My latest serial concluded on Sunday with Part 24. One of my shorter serials, constricted by the need to have the ‘showdown’ that was necessary for the story.
I would like to thank Jon at https://wilfredbooks.wordpress.com/ for his first line suggestion that started it. This was the first time I have used a ‘first line’ outside of a short story, and I felt it needed a longer serial to do it justice.
Some readers will be aware that my inspirations for the style of this story came from various well established detective fiction, ‘Cosy’ mysteries, and some TV shows. I had in mind the Agatha Christie ‘Miss Marple’ stories, the old TV series ‘Tales Of The Unexpected’, and more modern detective television shows such as ‘Murder She Wrote’, and ‘Midsomer Murders’.
There were quite a few characters, as well as a second plot involving characters from a book being written by the main protagonist. Old-school detective stories always seemed to have a lot of characters, and most of them were suspects at one time or another. They also usually feature some kind of showdown, everyone assembled in a room as the hero explains how he solved the case.
This time, I tried to turn that around, with the suspects explaining to the hero how he ended up where he did. On the way, I gave few clues, and took readers on a tour of some nice parts of southern England as the main character was given the run around on a circular wild goose chase. I had a lot of fun writing this, and attempted to inject some humour too.
It was well-received, with views never dropping below 110 for each episode, and some parts exceeding 130 views. Total views so far, given a score of 120 per episode, come to 2,880. Different parts are still being viewed as I type this, so I am confident the whole serial will have reached 3,000 views soon. As well as that, comment engagement was very good. Some readers tried to guess the outcome too, which is always rewarding.
Extra thanks to everyone who shared any part on social media, which is always appreciated.
I have the first part of the next serial already written, but I will give everyone a chance to catch up before I start that one. This week, I will compile all 24 parts into one complete story, for those of you that like to read the whole thing at once.
Best wishes to everyone, Pete.
Thank you for your efforts writing such a very impressive novel, Pete! I enjoyed it very much, even though sometimes i could not guess where it will lead me. 😉 xx Michael
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Thanks very much, Michael.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I love your serials, Pete!
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Thanks, Jennie. The new one starts soon! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Hooray!
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Nice to see that everyone stayed for the whole journey – I particular enjoyed his passion for food – until the end at least!
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Thanks, John. I can’t deny that your food posts were an inspiration for Jon being an epicurean.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Plot twists aside, I’d like to compliment you on your fine writing skills.
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Thanks very much, David.
Best wishes, Pete.
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it was a amzing serial
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Thanks very much. I am happy that you enjoyed it.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Another fun story Pete.
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Glad you liked it, Carolyn.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Still shocked about that ending. Thoroughly enjoyed it, Pete 🙂
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Thanks, Ami. You being shocked about the ending is music to my old ears! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I did enjoy it and loved all the characters. I enjoy Midsomer Murders and started watching it when we lived in Canada. A popular series there as well. Perhaps you should send them a story idea!
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I confess that I never watch it, Darlene. I think it is rather silly for mainstream entertainment. 🙂
I was happy to try to include some of that silliness in my story though. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Hubby thinks it’s silly as well. He likes grittier crime drama. Something for everyone!
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Do you watch ‘Line of Duty’? That’s much more my thing.
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We haven’t watched that one but we like Lewis and Endeavour and of course before that Morse. I also watched the latest Dalgliesh and liked it. Another one I really liked was Foyles War, but then I like the historical aspect as well.
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I am a fan of all those. Dalgliesh was old-fashioned, but in a good way. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Enjoyed this one, looking forward to read more such series!
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Thanks, Devangi. The next serial will be starting later this week. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Am eagerly awaiting the next one!
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Part one is already written. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Once again, you’re most welcome for the inspiration of my first line, Pete: I knew you’d do a good job with it—much better than I would have been able to. I know my limitations, and one of them is that I can’t write good fiction! I look forward to reading through the compilation, and savouring all the details. Cheers, Jon.
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Thanks, Jon. The next serial has a very different theme.
Best wishes, Pete.
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it was really enjoyable, filled with twists and tours and unusual people. you are very good at this form of writing and look forward to the next one.
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Thanks very much for your kind words, Beth.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I’m one that waits until all parts are posted 😁 I am super excited to read this!
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Thanks, WB. It might be posted tomorrow, if I get some free time this evening. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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