This is the fourth part of a fiction serial, in 872 words.
Work at the insurance company was easy enough. I received claim forms for all sorts of things, wrote them up properly on company documents, checked the policy was valid for what they were claiming, then stamped a box at the bottom of the form before putting it in a tray for the manager to countersign. I worked in a large building right in the centre of the city, in a divided office with five others. I was the youngest by a mile, but the girl who typed up our letters was only twenty.
She was engaged, and never stopped talking about her boyfriend. No chance.
Hours were nine-to five, no weekends of course. Most days I could get away by just after four-thirty, as long as the day’s pile of claim forms had all been checked and stamped. We had an hour for lunch, and I was given one ’til two. That suited me, as it made the afternoon fly by. And we had a staff restaurant that served good meals at subsidised prices. The salary was average, but considering my age, it was enough for what I needed. My mum and dad said I had to give them housekeeping, but when I got my first month’s salary, mum said not to bother until next month.
Now I had my own money, I spent it on clothes and records. The old portable record-player in my bedroom had never seen so much action, and my suits were on trend with fashion. The typist told me she thought I looked nineteen, when I still wasn’t seventeen for a couple of months.
The Four Musketeers were not the same though. Johnny was insufferably cocky, and working one stall on his own seven days a week. I saw Terry now and again, but stopped going to his house because of Alice. If she saw me on the street she used to turn bright red, and cross the road. I had a soft spot for her, as she would always be my first. She was also going to be the mother of my child.
It felt strange to think of that, so I didn’t.
Keith was busy, planning to take three A-levels and study PPE at University College London when he was eighteen. He had to tell me what PPE was. Philosophy, Politics, and Economics. That sounded a lot for one qualification, too much for me. It wasn’t that I lacked intelligence. I just lacked motivation and application. At least he wouldn’t have to leave home to attend university. One bus and a ten-minute walk would get him there.
With Terry plumbing twelve hours a day, and his mum a no-go, and Johnny on the markets all weekend, I started to spend more time at Keith’s when I wasn’t working. He wasn’t that interested in going to the pub or the cinema, so it was a bit boring sitting in his living room with his mum and dad while they all trapped on about how well he was going to do at university. Then again, my house was like a mortuary most of the time, with mum and dad staring into space, and my brother Kevin smiling down from his photo above the mantlepiece.
There was a bonus at Keith’s too. Susan. Almost five years older than me, she still looked great. But Susan had missed the boat, so it seemed. All those years of being choosy had come home to roost. Most of her friends had boyfriends, and some were already married. One of them even had two kids. She was still at the jam factory, and still living at home. Then after my seventeenth birthday, she noticed me. Really noticed me.
One Saturday afternoon, she answered the door. “Keith’s out. He’s visiting my nan with mum and dad. He shouldn’t be long though, you can come in and wait if you want”.
I did want.
Sitting in the front room listening to music, she gave me a funny look. “You’re quite the young man now, Danny. Very grown up. How come you don’t have a girlfriend yet?” I shrugged, and replied that I hadn’t seen anyone I fancied. She leapt on that. “Well you always fancied me, no point denying that. Don’t think I have forgotten you looking up my skirt all the time, or sitting too close to me on the setee. You might as well have been holding up a sign”. She was full of herself, but undeniably right.
So she had known all along. I let the conversation hang in the air for a while, waiting to see what happened. I didn’t have to wait long.
“Your job at the insurance company sounds good. You will get promotion if you stick at it, and a decent pension later too. You have quite a lot to offer someone. How come you have never asked me out?” She didn’t wait for a reply. “If it’s the age difference, that doesn’t matter to me. It won’t seem so much when we are older”. She patted the seat next to her. “You can kiss me if you like, I don’t mind”. I moved over to sit next to her.
Twenty minutes later, Susan was my first girlfriend.
Okay, I’m in catch up mode. I was visiting my daughter in New York and returned home with a cold that sort of took me down. So I’m going to enjoy reading the series! Hugs, C
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Thanks for catching up, Cheryl. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Within the years situations are changing, and friendships turn to partnerships, or will end. Great that he now has his first girlfriend. xxx Michael
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Friendships do change over time, undoubtedly.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I’m glad he and Susan are dating, yet I have a feeling things will go awry. I’m worried about the baby.
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Alice will have her baby, and it will be raised as if nothing unusual had happened. Fear not, Jennie.
Best wishes, Pete.
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That is a relief to know. Best to you, Pete.
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Ahhhhh so there might be bodies…xx
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Readers always want bodies! 🙂 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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This is set before all that. I am deliberately unspecific about the date, but it will become apparent later.
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(1) Danny was the youngest by a mile. That’s 1.60934 kilometers.
(2) As reported by H.G. Wells, the gentleman scientist/inventor wrote this in his notebook: “I watched the afternoons fly by, the evenings fly by, the mornings fly by. That suited me, as I didn’t want to waste time twiddling my thumbs in the time machine.”
(3) Bad citation: “The old portable record-player in my bedroom had never seen so much action, even though I only played adagios and dirges.”
(4) Bad citation: “If Alice saw me on the street she turned bright red, causing drivers to slam on the brakes.”
(5) PPE stands for Personal Protective Equipment. Not only does it fend off viruses, it also fends off toxic politicians, wacko philosophers, and doom-and-gloom economists.
(6) Bad citation: “The Jupiter 2 was like a mortuary most of the time, with mum and dad staring into space, Judy and Penny getting their cryogenic beauty sleep, Major West studying the space charts, and Mr. Smith playing the Who Will Blink First? game with the robot.” (Will Robinson)
(7) Danny falling for Susan? He’s cruisin’ for an emotional bruisin’.
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Ah, ‘Lost In Space’. Happy memories of watching that. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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This an autobiography Pete?
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One part is. The rest is fiction. (I’m not saying which part. 🙂 )
Best wishes, Pete. x
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So now almost two musketeers. Warmest regards, Ed
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They may reunite occasionally, Ed.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I like the coming-of-age vibe of your story and that it doesn’t solely focus on Danny but also seems to be following his buddies’ lives.
I smiled at the line, “Twenty minutes later, Susan was my first girlfriend.” It doesn’t take long for us guys to find “true love.”
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Glad you are enjoying the build-up, Pete.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Waiting to see what happens when the baby arrives. This could be quite a soap opera and I haven’t forgotten the revenge…
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The revenge on Terry was the fortunate opportunity to get his mum pregnant. Other revenge awaits!
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This story is moving along.
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Glad you think so, Molly.
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Let’s hope Susan doesn’t end up ‘in the club’ as well, lol.
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She didn’t go ‘all the way’, as you will discover soon. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Somebody better warn Susan that her boyfriend has sperm that can work in just one application.
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I remember so many times when ‘once was enough’, Don. Many of my friends fell foul of that.
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Apart fromm Danny getting his end away I have no idea where this is going. Where’s the bodies?? 😀
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It’s only part four! 🙂
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Yay!
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I’m sure Danny said that too. 🙂
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😀😀
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