Reblogging this short story from 2016 for any new followers since then who may not have seen it.
This is a work of fiction, a short story of 1200 words.
Astrid didn’t want to die. She was only fourteen, after all. Surely too young to face this?
After the headaches had come the double vision, then the vomiting. She could no longer cope with school, and not long after that, her mum gave up work to look after her. Sometimes, Astrid screamed for hours. Those times when nothing would take away the pain in her head. She would tremble in her mother’s arms, pleading for relief.
Her mum Barbara was at the end of her tether. Astrid was her only child, and she had never expected this. Only three months before, they had argued, like any mum and teenage daughter. Astrid was doing well at school, and was the leading light of the soccer team. She had the occasional fit of hysteria, mostly when she was refused permission…
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Very poignant, Pete. I don’t remember that story. I commented on your site.
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Thanks very much for reading, Jennie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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My pleasure, Pete. Best to you.
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You foxed me again with that ending Pete 👍👍👍👍👍
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Thanks, Chris. I am always happy to surprise.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I see that I did comment on this at the time, but for the life of me I couldn’t recall reading it! Senility beckons…
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Thanks, Jude. Six years is a long time, I am the same when it comes to memory for things like this.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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I don’t think I’d ever read it at the time. Very good and chilling!
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Thanks very much, Olga.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Don’t remember that one Pete. They may as well done the organ retrieval when she died and saved the money!
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I expect the laws had changed by the time she was thawed out. I think you commented on the original. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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2016 is a dim and distant memory for me!
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You are not alone!
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