This is the thirteenth part of a fiction serial, in 810 words.
I could see Toni waiting outside the fish and chip shop. Even out of school uniform, she still looked much the same. Black top, black bomber jacket, and a skirt that was a little too short for comfort.
There was someone with her. Small, skinny, and smoking a cigarette. As I got closer, Toni beamed one of her big smiles, and I suddenly saw that the person with her was older, with a very lined face, small eyes, and a rather hooked nose. For some reason, it didn’t occur to me it was her mother. But I soon found out it was.
Her Irish accent was thick, but I could make out what she was saying, along with the no-nonsense tone of her voice.
“So youse the boy? Well you’re good looking, so you are. Now listen here. You can buy my Antonia her dinner, then maybe walk around the park with her a bit. She tells me she really likes you, and I can see why. But no funny business, or you’ll have me to deal with, y’hear?” I nodded, and she flicked the cigarette butt into the kerb before continuing.
“Now snogging’s acceptable, so’s hand holding and cuddling. But nuttin’ else. She’s too young”. I nodded again, and she walked off. Turning to her daughter, she smiled and pointed at her. “Now you be home by dark girl, y’hear?”
Toni chose haddock and chips, and I went with chicken pie and chips, as I didn’t want to have fishy breath. I bought drinks too, two plastic bottles of Pepsi. We walked along to the middle of the small shopping precinct and sat on a bench to eat our food straight from the paper it was wrapped in. Neither of us had ever been on a date, and we didn’t really have a clue what to say. Between bites, Toni looked at me and smiled, and when she had finished eating, she suddenly said. “I really like you, Danny”.
She had called me Danny! I didn’t even have to ask her, she called me it straight off.
Naturally I told her I really liked her too, and made no mention of her scary mum, or her criminal father. When I suggested we walk to the park, she took my hand as we stood up, no prompting. With the lighter evenings, the park was still busy, and we walked around the other side of the lake to the quieter part away from the playground full of tired and noisy kids.
Away from the path, we sat under a big tree, finishing our Pepsis. She was still holding my hand, and after looking around to see if anyone was nearby, she leaned forward and said, “You can kiss me if you like. I want you to, it’s okay”.
Experience with Uncle Brian had taught me more than I really wanted to know about kissing, to be honest. But I was keen to try it with a girl. I started out slowly, building up to using my tongue, but it was clear she had no idea how to kiss, and was mainly just rubbing her lips over mine in a random fashion. I slowed her down, suggested she open her mouth a little, and ten minutes later we were having a full-on snogging session. My first ‘girl in the park snog’, not bad for twelve years old.
After that, her face was flushed, and she couldn’t stop smiling. I wanted to take my mind off the uncomfortable stirring in my loins, so asked if she wanted another drink. We had passed an ice-cream van on the way from the lake, and I knew it would sell drinks. She nodded, and released my hand so I could go off and buy them. When I turned back to look at her as I was walking away, she actually waved at me, calling out “Don’t be long”.
At this rate, we would be engaged to be married before it got dark.
When I got back with the two exhorbitantly priced cans of Coke, Toni was standing up, surrounded by a small gang of girls. One of them was Sophie, and one of the others who I didn’t recognise was pushing Toni. Pushing her hard. I ran up and put the cans on the grass, pulling the girl away from Toni so she couldn’t reach to push her. Sophie spoke up, her tone sounded spiteful.
“So I do you the favour of asking you out, and instead you choose this Irish slag over me”. She turned to Toni. “You’re finished, believe me”. I told them all to clear off and leave Toni alone, putting my arm round her to emphasise the fact she was under my protection. As they walked away, Sophie turned round and gave us the finger. I grinned.
Sophie was going to have to go.
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Sophie doesn’t know but she’s playing with fire! I’m afraid she’s about to burn! 🔥C
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She should have kept her dignity. But after all, she is only 12. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Not really a problem for Danny to kill her, i think. xx Michael – P.S.: I love your introduction to the Irish slang. 😉 xx Michael
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It is their way of talking in Ireland, Michael.
Best wishes, Pete.
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You have to be used to it. But the dialect is even worse here. Here it sounds like the barking of dogs. Lol xx Michael
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Sophie, you should have let it go.
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She definitely should have, Jennie. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Best to you, Pete.
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ohh another victim and he found the one he likes
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Yes, Sophie’s days are numbered, and he does really like Toni.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh, dear…exit Sophie…
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She’s next on his list! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete. x
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(1) Ireland is known for potatoes. Antonia was a love interest of Captain Kirk, whom he met in 2282 while horseback riding near his uncle’s farm in Idaho. Idaho is known for potatoes.
(2) A skinny lady with a thick accent?
(3) I went to a chicken farm once on Christmas Eve. After drinking a glass of spiked milk punch, I went out to the hen house to watch the eggs snog.
(4) When it comes to dating, Danny’s no chicken. But there’s something fishy about Toni.
(5) Heavens to Murgatroyd! That girl Toni is a real snogglepuss!
(6) Bad citation: “After that, Toni couldn’t stop smiling. And Danny had to cope with priapism.”
(7) Pepsi and Coke? They should be drinking Virgin Cola. (That is, until they discontinue their virginity.)
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Nice to be reminded of Snagglepuss. “Exit, stage left!”
Best wishes, Pete.
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only a matter of time now…
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Sophie needs to make her peace… 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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I hope for her sake she does
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No ifs no buts, just when and how 🙂
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He has a plan worked out already.
Cheers, Pete.
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Strike three! Sophie has no idea. Would Daniel be bold enough to ask Sophie out so that he can do the deed? Would Sophie say yes if Daniel showed interest in her?
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I suspect it might be a yes to both of those, Pete.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Oh, you shouldn’ta done that, Sophie. You’re in for it now . . .
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She should have known better, but she is only 12.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Hopefully, her demise won’t be too gruesome.
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So what unforeseen catastrophe will befall that little charmer?
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Oh, that remains to be seen, Carolyn. 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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Look out, Sophie!
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Too late. She is in his sights now.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Yippee next victim in da house!
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She should have left well enough alone! 🙂
Best wishes, Pete.
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