This is part one of a fiction serial, in 770 words.
My thanks to Sue Judd for allowing me to use one of her photos as a story prompt. https://suejudd.com/
Norma was picking me up at ten. It was going to be twenty-six years. Hard to imagine, yet it seemed like yesterday whenever I tried to get to sleep. It would take well over an hour to drive there from where I lived now, but at the time it had only been ten minutes away. I chose what to wear carefully. Casual, nothing to stand out. Just another visitor.
Gregg had been everything I didn’t usually like. Short, cocky, in your face. But he had some things about him that I did like. His London accent, a good physique, cropped hair, and a very manly posture. There was nothing remotely soft about him, and somewhere deep in my mind, he seemed like the real men I had read about in books. Confident, assertive, not taking no for an answer. Attractive in both personality and looks.
I was fresh out of university, a Gloucestershire girl who suppressed her giveaway accent, and had hardly travelled. Unless you counted a caravan holiday in Wales, or a school trip to Calais. My knowledge of the world was vicarious, taken from photos, books, and study. I knew all there was to know about nineteenth century British art, but had never felt the need to visit the places where they were painted. It was a cosy world, cocooned by doting parents. But it had been a happy world.
There had been boyfriends, but nothing serious. One at school, and two more at university. My mum had told me not to give them what they wanted too soon, or they would dump me. I ignored her, but she was proved right.
Then she died, and broke my heart.
Dad took me on, trying hard to be both parents and juggle a busy life. He owned the premier auction house in Gloucester, famous for high art and expensive ceramics. To make me feel involved, he took me to work with him, and one day he told me that it would all be mine, and he wanted me to be his partner. It was so easy to slip into that life, which became so much more than my first, and only, job. I became the paintings valuer, and I was occasionally allowed to preside over the fine art auctions. The first time I raised the gavel on a thirty-three thousand pound sale, I thought I would pass out. But I didn’t.
So when I came home with Gregg after our second date, he wasn’t amused. He had only been in Gloucester for a friend’s stag night, and I had only been in that bar at the insistence of an old schoolfriend. A regular army paratrooper based in Essex was far from his idea of being the son-in-law he wanted, or the husband for his only child. I could feel the awkward atmosphere as Gregg tried to charm him, and my dad did his best to make him feel unwanted. Then the army took him away. Exercises somewhere, location not disclosed. Dad jumped on the opportunity.
“Use that time away, Alicia. You have to realise that he is not for you. Just look at the differences in background and aspirations in life. He spoke about getting three stripes in the Paras, and hoping for an army house when he got married. Can you imagine yourself in that situation? If you think about it, you must see sense”.
That’s what dads do, try to protect their daughters. But as soon as they turn against your choice of man, that makes you all the more determined to prove them wrong. That should be lesson one in father-daughter relationships. Don’t try to turn them against a man, as that will make them fall in love with him.
And of course, that is exactly what happened.
Norma did the finances at the auction house. She worked out the commissions, paid the wages of the staff, and dealt with the accountant to sort out the tax. I guessed at the time that she was at least ten years older than me. She never spoke about family, and wore no wedding ring. She was a private person, and I confess I wondered whether or not she had a thing going with my dad. There was no evidence of that though. She never once came to the house, and dad didn’t make excuses to work late, or disappear at weekends.
Back then, I had no idea what an important role Norma would play in my life. How could I?
I tried to wait until you finished this story and posted the whole thing BUT….I got to impatient and made the decision to go ahead and start it now. Lol Here I go about to read part one 😁
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I hope you enjoy it, Christina. Not many episodes left now.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Oooh, great hook!
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Glad you enjoyed that, Sue.
Best wishes, Pete.
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You’re good at grabbing the reader’s attention, Pete!
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I’m playing catch up today and this looks like a really good one Pete! Onward…hugs, C
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Many thanks for taking time to catch up. Cheryl.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Great, a new serial! Thanks, Pete! I am so sorry for another delay i had. But now i will follow this new one continuously. Thank you also for publishing the whole story of Phyllis. I will try to read it asap. Best wishes, and have a wonderful week! xx Michael
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No problem, Michael. Glad you like the new serial.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thanks for your understanding, Pete! Will now restart my reading. At this time of day without any breaks. 😉 Best wishes, Michael
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Indeed, the beginning itself sounds wonderful. But i think you will not write any romantic novel. Right? 😉 xx Michael
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That is unlikely. 🙂
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Hooray for a new serial!
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I hope you enjoy it, Jennie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I know I will! Best to you, Pete.
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Good start Pete. Will try to keep up with this one as well. 👏
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Thank you, Nigel. Part 2 just posted.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yip.. read that as well. So I’m on point. Looking forward to tomorrow’s post
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Many thanks! 🙂
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Good first chapter.Pete…Tweeted for you 🙂 x
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Thanks for that, Carol. Glad you thought so.
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Good start to another series.
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Thank you, Molly. I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
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Good set up to begin a new story. I like the looking back over many years frame for the account.
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Thanks, Elizabeth. As usual, I am building up to the ending, which is hinted at in the first paragraph.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Terrific.
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I wasn’t expecting a new serial so soon! Hurray!!
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I had to do something to avoid the Coronation hysteria, Liz. 🙂
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I don’t blame you!
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You lost me in the first paragraph between the first sentence and the second to last one. I have no idea what the narrator is trying to tell me n there. I must be loosing it. Warmest regards, Ed
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Sorry to confuse you. Just ignore the first paragraph, as it will be referenced again later, hopefully in clearer context. (It refers to the photo, but not directly)
Best wishes, Pete.
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(1) Does Norma resemble Marilyn Monroe?
(2) Gregg has three g’s. He’s quite forceful. As a comparison, the Space Shuttle launches involved a force of 3 g’s.
(3) I had to look up how to pronounce Gloucestershire. Excuse me now while I go pour myself a glouce of milk.
(4) So Alicia is involved in auction action.
(5) Dad jumped on an opportunity. Gregg jumped off a plane. They’re both jumpers.
(6) Dorian Gray tried to get Alicia to auction off his portrait, but she turned him down. “Sorry, but this painting is not holding up well. In fact, it seems to be going through fifty shades of ugly.”
(7) Gregg’s last name is Gorian. He marks every jump on his calendar.
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I really enjoyed the Gregorian Calendar! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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By the way, it is pronounced “Gloss-ter-sheer”. 🙂
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Intriguing! Good start Pete!
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Thanks, Carolyn. I hope you enjoy the story.
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Promises to be a good one, Pete.
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Thanks, Don. Pleased to hear that you think so.
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I’m happy to begin a series with you, Pete! You have a great way of grabbing readers! I appreciate the cultures I learn as well!
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I hope you enjoy it, Karla.
Best wishes, Pete.
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It’s my pleasure to read! I hope I can keep my momentum! Stay well, Pete!
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Promising, of course!
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Thanks for that, Dorothy.
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Hmm… best for a parent not to interfere in their offspring’s choice of partner. Good start, Pete.
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Thanks Stevie. Dads rarely learn. 🙂
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Intriguing start Pete. Looking forward to the rest!
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Glad to hear that. Thanks, FR.
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Nice start Pete!
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Thanks, Arlene. Glad you enjoyed it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I am delighted that you have begun a new story and this one has an excellent start. I am already pulled in.
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Happy to hear that, Janet.
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interesting how the pieces of a life fall into place
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Many more pieces to come, Beth.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I always look forward to watching your serials unfold, and guessing along the way-
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I like it best when readers guess, Beth. And I never change the ending if anyone guesses correctly. 🙂
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Tantalising Pete.,Hugs
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Thanks very much, David.
Best wishes, Pete.
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