This is the fourth part of a fiction serial, in 843 words.
Amanda.
There was a time when Amanda liked to be called Mandy.
A time when she used to enjoy going out with friends for drinks, or a meal.
A time when she liked the company of men, and having a regular boyfriend.
A time when she had a great job, and actually enjoyed going to work.
But not any longer. Not since Lee.
He had seemed so nice at first.
Older by a few years, but not too old.
Confident without being cocky.
Good looking without being vain.
Tough and manly without too many muscles or tattoos.
That sort of man rarely looked twice at her, let alone ask her out.
Okay, so he didn’t have a car. Some issue with his licence after leaving the army, so he said. But she had her car, and was happy to drive them around. His job sounded mysterious too. Security Consultant. Being ex-army that probably meant he worked for the Secret Service or something. He didn’t take her to any grand or fancy places, saying he had to be careful where he was seen. But country pubs were nice enough, and he always paid for both of them. So when he suggested an overnight stay in a rural location, she booked the small hotel, and paid for the room in advance.
Her treat.
She couldn’t tell anyone she was seeing him, as he had warned her not to. Her friends started to call him ‘Mandy’s Mystery Man’, and that added to the sense of fun. No photos or selfies either, confirming her excited suspicions that he was doing some cloak and dagger work.
After the weekend away, she knew she was in love with him. He had been a wonderful lover, and attentive and caring all the time. The difference between him and the last man in her life, Richard, was incredible. After work on the Monday, she bought him an expensive watch as a gift. But when she gave it to him that Friday evening, he just closed the box, kissed her, and said he couldn’t wear it at the moment.
On the way back to her flat after drinks, she had become niggled about that, and started to ask him why. As they got out of the car in the underground garage, he suddenly turned and pushed her violently, shouting as he did so. “Stop going on about the shitty watch!”. She fell hard enough to graze her elbow, and tears filled her eyes at the shock of the sudden change in him.
There were apologies of course, but she wasn’t convinced. “You can come in and phone a taxi, but I don’t want you to stay over tonight”. He had sat quietly waiting for the taxi, and left without incident. Flowers were delivered in the post for her, and a card with butterflies on it contained one word. “Sorry”. When he rang her for the tenth time, she answered. He explained about the stress of his job, the danger, constantly feeling on edge. He was sorry he had taken it out on her, but it would never happen again. He sounded sincere, so she accepted his offer of a meal the following night.
Mandy met him outisde the pub, and was upset to find him already drunk at seven in the evening, slurring his words. Alarm bells went off in her head. “Sorry, but I am going to go home. Contact me when you are sober, and I will decide if I am going to see you again”. She headed back to her car parked in a side street, confused and angry. As she got into the driver’s seat, a rough hand grabbed her. She looked up and saw Lee, a horrible smirk on his face. Then he pulled her into the gap of the open door and slammed it against her head.
Three times.
When the dizziness went away, she wiped her eyes and nose on a tissue then drove straight to the police station. They took a statement, and arranged for a police doctor to come to see her there. Photographs of her head were taken, and dressings put on the two cuts caused by the edge of the door. Then two policewomen drove her home, telling her to leave her car where it was and collect it when she felt better. They said they were going to arrest Lee at his house that night, and charge him with assault. She would be hearing about the court case in due course.
But after three days off sick at home, she rang the police and withdrew her statement. They pressed her, even mentioning wasting police time, but she stuck to it. There was no way she could face him in court and have all her past life dragged up by the defence. Another policeman phoned her later, and when she convinced him that she was not going to give evidence under any circumstances, he told her they would have to drop the charges.
After that, she just stopped going out anywhere.
A little late to the party, but I am enjoying your latest serial, Pete. Lee is such a horrible man and I feel sorry for the women. Your talent for characterization is marvelous!
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Thanks so much for those kind words, Debbie. I hope you enjoy the rest of this serial. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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A very sad ending of this sequel. Let’s hope anything like prosecution will take place. xx Michael
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They have another plan, something different.
Best wishes, Pete.
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So sad.
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One man affecting so many lives, including the four lives in this story.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes!
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I don’t think we’ve heard the last of Lee
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Dead right, Don.
Best wishes, Pete.
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So, now it begins. Warmest regards, Ed
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Yes indeed, part five just published.
Best wishes, Pete.
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(1) Newspaper headline: “Female Fab Four Flays Fowler.”
(2) Now that she loathes the company of men, does she also hate the “man” in Amanda / Mandy?
(3) Lee suggested an overnight stay in a rural location. “Why don’t you book a room at the Bates Motel? My mother recommends the place!”
(4) Fowler is a prowler. Always looking for his next victim.
(5) On the phone: “I’m sorry, Mandy. I won’t push you like that again. I might slam the car door against your head a few times in a drunken rage, but I promise not to push you to the ground again!”
(6) Lee continued to plead on the phone in his best Barry Manilow voice: “Oh, Mandy…!”
(7) Had Amanda been a hard-headed woman, she would have not been injured by Lee’s aggression. However, the car door would have been damaged.
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You didn’t let me down with that reference to Manilow’s song, David. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Lee is getting himself around, Roosalind, Denise, and Amanda, and Lynsey can’t get a prosecution to stick on him. Something need to be done!
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I’m sure something will be done. Eventually.
Best wishes, Pete.
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A slow death would be nice if you can manage that 🙂
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Domestic violence is a curse on society and on women in particular (though not always the case – some women can be controlling abusers) and not all abuse is violent which is far harder to prove. This is a bit close to the bone for me Pete, but I am interested to see where it takes you.
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We have had some experience of controlling behaviour and violence in our own close family, Jude. It is a story that needs to be told, I think.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Indeed. And it is very hard for the victim to come out or even understand what is happening.
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She made a mistake believing him when he’d said the violence wouldn’t happen again. It always does.
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Yes, that is very true. And it escalates.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I say she kills the guy. Or for lack of pursuing the arrest, he kills her. Eeeek!
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Either outcome is possible. 🙂
Thanks for your thoughts, Phil.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I have experience with manipulation. Maybe it’s one of the reasons I get so upset every time Trump finds another “out”. It’s appalling to me that he still has people believing the utter crap that comes out of him. I rarely use the word hate but I think I do hate that man.
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Controlling behaviour has recently become a crime over here, Carolyn. But you still have to prove it was happening of course, and appear in court.
(I genuinely hated Maggie Thatcher, so I understand ‘real hate’. )
Best wishes, Pete.
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I like the way you are unraveling the story for us.
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Thanks, Molly. It starts to come together tomorrow.
Best wishes, Pete.
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How utterly dreadful!!! Back in the ’80s, my mother was an advocate for adult victims of domestic violence.
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We have some experience of such things in our close family, Liz. One of the reasons I started writing this serial.
Best wishes, Pete.
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It’s an important message to get out.
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I had a feeling it wouldn’t be, Pete with you wielding the pen x
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the terrible, frequent pattern of abusers and victims
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Yes, abusive, controlling men are a blight on society, and seem to be on the increase.
Best wishes, Pete.
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or perhaps it’s just more out in the open now
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Now the fun begins or does it? Looking forward to the next episode x
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Something begins, Carol. Not sure it’s fun though. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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