This is the first part of a fiction serial, in 767 words.
The letter was unambiguous. The consultant wanted to see her urgently, to discuss the results of the last mammogram. Jenny had no doubt that the news would be bad. After all, she could feel the lumps easily, and one of them was becoming noticeable on her left breast. She had long thought about the outcome. Surgery, radiotherapy, chemotherapy.
Months recovering, numerous stays in hospital, visits to clinics.
And the pain of course. No getting away from that.
So Jenny made a decision, and put the letter away in a drawer.
Facebook would be good. She would find them on there. All the hateful bullies and bitches who had made her life a misery. She had enough time, and now their time had come.
It was much easier than she had ever expected. They put everything out there, even using their maiden names, and old school photographs. Not that Jenny would ever have appeared in any they had taken. Photos of their houses, and the streets where they lived. Groups of friends, their kids’ schools, and where they worked. If they had to work of course. A lot of them had married well, evidenced by photos of them sitting in smart convertibles, or by their swimming pools in obscenely large houses. Not all though. A few looked like they had drawn the short straw. Numerous divorces, struggling to get by. Even asking for handouts online.
No time to feel sorry for any of them though. The cuts had been too deep for sympathy.
Later that evening, she checked off her list. She had been looking for nine, and had found seven. The other two didn’t seem to be on Facebook, and would require more investigation. She phoned her boss at home, and told her the bad news. She would be off sick for the foreseeable future, and a medical certificate would arrive eventually. Meanwhile, she would use all her accrued holiday time. Pat had been sympathetic, but couldn’t disguise the coldness in her tone. Jenny knew that she would be thinking about getting cover for the Stoneman project, and that wouldn’t be easy.
Tough luck, Pat. Swivel on this, for all I care.
Online banking meant she could transfer all her savings into the current account. She would need cash to buy a car. One that she wouldn’t bother to register in her name. Then there would be the travelling money. Cheap hotels that took cash, and no need for credit cards. After that, Jenny threw away all the drugs she had been taking. They only made her feel sick anyway, and she was no longer going to prolong the inevitable.
A bath was more soothing than a shower, and she sat back into the fragrant hot water, thinking about her plans. She thought of the old fable of The Tortoise and The Hare.
Slow and steady wins the race.
Careful planning. Lots of preparation, and no stupid mistakes. Fortunately, she was bright enough for all that, and her mind was still sharp.
Sleep came easy that night. Something about making such a huge decision was actually comforting, and the worries of those last months seemed to all be behind her now. Not that there weren’t a few doubts swirling around in her mind as she drifted off. She wasn’t that young anymore, and her fitness level was poor. That would have to be factored in. But thanks to the wonders of the Internet, most things could be accomplished.
The next morning she put her hair up, slipped on a sweatshirt and jogging pants, then got busy. Maps to explore, directions to write down. Landmarks in new towns and villages she had never visited, nearby hotels and guest houses where nobody would take any notice of a woman alone. She smiled as she thought of all those books she had read during her life, the key to solving any crime.
Method, Motive, and Opportunity.
Well she certainly had a motive, but would it be that obvious to an outsider? A police detective trying to solve random cases might hit on such a motive as revenge, that was obvious. But how far back would they go? The opportunity would have to be created given any appropriate circumstances, and the method would be dictated by those.
Being caught was not a problem, not when you had nothing to lose. But being caught before she completed her task was the worry. It had to be all of them, or none of them.
Jenny didn’t feel up to eating any lunch.
Instead, she had a chocolate milkshake, and then went for an afternoon nap.
Oooh, I sense this is going to get very interesting!
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Thanks, Ami. I hope you enjoy it. π
Best wishes, Pete.
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My, my… hopeful sweet revenge. Iβm in!
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I hope you enjoy it, Jennie. π
Best wishes, Pete.
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Iβm sure I will, Pete. π
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Thinking like John! π This could be the start into a very dark story. However i hope you will create a Happy End. Michael
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Dark is a good description, Michael. π
Best wishes, Pete.
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A twisted beginning to what I expect will be another riveting tale through the darkness of the human mind…as soon as I wrote that I thought of erasing it, but it’s meant as a compliment – I think you know that!
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Very much taken as a compliment too! Thanks, John. π
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Looking forward to this one Pete.
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Glad to hear it, Jude. Part three tomorrow! π
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I am latetotheparty, but very intrigued.
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Thanks, Maggie Part two is out, Part Three tomorrow. π
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This is going to be good π
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I hope you enjoy it, Eduardo.
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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I only noticed ‘part one’ in the title of this post and this stopped me from begging for more. Such a brilliant beginning, one that deeply resonates with me, so literally dying to read more…
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Thanks very much. It will be a serial of up to 20 (or more) episodes. π
Best wishes, Pete.
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So looking forward to reading them…
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Part two out now. Part three tomorrow! π
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Good to catch the beginning of this one, Pete. Not sure if I’ll be able to read it along, but I’ll sure catch up with it, as it is very promising (I do love a revenge story, I must admit). It’s one of the things I’ve wondered about. If you knew for certain you only had a limited time to live (although I wonder here…) what would one do? I don’t think I’ll choose this path but…
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It’s not a new idea of course. Just my take on it.
Thanks, Olga.
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Great beginning, Pete. I love the lines, “Being caught was not a problem, not when you had nothing to lose. But being caught before she completed her task was the worry.”
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Thanks, Pete. Part two coming up. π
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I love a good story about an evil vengeful woman. Way to go.
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Pleased to hear that, Elizabeth. Part Two tomorrow! π
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Yay a Pete serial, already guessing π looking forward to this!
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Guess away, FR. You could be right! π
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looking forward to the next part! π
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Out tomorrow, Wilma. π
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Another great beginning Pete. Iβm already hooked.
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Thanks, Kim. Part two tomorrow! π
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Another serial! I’ll make every effort to keep abreast of the story’s development.
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You couldn’t resist it, but I knew you wouldn’t. π
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A great start. I might have to wait until the end to read it all as I have visitors arriving for two weeks and won’t have time for blogs while I take them out and about.
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That’s OK, Mary. I hope you have better weather than us for your guests. It has just been raining harder than I have ever seen it rain in the UK!
Best wishes, Pete.
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I know, it’s the same here. I wish they’d come last week!
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These extremes of one thing or the other are becoming quite tiring, I confess.
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Hmm, this oneβs going to be interesting…..will she achieve all she wants while she still has enough stamina….
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Aye, there’s the rub. π
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Looking forward to the next part! π
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Thanks very much, Karolina. π
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Off to a good start, Pete.
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Thanks, GP. I hope you enjoy this serial. π
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I don’t know how you find the time or the energy but I’m glad you do. And I’m in for this ride π
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Thanks, Alex. It doesn’t take too much time. π
Best wishes, Pete.
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