This is the seventh part of a fiction serial, in 756 words.
Things didn’t work out as I had expected with Janice. She was happy to eat a Wimpy cheeseburger and chips, then drink two vodka and limes in the pub after. But when I said I would walk her home, she was prepared with her answer. “That’s okay, Danny. Thanks for the dinner and drinks, but you live in the opposite direction. I’m only a couple of minutes from home, and it’s not that late. I’ll be alright. We should do this again sometime though, it was nice”. Then she kissed me on the cheek and walked away without looking back.
Unconvinced, I still felt sure she was interested. But lots of people we knew might have seen us in the Wimpy or the pub, so she was probably worried about someone telling Johnny before she had a chance to concoct a story. Janice could wait.
My Friday night date with Helen didn’t go that well either. She seemed keen enough in the pub, and expected me to see her home all the way to Islington. But when we got close to where she lived, she pulled me into an alleyway between two houses. “Better not come all the way. My mum loves Trev, and is friends with his mum. She wouldn’t be pleased if she saw me with you. It’s been nice though. Maybe we could do this again when she goes to my aunt’s caravan? I’ll be in the house alone then”. She sealed the offer with some snogging that took my breath away.
It was a long haul home after that, but I was happy with the promise of more to come once her mum had her holiday.
When I went out with Susan on the Saturday, I had to have a story ready about the leaving drink. Naturally, I told her I was bored to tears. Everyone had been at least forty, and of course I would much rather have been out with her. She seemed to accept the lie, as when we were in the cinema we only saw about ten minutes of the film, with her snogging me like a maniac in the back row. Back at her place later, her mum had stayed up late to make sure there was no hanky-panky. She made me a ham sandwich and gave me a cup of tea, but there was no chance she was going to leave us alone together.
On Sunday afternoon, I was sitting on my bed reading when my mum came to tell me that Johnny was downstairs. I hadn’t even heard the knock on the door. I said to tell him to come up, but when he walked in the bedroom, he had a face like thunder. I knew immediately that someone had told him about me and Janice. What I didn’t know until later was that it was Janice who had told him. He couldn’t shout, but his soft voice was very threatening.
“Honestly Danny, I could slap you. What are you doing up the pub with my bird? I mean to say, we are The Four Musketeers, we don’t mess around with each other’s birds, do we?” I knew better than to deny it, so just shrugged. I said how I had bumped into her getting off the bus. I was on my way to the Wimpy Bar, and it seemed to be the decent thing to ask her to join me. He shook his head. “That’s not how she tells it. She reckons you followed her along the street asking her to go to the pub. She said no, but you kept on. So she agreed to go to the Wimpy, then you pestered her to go on to The Anchor. That’s how she tells it”.
The advantage on my side was that Johhny was well aware of Janice’s past. Even as he raged at me, I knew instinctively that he didn’t believe her. So I told him that she was trying to make him jealous. It was just a burger and two drinks with my mate’s girlfriend. I didn’t touch her, didn’t even walk her home. He knew he had overdone it, but his pride kept him going. “Well I have to take her side, you know that. But what you say sounds fair too. Let’s leave it at that, but don’t try it on with her again, or there will be trouble”.
After he had gone, I went back to my book.
But I was going to have to have a word with Janice.
This is getting good, hugs, C
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Glad you think so, Cheryl.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Danny should back off of Janice, but I doubt that will happen. Well done on building the tension and complexity, Pete.
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Thanks very much, Jennie. Glad you felt that.
Best wishes, Pete.
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You’re welcome, Pete. Best to you.
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It seems that he is dancing to too many marriages, once seeing when the first fights will start .xx Michael
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He is seemingly out of control at the moment, Michael.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Well, two of the four are idiots. So, “Sour Idiots?” Warmest regards, Ed
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I might change the title, Ed. 🙂
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he’s messing with fire
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He cannot seem to stop himself, Beth.
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Danny avoided trouble this time, but it’s only a matter of time before things catch up to him.
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Yes, he is sailing close to the wind, Pete.
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He definitely bears grudges does Danny l am looking forward to where this is going xx
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Yes, grudge-bearing is his nature, undoubtedly.
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(1) Bad citation: “We should do this again sometime, Danny. Because, you know, I really like chowing down on bland cheeseburgers and guzzling one bottle of cheap vodka after another!”
(2)”She sealed the offer with some snogging that took my breath away.” Later on, Helen confided that when it came to firing off kisses, Danny was top gun.
(3) Susan snogged Danny like a maniac. Which raises the question, how does a maniac snog?
(4) Overheard:
Johnny: “What are you doing up the pub with my bird?”
Danny: “You heard about that? Who told you?”
Johnny: “Let’s just say that a little bird told me!”
(5) RoboCop to Bob Morton upon learning that the OCP project leader had taken Officer Anne Lewis out to dinner: “Let’s leave it at that, Bob, but don’t try it on with her again, or…there will be trouble!”
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(3) If you had been snogged by a snogging maniac, you would know the answer to that, David. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Geez…what I missed by being in America with a crazy uncle! Janice is going to cause trouble, but who’s going to get a black eye? This is getting delightfully complicated.
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I’m glad you like the complication, Carolyn.
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Wonderful addition to the story.
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Thanks very much, Molly.
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Hmm, I think young Danny should just leave Janice alone.
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I have a feeling he might do just that, Liz. 🙂
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I loved it when the momma gave him a ham sandwich before sending him on his way.
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The mums always used to feed us, Don. 🙂
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Perhaps Janice has a mate or twelve that he can console himself with…
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I’m sure she has quite a few mates, Stevie. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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He needs a hobby. 🤣
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He has yet to discover that girls are not a hobby. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Ha ha, good one!
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