This is a fictional short story, in 887 words.
Marjorie watched him as he got ready. Always the same routine. Wallet, watch, walking jacket, and stout brogue shoes. The only difference now was that he no longer reached up for little Nipper’s lead from the coathook on the hallstand. But even after they had lost their beloved terrier, George had insisted on doing the same walk.
“Got to keep my body active to keep my brain active, Marjie love. Just a short walk”.
She watched him walk down the path and close the gate behind him. He turned left like every other time, then she closed the front door and went into the kitchen. She knew he would like something when he got back at four. A big mug of tea, and some cake. She always said it would spoil his dinner, but secretly loved to see him enjoying her baking. There was some nice Victoria Sponge under the ceramic cloche. She would cut him a big slice later.
The wind was brisk, but at least it was dry. George set out at his usual pace, and when nobody was looking, he talked to Nipper. “Come on boy, let’s go along Hartgate Road today, you know you might see that tabby cat. And after that we can cut across the common, see if there are any rabbits to chase”. The tabby cat was nowhere to be seen, and the common was windy, and devoid of bunnies. Never mind, keep going, keep the routine.
How he came to be at that bus stop was a mystery to him. But when the bus arrived, George took the pass from his wallet and pressed it against the thing that went beep next to the driver. He sat halfway down, gazing out of the window. Only minutes later, at least so it seemed, the driver was standing next to him. “Last stop, my friend. We are at the terminus, you will have to change buses”. George nodded, and stood up. His legs felt stiff from sitting. But how could that be? He hadn’t been on the bus that long. Change buses, the man had said.
Three people in front of him in the queue stepped back and let him get on first. He smiled his thanks, and pressed his pass onto the machine. On the empty bus, he sat halfway down again, looking out of the window. Lots more people got on as the bus progressed. An old lady sat next to him, shopping bag on her lap. He shifted closer to the window to give her more room. She said something he didn’t hear. George never took his hearing aid out on his walks. He just smiled and nodded.
By the time he spotted the lake, most people had already got off the bus. He quickly pressed the bell for the bus to stop at the next opportunity. When it had pulled into an official stop, he had to walk back for almost fifteen minutes. There was that nice lake, with a path around it, and woods beyond. Nipper would love it there. He turned, grinning. “Come on boy. You can get a drink in that lake, and there might be some squirrels in those woods”.
The sun was setting, and he raised his hand to his face because of the glare. That low sun at this time of year could be fierce indeed.
Marjorie had cut the slice of cake and made the tea. But it was almost five now, and no sign of George. She wasn’t usually a worrier, but he wasn’t getting any younger, and he was never late home from his walk. So many times she had asked him to take the big button phone Scott had bought him for Christmas, but he said he had no use for it. Marjorie had got quite sharp with him. “That’s not the point. I could ring you, and you only have to press that green button to answer”.
But he was stubborn. Ever since she had met him, that stubbornness had been the only thing she didn’t like.
Of course he forgot things sometimes. So did she. Where you had left your glasses, or what day which bin had to go out. Everyone forgot things like that, didn’t they? But he didn’t forget anything important. Well, not unless you count that time he went to the hospital on the wrong day to have the stent put into his artery. He was adamant it was that Thursday, and refused to find the letter. But they sent him home because he was a month early. He blamed them of course. Mind you, he had been better since, much better. Then they had lost Nipper.
There was nobody walking around the lake, and inside the woods it was much darker than he had expected.
George was sure he could hear Nipper barking up ahead. A sharp persistent bark, like he had found something he didn’t like. He started to walk faster, calling out. “Hang on boy. I’m coming, Nipper old lad”. The tree root sent him flying, and the trunk of the big Oak tree cracked his skull and knocked him unconscious.
He didn’t hear the helicopters, or the shouts of the search teams with their dogs.
But then they were forty miles away, searching where Marjorie had told them he would be.
A bit sad when these things happen. But he is with his dear dog now. Excellent story telling, Pete.
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Thanks very much, Darlene. George and Nipper can walk wherever they desire now.
Best wishes, Pete.
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So sad, Pete. You write the best stories. Loosing a pet takes a big piece out of your life.
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Thanks very much, Jennie. George was finally reunited with his beloved Nipper.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes, he was. Best to you, Pete.
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Oh, what an intriguing accident. I hope they had rescued him. This remembers me on a discussion in the past, if our society really is prepared for elder people and their needs. xx Michael
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They probably didn’t find him in time, Michael. It happens a lot over here.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Reunited with Nipper so not so poor George…A sad tale told well, Pete 🙂 x
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Thanks very much, Carol.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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A rather tragic tale well told
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Thanks very much, Sue.
Best wishes, Pete.
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😊
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“But he was stubborn. Ever since she had met him, that stubbornness had been the only thing she didn’t like” The cri de coeur of wives all over the world.
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Except my wives of course. I have never been stubborn. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. xx
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You area master at telling (writing) stories. x best always, Michele
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Thanks for your kind words, Michele.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Poor George… by the sound of it he ended up with Nipper, and so there was a happy ending of sorts. Nice story, Pete.
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Thanks, Stevie. Yes, that was the idea.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Poor Marjorie ☹️
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There must be a lot of Marjories out there, FR.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I could really feel this one Pete, sad but happy as well in a way.
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Cheers, Eddy. I was thinking about life without Ollie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Nice one Pete 😉
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Thanks very much, Jack. Glad you liked it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Sue wanted you to know she loves it….well done my friend chuq
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Thank Sue for me, chuq.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Will do and thanx for making her day chuq
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This was poignant with feeling. The older we get, the more it resonates. Well done, Pete.
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Thanks very much, dear Cindy.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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A sad one Pete and I couldn’t help thinking this could be you when Ollie is no longer around.
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Sort-of based on me in an unspecified future. I often think about doing those same walks without Ollie.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Yes, I can understand that. He is a big part of your life.
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Sad one, well written, Pete.
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Thanks, Beth. Glad you enjoyed it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Your stories always have an unexpected twist! We’ll done Pete, enjoyed the read! 💕C
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Thanks very much, Cheryl. Glad you enjoyed it.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Ah, another happy ending! Couldn’t think of a better way for an old codger to go.
Cheers,
CT
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At least he was with his dog. (In spirit) I can identify with that, Chris.
Best wishes, Pete.
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There was zero sarcasm in my post Pete. ❤️
Cheers,
CT
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This is such a touching story.
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Thank you, Liz. My family has sadly been touched by Dementia on several occasions.
Best wishes, Pete.
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You’re welcome, Pete. My family has been touched by dementia as well. You wrote about it with such compassion and grace.
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PETE! Wow, beautifully written but a shocker! Powerful!
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Thanks, John. Dementia can be so cruel.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh a real tear jerker.
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Poor old George. He had dementia, and Marjorie was unaware.
Best wishes, Pete.
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It isn’t always obvious. I think we put so much down to my mother’s increasing deafness which, looking back, were the early stages of something else. Fortunately for her and for my dad, she did not live long enough to be placed in a home. She dreaded that it might happen, had begged me to never allow it. But I lived on a different continent and some things you cannot promise, unless you know you may have to break it. But then why promise?
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(1) Wallet, watch, and walking jacket, The three W’s.
(2) Around the house, Nipper is no longer nipping at George’s heels.
(3) Riddle:
……Q. What do you call a non-aggressive sponge that lives in Lake Victoria?
……A. A nice Victoria Sponge.
(4) In the U.K.: “Last stop, my friend. We are at the terminus, you will have to change buses.”
But in France: “Terminus! Tout le monde descend!”
(5) Bad citation: “On the bus, George sat halfway down. But after fifteen minutes of squatting, his knees gave out, and his butt dropped to the cushion.”
(6) “George never took his hearing aid out on his walks.” Because if he did, he’d likely drop it in the grass. So he kept it in his ear.
(7) Overheard:
Marjorie: “If you’re goin’ on a walk, George, you’d better get crackin’.”
George: “I”m headin’ out the door already.”
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You spotted my hearing aid gaffe! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I hope they finally found George but until they do, I have decided to order for myself, a ceramic cloche from Amazon in order to bake a cake for myself too ….https://www.amazon.com/Emile-Henry-France-Cloche-Charcoal/dp/B00WU4L7AG/ref=sr_1_1?crid=3CLJ68EWKIM0P&keywords=ceramic%2Bcloche&qid=1652896598&sprefix=ceramic%2Bcloche%2Caps%2C227&sr=8-1&th=1
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That looks like a very serious cloche, John.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Have you got one Pete? Do you like it?
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I have nothing like that at all, John. Sorry, I cannot help you.
Best wishes, Pete.
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The word “cloche” rings a bell.
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OUCH! That bell hurt my ears!
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh my goodness, Pete! This one gave me shivers! Well written and yes, so sad.
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Thanks for reading my fiction, Susanne. I really appreciate that.
Best wishes, Pete.
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You do have the gift, Pete!
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We all get lost. Warmest regards, Theo
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Some get more lost than others, Theo.
Best wishes, Pete.
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And more often. Warmest regards, Theo
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