This is the final part of a fiction serial, in 860 words.
Vera almost couldn’t believe her eyes. It was Les, though he was half the size he had been the last time she saw him. She had forgotten how tall he was, and as he swept her into his arms, her face pressed against his chest. Her first reaction was to scold him. “Leslie Reid, fancy you turning up when I look such a state. I had a new outfit ready and everything, and now I’m standing here with a scarf around my hair, and an old cotton dress on”.
Les kissed her, to shut her up.
At least the army had given him a new uniform, so he still looked smart. He had three stripes too, and as he had a cup of tea with Albert and Elsie he explained that he had been offered the job of Armoury Sergeant at Chelsea Barracks. “There’s married quarters too, a flat near Victoria Station”. Vera had been tidying herself up, and came back downstairs. She pulled a chair over next to Les, and sat holding his hand. He straightened up, and spoke seriously to Albert. “Mr Dodds, you know me and your Vera have talked about getting married before, but I would like to do the right thing, and ask if that’s okay with you”. Albert stood up, and offered his hand. “Welcome to the family, Les”.
Reaching into his trouser pocket, Les produced a small fold of tissue paper. He opened it, and showed Vera the gold band inside. “I can’t get an engagement ring just now, Vera. But this was my granny’s wedding ring, and if that’s alright with you, we can get it sized for you to wear on the day”. Vera was too happy to speak, and just nodded. Les had been busy, it turned out. He had been to St James’s church, and the vicar said he would marry them, even though they hardly ever went inside a church. He had booked the wedding for three weeks on Saturday, as the married quarters would be available the week before. He was getting help from his army mate Jimmy to sort out the flat once he had the keys, and Jimmy was also going to stand up as best man.
The next couple of weeks seemed to pass by in a blur for Vera. She handed in her notice at the jam factory, as she didn’t fancy the two-bus journey to and from work from Victoria. Besides, Les had said she wouldn’t need to work unless she wanted to, and he had even talked about them having a baby as soon as possible. Viv came round with her wedding dress, and between her and Elsie they managed to alter it to look nice on Vera. Roy had started back as a car mechanic, and there was a lot of work now people had started to get their cars back on the road. Despite all the rationing still being in force, including petrol, lots of people were eager to start trying to live as they had before the war. Les turned up with Jimmy one night to introduce him. He was from Newcastle, and nobody could understand his accent. They kept laughing at him, but he took it in good part.
Vera went with them to see the Victoria flat, and was most impressed. It had a small kitchen, an indoor bathroom, a decent-sized living room, and a big double bedroom. Les was getting it furnished by mostly buying second hand stuff from around the housing estate, but Vera didn’t care. It would be their place. Les still had to see the army doctor about his leg. There was a big bandage around where they had removed the ulcer, and it needed changing regularly. He was also booked in to see the dentist, as the poor diet had played havoc with his teeth. The German medics in the camp had pulled two of them out, after he complained of toothache. “No gas or anything, just one bloke holding me down while the other one yanked them out with what looked like electrical pliers”.
The wedding day weather was dull, but it didn’t rain. Vera walked to the church with her mum and dad, as they could see it from their front door. Viv met them there, with Roy and the boys, who were both looking smart with little bow ties on. Janet and baby Mildred were there with Les’s parents, and Uncle Ernie too. Teddy hadn’t been able to make it, as his ship was still in the far east. But he sent a telegram that arrived the day before. Les and Jimmy looked so smart in their number one uniforms, with peaked caps. But Elsie was upset to see they were not wearing the redcoats and bearskin hats like you saw outside the palace.
After the ceremony, they had sandwiches and drinks in The Coach and Horses. Uncle Ernie played the piano, and sung a lot of old favourite songs. Les had booked a taxi for six that evening. He had arranged an overnight hotel room and dinner at the Strand Palace Hotel. Said it was the least he could do, as there would be no honeymoon. Vera walked back home with her mum to change into her going away outfit of the green velvet dress and suede shoes. Elsie started to have a talk with her about men and sex, but Vera stopped her, touching her arm. “It’s alright mum, Les will be kind to me, I just know he will”.
As the taxi drove away that evening, Vera looked out of the window at the familiar streets where she would no longer be living.
Her life was finally beginning.
The End.
I loved this series from start to finish. The characters became familiar and I was cheering for Vera to have a chance with her love. Of course many of us were a little concerned that you might have an unpleasant surprise since we have followed you over time. But the man who loves Julie and Ollie showed his tender side in this series and I appreciated it very much.
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Well, you should have warned us that a tissue might be handy for this ending. You’re an old softy, Pete. Thanks for a delightful serial, all the way through. Best to you.
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I couldn’t have given them a sad ending now, could I?
Best wishes, Pete.
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No, you couldn’t have given us a sad ending. Best to you, Pete.
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A lovely series, Pete and a happy ending…it was a pleasurable read from start to finish 🙂 x
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Thanks for all your kind comments, Carol. I am so pleased that a lot of people really enjoyed this serial.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Many people did, Pete.. although it was a tale told about the war years.. There was, also that feeling of hope for the future.. Well done for a tale well told 😊x
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Wonderful series Pete.. thanks so much and really enjoyed meeting Vera.. x
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Glad to hear that, Sally. I am very happy that you caught up and enjoyed it.
Best ishes, Pete.
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One of your best series yet Pete. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it even if I didn’t comment on every one. I hope Vera and her Les had a happy life, I imagine for a lot of couples it didn’t always work out. I once had a Geordie boyfriend and couldn’t understand a word he said, but he did make me laugh!
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Thanks, Jude. This was a pleasure for me to write, as it was about people I knew as a child, and set in the area I lived until I was 15. (Names and jobs changed of course)
Best wishes, Pete.
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This was a very interesting and with historical information heavy loaded serial, Pete. But is was a pleasure to read every episode. Honestly i have to re-read some, because my vocabulary is not as big as it should be. Thank you very much for your efforts on this too. Michael
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Thanks very much, Michael. If it made sense to you in a foreign language, that is very pleasing to me.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thank you Pete!
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I loved the “they lived happily ever after implication.” Warmest regards, Theo
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Thanks, Theo. Yes, it was implied, as we will never know. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I really enjoyed this serial Pete, and for someone who doesn’t tend to write many happy endings, this was lovely. Well done!👏🏻
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Thanks, Kim. I think we all needed a happy ending at the moment.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I loved this series, Pete, and what a great ending!
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Glad you liked the happy ending, Sue. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I did…after all your characters had endured
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Terrific story Pete…
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Thanks, John. I appreciate all the comments and tweets too. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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(1a) “It was Les, though he was half the size he had been the last time she saw him.” Vera reached down and patted his little head. “I couldn’t care less, Les.”
(1b) Bad citation: “She had forgotten how tall the little munchkin once was.”
(1c) “Les kissed her, to shut her up.” Vera wiggled a bit, and said, “Please, Les. Not down there!”
(2) “He had three stripes too..and…explained that he had been offered the job of Armoury Sergeant at Chelsea Barracks.” They say that an officer cannot change his stripes, but once Les was at the base, he proved that the old idiom was baseless.
(3) Albert stood up, and offered his hand to Les, but Les couldn’t shake it. “Let go my hand, Vera! Let go!”
(4) Jimmy sang so well at the wedding that he was soon in high demand, and became known as the Groom’s Marriage Crooner. But GMC Jimmy suddenly lost favor when he bought a Ford F-3.
(5) “Vera almost couldn’t believe her eyes.” … “The next couple of weeks seemed to pass by in a blur for Vera.” Vera began to suspect that she needed prescription lenses.
(6) Bad citation: “Vera went with them to see the Crown Victoria’s flat. She laughed, because Roy was a mechanic. And yet there he was, unable to fix a simple flat tire!”
(7a) “Les still had to see the army doctor about his leg.” As it turned out, Dr. Tolkien had to amputate the “leg o’ Les.”
(7b) The German medics held Les down, and yanked out his teeth with electrical pliers. They no longer use that outdated technology, though. Now the pliers are powered by a lithium battery.
(8) “At least the army had given him a new uniform, so he still looked smart.” … “the boys…who were both looking smart with little bow ties on.” … “Les and Jimmy looked so smart in their number one uniforms.” I don’t want to be a smart ass, but looks can be deceiving.
(9) “Les had booked a taxi for six that evening.” It’s not gonna be a honeymoon with six. It’s gonna be an orgy!
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You did well introducing the car references, David.
‘Smart’ was deliberately overused. When I was young, people went on about looking ‘smart’ all the time. They placed great value on appearance, perhaps because they had very little else. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Bravo, Pete, bravo. Ans thanks for helping us realize that these times today are tough but people manage to get through tough times.
Have a good vacation.
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Thanks very much, Don. I appreciate all your kind comments about this serial.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I enjoyed this series so much Pete and thankful too for a happy ending!
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The ending was similar to the real-life one I based my characters on. So it was always going to be a happy one. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Life needs happy endings, especially these days!
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Exactly. 🙂
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Great series Pete, much enjoyed, bit of a soppy ending for you though 🙂
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I had to base it on what really happened to the real people I used as the guidelines for my characters. And that was more or less what did. If I had killed one of them off in an accident, people would have been upset about that. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I so enjoyed this serial, Pete. You brought to vivid life what it was like for ordinary families during the war years. I hope Louis came back for Janet 🙂
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Thanks, Mary. I left the readers to decide whether or not Louis returned. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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You’ve done a great job with this story. That whole era came alive with your vivid details. Loved the last sentence 🙂
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Thanks very much, Margie. I am so pleased that you liked the story.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Good story, Pete. I have to admit, I was one who didn’t trust you on the ending. I thought sure you’d give it a twist go with a horror finale.
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This was all based on real people and events, GP. There is a lot of my mum and her older sister in Vera and Viv, and one of their cousins married a Canadian soldier who had to go home and then come back for her. (She wasn’t pregnant though) I didn’t want to have a horrible ending, as it wouldn’t have been true to what happened in real life for those people at the time.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Your family comes from strong stock!!
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My mum and her sister were in that part of London for the whole war, all through the bombing. They didn’t work in the factories mentioned, though those factories existed. Their husbands were nothing like Roy and Les though, and there was no Uncle Ernie. As they say in the films, ‘Based on’. 🙂
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Great story Pete but did Janet’s American come back to claim her? I suspect not.
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I had to leave something open, Lucinda. I decided to make it Janet and Louis. 🙂
The reader decides!
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh rats!
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Well Bravo Pete, I’ve so enjoyed this series. You’ve outdone yourself with all the little details and the emotional rollercoaster this time must have caused for everyone. It’s been a joy to read.
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Thanks, FR. I am very pleased that you enjoyed it so much.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I missed most of this lovely story, as my life has not been my own lately but adored the ending!
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Thanks for coming back for the end. I hope things are improving for you a little now.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Much better than they were, Pete!
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Sue is looking forward to the whole thing posted…..she always enjoys your stories….chuq
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Thanks, chuq. I will try to do that tomorrow, as long as the block editor isn’t forced on me this weekend.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I will pass it on to Sue…thanx chuq
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Wow, what a ending👌 Great story and I liked it!
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Thanks very much, Richa. A happy ending, for a change. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Nice story, with plenty of authentic detail. Well done, Pete. cheers, Jon.
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Thanks, Jon. Glad to hear you found it authentic.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Excellent story and a lovely ending, Pete 👍😃
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Thanks very much, Chris. I appreciate you sticking with it. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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