaving me standing alone in the street. I was free to go anywhere, but had no money, no valid passport, and I was hungry, as they had not given me breakfast after my shower. I walked up to the office door and pushed a button on the side. I was surprised when someone spoke to me on a speaker above. I had never seen such a contraption. I said I was Helen Renton, and wanted to talk to someone called Desmond. I was surprised when the door clicked open. That seemed very futuristic to me, Martin. I had to walk upstairs, and at a desk at the top sat a suspicious-looking young man who asked me what I wanted. I told him I had been in prison for just over fifty years, I was a Foreign Office employee, and a British Citizen. I added that I had to talk to someone called Desmond. then showed him my old passport and credentials, and he asked me to sit on a chair at the side, as he seemed to have taken me seriously”.
More vodka drinking followed, and I sat waiting for her to speak again.
“Five minutes later, he returned with a middle-aged woman who introduced herself as Nicola Desmond. She looked embarrassed, as well she should have. She asked me to follow her through to her office, and once I had sat down, she asked me what she could do for me. Can you believe that, Martin? Well I can tell you, I gave her a piece of my mind. I did nothing less than ranting, for a good thirty minutes. To give her a little credit, she didn’t interrupt me. When I had finished, I lit a cigarette, and she said, ‘Sorry, there is no smoking here’. I told her to go and F herself, I don’t mind admitting. She left to make some phone calls, then returned with a sickly smile. She said that they were going to put me up in a hotel, find me some decent clothes, and make sure I had all I needed. Then in two days, she would be accompanying me to England on an aircraft, where I would be ‘fully debriefed’. If my mouth had not been so dry, I would have spat in her face, Martin”.
It was obvious that recalling that meeting was upsetting her. I waited as she lit another cigarette, obviously remembering her encounter with Ms Desmond.
“I was driven to a decent hotel, and not long after I arrived in the twin-bedded room, Nicola arrived with a weekend case. She was staying with me until we flew, and produced a far too large dress, and a pair of shoes that were too tight. She was apologetic, telling me she hadn’t been expecting me, and knew almost nothing about my situation. She said that we would be flying back to the military base at Brize Norton, and when we arrived, I would be handed over to John Holdsworth”.
At that point, Helen began coughing heavily. It was some time before the cough calmed down, and she was ready to carry on. Before speaking, she swallowed more vodka, and lit a cigarette. I was tempted to ask her if both were good for her, but said nothing.
“Another John Holdsworth, Martin. I asked Nicola how many there had been, and she smiled”.
At that point, I said I was finished for the day, and started to gather up my notes.
I hope its coming to an good end. The life of spies is not really the best. Well captured, Pete! xx Michael
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Spying is far from being a glamorous occupation, Michael.
Best wishes,Pete.
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I think thats true, but the James Bond series has made it a bit more desirable. 😉 hugsx Michael
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Wow! That was a gripping episode, Pete.
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Thanks, Jennie. Glad you enjoyed it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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You’re welcome, Pete. Best to you.
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Wow…this is unbelievable treatment which I’m sure has gone on before… well written, Pete, Tweeted 🙂 x
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Thanks, Carol. There was nothing heroic about spying, unlike how it is portrayed in films.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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It seems not, Pete quite opposite in fact x
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At least she’ll soon be back in England.
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Yes, she is back in London in part 30. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Well that is going back to home for her
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Yes, a return to an England that will feel strange to her.
Best wishes, Pete.
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ah, and she’s off –
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On her way home, Beth. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Looking forward to her return to England!
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Coming later today, FR. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Great chapter.
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Thanks, Molly. Glad you enjoyed it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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And now the story begins. Warmest regards, Theo
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Yes, it begins close to the end. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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One of the things that has intrigued me about this story is despite no reasonable reason to be hopeful, Helen has kept her sanity and did not give up. Warmest regards, Theo
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She was from a generation and a background where she was brought up to trust in ‘Empire’. It let her down of course, but she didn’t falter in her belief in it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Interesting. Warmest regards, Theo
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(1) The young woman in the passport photo didn’t recognize the 71-year-old woman looking down at her.
(2) Nicola thought to herself, “Rant on, Renton! Rant on!”
(3) Overheard;
Helen: “Go and F yourself!”
Nicola: “I finger myself every morning, dear.”
(4) “I was surprised when someone spoke to me on a speaker above. I’d never heard of such a contraption!” (Jeanne d’Arc upon first contact)
(5) Helen was surprised when the door clicked open. Wait till she boards the USS Enterprise! Swoosh!
(6) Basic Instinct 3:
John Correli: “There is no smoking in this building, Miss Renton.”
Helen Renton: “What are you gonna do, charge me with smoking?”
(7) “If my mouth had not been so dry, I would have spat in her face!” (Joe Camel, smoking a cigarette after being hard ridden for fifty days)
(8) Bad citation: “Not long after I arrived in the twin-bedded room, Nicola arrived with a weekend case of vodka.”
(9) “If I married John Holdsworth, how many husbands would I have?”
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6) Nice film reference again, David. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I’m sensing a foreboding feeling.
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Your radar is working well, Liz. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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That’s unfortunate.
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If I was Ms Desmond, I wouldn’t be too happy sharing a room with Helen. She might not be strong enough to strangle the woman, but she may smoke her to death.
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Yes, she won’t hold back on the smoking, that’s for sure. But Nicola has to share with her, to make sure she doesn’t phone anyone.
Best wishes, Pete.
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It’s John Holdsworth as a front for the world, and no individual can be identified and held accountable..
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Exactly that, Sue. Just a generic code name in every respect.
Best wishes, Pete.
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