This is the fifteenth part of a fiction serial, in 765 words.
Over the phone that evening, Marian told Ros what had happened with Denise.
“To be honest, I’m excited. Once I find out where Lee is working, I can send the stuff to his boss, then get Denise to complain to the Social Services about him and Daisy sleeping together. It will hit him with two things at the same time, before I put the main part of the plan into operation”.
Ros wanted to know what it was like staying with Amanda.
“A bit weird. She made a delicous lunch, then asked me to stay in my room. Luckily, there is an en-suite, and I bought some bottled water on the way here. But she hardly spoke during the meal, and stopped me saying anything about my trip to see Denise. I pushed her on that, and she held up her hand before speaking. She said we were taking a big chance by tackling Lee. He had always got away with everything, and she feared that would happen again. I told her straight, he was dealing with some very angry and capable women now. Then I realised that sounded bad, as she hadn’t agreed to his arrest when he attacked her, and withdrew her statement”.
When her sister made no comment, she continued.
“I’m getting up very early in the morning, so I can get to Lee’s bedsit before he leaves for work. He doesn’t know me, or the car, so I am hoping to be able to follow him. Then I can try to see a company name or something, somewhere to send the press cuttings. After that I will get some more cash out, buy some lager, and go back to see Denise. I will be wearing some jeans though, her place is absolutely filthy”.
The blue Subaru was still parked outside the house when Marian arrived just after six. That was possibly a good sign that Lee hadn’t left yet. Parking a few cars back, she sipped a coffee that she had bought in a petrol station, and nibbled the too-dry croissant that had to serve as breakfast. Amanda had still been in her room when she left, so she had to find the key to the Banham lock before she could get out. Luckily, she had noticed it hanging on a hook in the hallway the previous day, and remembered that just in time, before she was about to try to wake Amanda up.
He looked exactly the same as he emerged from the front door twenty minutes later. She had seen his photo on papers shown to her by Lyndsey, and the press cuttings. There was little sign that he aged since, and the blue security uniform fitted him well. If not for what she already knew about him, she could agree that he had a certain attraction.
Keeping up with his car was not as easy as she had expected. On more than one occasion she lost sight of him, and was relieved to catch up by staying on the main road. It wasn’t like that in the police films. When he indicated to turn into a large building site she carried on straight, taking the next left and parking the car. It looked like a big development was in progress, and the signs around the perimeter boasted of ‘new luxury homes’.
Trying not to be spotted, and not looking remotely like a builder or workman, Marian walked the entire perimeter. But the only sign she could see mentioning security was for Group 4. Whoever Lee was sub-contracting with did not get a mention. No point hanging around then. She would send the cuttings to the head office of Group 4, and mention the address of the site. It would get to someone, sooner or later.
Too early to call Denise yet, she drove into Hatfield and found a MacDonald’s located in a branch of an ASDA supermarket. Inside, she sat eating a breakfast and drinking a coffee, making notes. When she rang Denise over an hour later, the woman sounded fuzzy. “What’s the time? Christ, I’m still asleep. Leave it another hour and then come round”.
Marian concluded that Daisy had to get her own breakfast, and walk to school alone. She found a cashpoint at the front of ASDA and got some money out, then she went into the shop and bought twelve cans of lager that were on special offer.
By the time she found her way back to Denise’s house, it was still well off the hour she had asked for.
But she knocked on the door anyway.
I am a little bit distracted now. Let’s wait till i find back on the way. 😉 xx Michael
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I hope it starts to make sense to you, Michael.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I am sure, Pete! I only have to read the previous part again. xx Michael
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Why am I feeling this was too easy?
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I understand why you feel that. So far, it has been very easy, I agree.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yes!
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Following lee could be dangerous. The ladies need to be careful.
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He probably didn’t notice her. He was rushing to get to work, and she lost him a few times too. But they can’t keep doing it, that’s for sure.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I’m surprised Lee wasn’t suspicious about being followed.
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I doubt he noticed being followed, Stevie. Especially as she lost him a few times.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I sense it may not all go exactly as planned
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Everyone seems to be worried about their plan, Beth. Let’s have faith in the ladies.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Loose ends usually end up tripping one up. Warmest regards, Ed
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They can indeed, Ed.
Best wishes, Pete.
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(1) I always order black coffee at a petrol station, and then check to make sure it’s not Texas tea.
(2) Lee looked exactly the same as he emerged from the front door twenty minutes later. It’s true that twenty minutes doesn’t noticeably age a person.
(3) Where do hookers keep their keys?
(4) Denise had tried to get even with Lee. But when she called Charlie’s Angels, they said they were now working for Merry Maids. So Denise hung up.
(5) Marian: “Listen, Denise. You need a man in your house. Might I suggest Mr. Clean?”
(6) Cruella de Vil spotted fifteen Dalmatian puppies, and thought they would make excellent fur coats. Had those puppies followed Marian, they would not have been spotted.
(7) I don’t think it’s a good idea for Marian to visit Denise wearing a pair of Lee jeans.
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I wasn’t expecting 101 Dalmatians, David. Well done with that!
Best wishes, Pete.
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Daisy must be protected!!!
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She will be, Don. Even though nothing bad may have happened to her.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I agree with Yeti Marian does seem to be getting ahead of herself plus Lee seems to be quite smart they shouldn’t forget that… Tweeted for you, Pete 🙂 x
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Thanks, Carol. Over-confidence is not the best idea, I agree.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Something is going to go wrong…..Marian is a bit over confident.
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The best laid plans… 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Hmm, we’ll see what happens…
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You will indeed, Sue.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Hope the cuttings get to the right person!
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It seems Marian is more excited about ruining his access to Daisy at the moment.
Best wishes, Pete.
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